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Description Completed the "Profile" assignment for the Ninth Round in OC-training 's "Profile Task"!

Many of you correctly guessed that the firebird plays a prominent role in Gerda's life! And thanks to everyone for showing their support for Gerda!


Three Words summing her personality: Kind, Nurturing, Tenacious


Basic Profile:

Name: Gerda (Gerda Priborevna)


Age: 38 years old

Height: 5'1 (154.94 cm)

Weight: 182 lbs. (82.5 kg)

Ethnicity: A fantasy equivalent of Kievan Rus and Old Norse

Language: A fantasy equivalent of Old Norse with heavy Slavic influences

Time Range: A fantasy equivalent of the Kievan Rus collective and Scandinavian Viking Age


Occupation: Midwife, healer, and mage (Vedma)


Summary:


Gerda (Gerda Priborevna), an ordinary midwife and healer faces the upheaval as Feudalism establishes its rule. The knowledge of magic and magic healing is passed through Gerda's family, and Gerda studies diligently under her father and grandmother.

However, despite being learned mages, her family chooses to lead an ordinary life through farming and animal-keeping.


Gerda's family remembers a time when people openly embraced magic and the alliance of the Other Folk (Fae).


However, because many human mages and sorcerers abused their powers, this caused conflict between the magic-wielders/scholars and non-magic people. As result, non-magic people developed a distrust and disdain for magic practitioners, though reluctantly accepted magic-healing. Some nobles sought particularly gifted sorcerers and mages for their powers- to employ their powers in conflicts or battles.


Magic practitioners began dissolving their connections with the Other Folk, as the Other Folk began distancing their connection with the human world because they feared human conflict and maladies would invade their own world.


Nonetheless, Gerda, growing into an eager mage, has always possessed the gift of sight, that is, she can see and hear the Other Folk clearly. As a child, she befriended many a variety of the Other Folk, from the common small fae to the gigantic spirits of hills and mountains.

Time from time, she could call upon an Other Folk to aid her and her family, such as with a bad harvest or finding a cure for an illness or wound.



But as she grew older, the time for magic waned, and under her father and grandmother's warning, Gerda lessened her use of magic and concealed her abilities, as well as her alliance with the Other Folk.


Gerda became a midwife and healer. When Feudalism claimed her area, she found herself living in a serf village where her skills were in high demand. Her feudal overlord arranged a marriage with a woodcutter.


Though she knew love was a luxury only her parents knew in the past, Gerda was grateful her husband was a lifeless sort who ignored her for the most part. She witnessed many a peasant woman wedded to men who saw them as child-bearing punching bags.


One joy Gerda gleaned from her feudal life was the birth of her two sons. Her husband more or less ignored their sons, save for being grateful his wife gave him two sons instead of daughters.


Gerda always feared becoming deadened and hard as the peasants were. The daily grind of life dried any life or meaning in their lives. Gerda battled to keep heart under such an existence. She poured all her energy in her sons's welfare and those of children and infants in the village. She often served as a wet-nurse for tired, worn-out mothers, and often kept little ones while their parents tended fields.


When her husband passed away from an illnesses she could not cure, Gerda is sent to another village to work as their healer and midwife.


There, she is taken in by a reclusive, taciturn shepherd. A year passes. She and the shepherd marry. She learns her new husband isn't the common shepherd he appears to be. He was actually a powerful sorcerer who abused his power. To atone for his wrongs, he chooses to live an ordinary life as a shepherd. He also serves as the village undertaker.


Gerda finds happiness with the sorcerer turned shepherd, as she can share true nature and abilities, while her sons form a tight-knit with the quiet man, considering him more of a father than their own blood-father.


Her new husband teaches her more in depth of magic, including a powerful brand of magic she could use to protect herself and the boys.


For several years, Gerda and her family live in contentment. But when a noble wages war with another noble, the noble learns of her husband's true nature and orders his capture. The noble intends to use her husband for his powers to win battles.

Her husband escapes the noble's men, but is later found dead.


When word reaches the village of his death and the truth of his actual identity, the villagers reject and treat Gerda with disdain and suspicion.


The village, a month later, devastated by a plague that kills primarily the children, the villagers turn on Gerda. They assume, she being a sorcerer's wife, is a malevolent sorceress herself and cursed their children with the deadly illness, esp since Gerda's attempts to heal the children failed.


