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Blarging In reply to Deltathewolf [2011-11-25 16:19:16 +0000 UTC]

Not for long you won't...

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Template93 In reply to Zexoguy [2011-10-12 20:56:54 +0000 UTC]

which part?

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Zexoguy In reply to Template93 [2011-10-12 21:12:40 +0000 UTC]

The key was down a well with no crank, so she had to go back to town to get the crank out of the sobbing pony's house. Remember?

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Template93 In reply to Zexoguy [2011-10-12 21:36:31 +0000 UTC]

ya i do. for the sake of the comic though i chose this approach. There are reasons for me doing this. yes i may have been a little lazy but by removing the crank i saved my self maybe an extra 8-12, if not more pages. why so much? first the ruby would have to be moved later past page 14 and would be around page 19-22. then with that i would have to sketch Applebloom going back to Roneo to give im the gem. that would also eliminate a reason for asking Gladstone why no one has a cutie mark because she would be focused on the gem, not if everyone seems normal. then I would have to draw the whole puzzel in the building Roneo was by witch would add more pages to the comic (only if i go exactly by the game). plus she would then find Mitta and a crank. more then likely she would ignore the crank,and worry about Mitta. then Applebloom leaves, if she left with the crank then she would not be able to talk to Three leaf and just be walking around with a crank in her mouth, cuz how else would she carry it, or have reasone to carry it. then when she finally gets to the old house, how would she be able to know that a key was in the well, if she could find it, and know that it goes to the door. for that i might have had her look for other ways in. with that one simple event, i'v just added a lot of pages, got rid of pages, replaced and changed dialog and the order of it being given. with the way i have it set up, i makes it easier on me and keeps a steady pace for the comic. in one of my journals i did say that i would change a few things, and what ever changes i make to the story, will possibly have reason for when my next comic comes out. not to sound rude either but thats just my opinion.

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Zexoguy In reply to Template93 [2011-10-12 22:06:54 +0000 UTC]

You do make some good points. Like even if she did see the key in the well, how would she know to go back for the crank? I saw the point for saving pages, especially when you have so little on each page.

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Template93 In reply to Zexoguy [2011-10-12 22:44:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you for your understanding.

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