Because of their gratitude to her in the past (and fearing a great curse), they eschew killing, but choose to flog and drive she and her children from their village.


Gerda is flogged with the knout, and endures her punishment resignedly. But when the villagers attack and attempt to flog her sons, Gerda experiences rage for the first time. She employs a special spell her second husband imparted to her- she becomes a powerful firebird. Snatching her sons, she soars away from the village, her wingspan setting their roofs on fire in raging retribution for their persecution against her sons.


Escaping to the forest, a wounded Gerda transforms to her human self, terrified of her own powers and reeling in guilt of extracting so harsh a revenge on her neighbors.


Weakened from her injuries, her sons care for her and find a cave for shelter. There, a mother bear and her cubs willingly share their cave with the fleeing mother and sons.


A half-recovered Gerda realizes she and her sons must traverse far from the land and forge a new life. Along the way, they encounter a widowed mage who offers them a place in her cottage. But the news of Gerda's firebird transformation has reached many a noble's ear, and now many nobles ordered their men to capture Gerda. They wish to use her in battle.


When some noble's men raid the widowed mage's house, they kill the mage, and nearly capture Gerda and her sons-but Gerda again transforms into the firebird and escapes with her sons.


Winter is at its harshest pinnacle. Gerda and her sons trudge through snow and ice-choked forests. No allies, no shelter, food or relief in sight, Gerda desperately tries to keep her sons alive.


When the frost begins to claim their lives, Gerda sees the very reaper assigned to death by frost- the Frost Lord. She defends her sons against the great reaper, and the reaper, impressed with her tenacity, spares their lives- on the condition they serve him.


Seeing no way out alive, Gerda accepts the Frost Lord's proposal.


Spirited away to the world of the Other Folk, Gerda and her sons learn their way through this new world and find their own place.


But what is her ultimate fate? What is the fate of her sons? And her bond with the Frost Lord-what fate will that weave?

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Comments: 41

LordCherryPaw [2018-10-09 22:41:47 +0000 UTC]

Β Pretty woman...Walkin down the street...

*Ahem*....


Very good!!! Love how it all came out. ^^

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Tete-DePunk In reply to LordCherryPaw [2018-10-10 01:40:32 +0000 UTC]

AWW! Thanks so much! Gerda IS indeed a pretty woman!


Thanks so much!

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LordCherryPaw In reply to Tete-DePunk [2018-10-11 16:07:58 +0000 UTC]

No problem. ^w^

Keep up the good work!

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WafflenutOfKitties [2018-09-27 01:33:54 +0000 UTC]

Whoa dang that sucks, practically every dude she's hung out with, married or not, has ended up dead.

But very interesting backstory going on! How old are her sons now that they're all working for the Frost Lord?

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Tete-DePunk In reply to WafflenutOfKitties [2018-09-28 00:34:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, not every dude, per se. It's just life. She finds happiness with the Frost Lord, ironically, and he's reaper.


Her sons are 11 and 7, respectively.

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TaintedTruffle [2018-09-26 08:05:48 +0000 UTC]

what nice red hair and so long ~ you did a good job making her look like a mother and not a young beautiful characterΒ 

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Tete-DePunk In reply to TaintedTruffle [2018-09-26 18:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Gerda's glad to hear people here respond positively to her red hair- in her human lifetime, most humans distrust others red-haired humans because of superstitions.


It's not often to see a mother in the role of a main protagonist, instead of being relegated to a background character or being used to motivate the other characters. It's rewarding to work with an older woman character who doesn't conform to the usual stunningly beautiful female protagonist character tropes.

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TaintedTruffle In reply to Tete-DePunk [2018-09-27 19:31:18 +0000 UTC]

*nod* I agree. It is good.Β 

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pandalamaa [2018-09-21 11:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Ooh I've been seeing so many pictures of her on your instagram, and I honestly can't stop admiring this character of yours!
And her story, wow I can't seem to find one story of yours I don't think feels immensely original and interesting! What a troublesome life with many hardships, it would make into such a wonderful book series!
I wish I could write an even more detailed comment, but I'm just speechless, the story never quite goes as one would expect it would, there is always something new happening~Β 
And her character design overall is just beautiful~ I love all the details and comments you make on them, like the scars from the flogging, the fiery eyebrows and freckles~
Just a lovely work on a very interesting character!

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Tete-DePunk In reply to pandalamaa [2018-10-02 20:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Dear Amanda, deeply sorry yet again for the late reply!


Your feedback, gosh, words can't describe how grateful I am to you for taking time to provide such thoughtful, indepth, and ultimately helpful and sorely needed feedback!


Really? You admire Gerda? Thank you! I really worried for her- esp since Andrei was such a success, I worried Gerda wouldn't inspire the same reaction as Andrei had.


Thank you! It means so much to hear you really appreciate the stories! I live for stories, to read them, and to create them. To know someone appreciates the effort and labor placed in these stories, it means the greatest treasure in the world. I do not exxagerater when I say this, Amanda.


Really? Well, this is actually going to become a book series soon! More like a collection of light novels! And there will be side stories with side characters as well.


Thank you so much- it's rare to see a character who is a mother who is not reduced to a secondary character or a background character. (Most of the time, this cannot be avoided, but it would be nice to see more active parent characters) And likewise, seeing older women be the main protagonist who don't fit the usual model, Gerda turned out to be a refreshing deviation from the usual tropes.Β  And despite not fitting with social standards of beauty, Gerda, has, as you pointed out, her own beauty!


The details provide insight into her life, though I was a bit reluctant to show the flogging scars, since I worried it might be too graphic. But since this was a major catalyst in her life, it seemed absolutely necessary to show this detail that is a huge part of her self.


Thanks so much again, Amanda! Expect more of Gerda and her story!

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DihyaJam96 [2018-09-19 21:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful story, and from some point of view she reminds me of the real midwife from history. I really appreciate this, in the 1500 midwives were accused to use magical powers, I see you made a good research for create Gerda

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Tete-DePunk In reply to DihyaJam96 [2018-09-19 22:03:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.


Yes, you are so totally right! I really hoped someone would understand the historical references within Gerda and the context of the villagers' reaction and accusations against her.


Yes, although her culture is inspired by Norse and Old Rus cultures, where sorcery was less persecuted and feared, (feared more for its political machinations and hardly of the "devil/sexual craze" perpetuated by Mainland Western Europe)Β  and viewed as primarily as a male's domain, Gerda's responsibility and surprising knowledge is remarkable enough to cause her neighbors to accuse her of malevolent sorcery.


Sadly, all Gerda's actions were nothing but the best, as she is the sort of person who only wishes to do good for others. And the children in the village she was particularly close, as she helped raise many, if not all of them.


But she finds herself in a world where her powers are welcomed, but she must earn her place in this new world.

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DihyaJam96 In reply to Tete-DePunk [2018-09-20 11:16:32 +0000 UTC]

I really appreciate the use of the history in the stories. Me too i try to make some research. Very wonderful

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SunsetBlazer [2018-09-18 16:55:55 +0000 UTC]

Oooh wow! What a fascinating story!Β  Not at all what I had guessed. Β  There is so much more magic in her story that I expected.Β  I certainly didn't think she literally transformed into the phoenix!Β  That's amazing.Β 

Awesome job on the profile as well; her body type is so realistic and well detailed.Β  She's a beautiful character (both inside and out)

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Tete-DePunk In reply to SunsetBlazer [2018-09-19 22:09:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Thank you, Raye!


Well, you were pretty accurate with most of your guess, esp with her age and location!


Yes, there's is heavy magic in her story- hers is a tale steeped in what we could call fantasy but what Gerda's knows as the old knowledge of another world humans once tapped into in her world.


The transformation even shocks her- she fears her power to turn into the Firebird, but over time, she learns to master her power to protect her loved ones.


Given her life and work, Gerda would be a robust, plump woman- it's refreshing to work with a realistic body proportions, even what society deems flaws- freckles, blush, pudgy areas on her body.


Thank you! She and I really appreciates your thinking she is beautiful inside and out! Thank you!

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charcoalfeather [2018-09-18 14:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Excellent work on her postures and her facial expressions here. I didn't expect her hair to be that long as well.Β 

Great work on her storyline. It's well balanced and appealing. It will be interesting to see what will happen between she and the Frost Lord and how her life will change (or not) after accepting his proposal, especially since she herself has magical powers.Β 

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Tete-DePunk In reply to charcoalfeather [2018-09-19 21:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! Her hair appears shorter because she usually covers her bare head or else braids her hair in double braids to keep its length out of her way.


Thank you! It's pretty rewarding how Gerda's story has grown- and how she come to reveal her true self. Her story is straightforward, realistic (well, in the sense of natural reaction and emotional response), and hers is a simple yet earnest story she desires to share.


Yes, there's a good deal to explore with her new life with the Frost Lord- esp as she tries to find her place in the Other World- it's equally as dangerous and challenging as the human world- maybe more so, because the consequences have a great reverberation in the order of things.

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sorceress23 [2018-09-17 19:01:15 +0000 UTC]

I like the idea of Gerda's body being covered by freckles and moles, and her being so long. I'm glad she lets it loose more often

The story you created sounds like a fairy tale, the old, dark and merciless one, and I really like it

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Tete-DePunk In reply to sorceress23 [2018-09-17 23:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Too often, fantasy and other genres of fiction depict flawless, model-like characters.


But in reality, people embody all sort fo body features, and freckles and moles should be depicted, because some people DO have these features. And she is a motherly, plump figure as well.


Thanks! It's like a tale, only more focused on the psychology of the characters and a less edgier world.


Hope you enjoy the future assignments!


Gerda's story already has two chapters posted here if you interested?

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Goddess-of-Gales [2018-09-17 04:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting character and nice detailed backstory! I'm curious in knowing how much time has passed from one situation to the next. For example, how old are her sons when she encounters the Frost Lord? Are they still boys or are they fully grown by this point?


Regardless, if I were her, I'd gladly serve the Frost Lord in a heartbeat. Perhaps the Other Folk will be kinder and she'll be free to embrace her amazing, magical self ~ Humans can be so cruel. What a bunch of jerks.

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Tete-DePunk In reply to Goddess-of-Gales [2018-09-17 23:42:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for commenting on Gerda's profile, Goddess of Gales!


Thanks so much for asking!


Actually, you would be surprised how quickly the events transpired between Gerda's escape and her pledge of service to the Frost Lord.Β  It was matter of a month, or several weeks. She was on the run since she transformed into the Firebird- so when she meets the Frost Lord, she actually hasn't even recovered her traumatic events. Her sons are are about 11 and 7 when this all transpired.


Ah! Now you're perceptive indeed! Although the Frost Lord appears a grim and cold figure, he's a very fair, just and actually generous lord to serve. He takes Gerda and sons under his protection and helps Gerda master her magic and even help her discover her own place in the world of the Other Folk.


Although the world of the Other Folk is just as dangerous and relentless as her human world, she finds more order and honesty in the other world. Here, she can openly practice her magic and master the potential of her long-sleeping powers.Β  Some of the Other Folks are dangerous, but do not believe in useless oppression or cruelty. However, their adherence to order can seem too harsh and legalistic at times.


But all in all, Gerda find her own place and home with the Frost Lord in the Other World. She even helps to save the Frost Lord from a renegade reaper later in the story.

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MelancholyCyborg1 [2018-09-16 21:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Great to finally learn some more on the mysterious Gerda
I love the amount of detail you've put into both the art and her story.

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Tete-DePunk In reply to MelancholyCyborg1 [2018-09-17 23:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!


Working with Gerda is exceptionally rewarding! Hope you enjoy the future assignments! And hope you are enjoying her chapters so far!

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MelancholyCyborg1 In reply to Tete-DePunk [2018-09-18 14:44:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
I am

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CromwellInnovations [2018-09-16 16:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Great work! Her backstory is quite sad though.Β 

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Tete-DePunk In reply to CromwellInnovations [2018-09-16 20:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, but her story does get happier with new life in the Other world with the Frost Lord.

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HelevornArt [2018-09-16 07:18:23 +0000 UTC]

I love how you depicted her brushing her hair in order to show her body type, making the profile task into a scene from Gerda's daily life! Her design looks great, she looks so strong, both physically and in temper and personality. Love those sun-wheel earrings (I should've noticed them and their symbolism in the "Guess Who" illustration )!

And wow, her backstory is so complex and full of twists! The relationship with her second husband and the villagers' reaction to the plague add to the realism of the story, which blends all the better with the fantastic aspects of it! Can't wait to see more of her!

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Tete-DePunk In reply to HelevornArt [2018-09-17 23:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It felt more natural doing characters in everyday poses, since for the life of me, I really can't draw characters standing full front face and still. Poses came easier to me for some reason.


Gerda was rewarding to design- she doesn't fit the usual prototype of beauty, but she is herself, and her body shows her life, like her hard work and strains of motherhood.


While she is generally shy and anxious, her temper flares if those she loves (namely, her sons) are threatened.


After burrowing endlessly through pinterest for references of Norse and Slavic clothing, I found a number of Sun-Wheel earrings and saw numerous female reenactors wear these- it would be natural Gerda would wear such earrings, esp with her strong belief in older belief systems. That's all right- the earrings should have been drawn clearer to show the design!


Thank you- one thing that can be distancing in fantasy genres is that it can feel detached from human life. Gerda is bery much human, and I wanted to show the realism of her life, all while maintain the magic of her story.Β  It alos makes sense to show a more grey world and less of either the black and white mentality many wrongly assume of the past, or else make it edgy for sensationalism.


It's only natural the villagers would assume and react this way to Gerda, although we may feel anger towards them because we ourselves know Gerda's true self. And Gerda's reaction is natural too- she accepted her punishment because she felt guilt for failing to heal the village's children, and she was quite close to most of the children, since she was sort of their keeper. But the moment the village laid their hands on her sons... well, she unleashes a fury she never knew she had. She does feel guilt later for burning down their houses, but tries to move forward in the Other World under the Frost Lord's service.

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Kainatarma [2018-09-16 05:08:57 +0000 UTC]

What an interesting story and great art! Love her red hair.
When people say "Strong female characters" what I mean is this, when you can still connect humanity to her

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Tete-DePunk In reply to Kainatarma [2018-09-17 23:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Her red hair is a complex color blend, but very lovely to create!


Exactly! Gerda is a human, yet she is strong. Sadly, the "strong female trope" really kills the life out of characters in so much media today.

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dragondoodle [2018-09-16 05:00:15 +0000 UTC]

I love her look and everything about her. Can't wait for more!

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Tete-DePunk In reply to dragondoodle [2018-09-17 23:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, Dragondoodle!


Also, expect more chapters of the story this week!

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rainbow000pegasus [2018-09-16 04:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Ohh! Her backstory is really captivating, I'd love to learn more about Gerda and her family in depth! Even after all that to still fight death, I find that admirable.
I like how you did the colouring work, very nicely done.

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Tete-DePunk In reply to rainbow000pegasus [2018-09-17 23:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I worried this revealed too much, but this is only half her story.


Thank you- what did you want to learn more about she and her family? Do you mean her father and grandmother? Or her second husband and sons?


Definitely- Gerda will defy and fight death itself if she has to- she's that strong a mother!


Thanks! Copics are a true blessing for an artist like myself who loves heavy yet subtle colors.

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rainbow000pegasus In reply to Tete-DePunk [2018-09-22 22:01:14 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I think you revealed just enough then!
It's her second husband and sons I found interesting, maybe the fact that there's magic exists?Β 

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Tete-DePunk In reply to rainbow000pegasus [2018-10-02 21:30:39 +0000 UTC]

Ah, what did you want to know about her second husband and her sons?


Any questions about the magic in Gerda's world?

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rainbow000pegasus In reply to Tete-DePunk [2018-10-10 00:27:02 +0000 UTC]

As for magic I'll watch by the sidelines for now! Magic in each one's worlds are always such a broad and vast concept, and interesting to each their own- especially her firebird. I can't wait to see more of it!

Hmm, as for her second family, her husband, did he flee his land too once? Did he decide to atone for his actions on his own will or on someone's behalf? Are all mages being sought out for weapons of war?
How are her sons towards facing all this? Fleeing and being in constant harm's way? Are they indifferent towards it or are they pressured by people they don't trust, etc.?
How does her son feel towards their mother's firebird?

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Tete-DePunk In reply to rainbow000pegasus [2018-11-28 21:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And sorry this is over two months late!


Magic, because it is a universal concept, has a plethora of variations how it is viewed and intrepreted in each culture. It varies greatly through each culture, and it should be explored more in variation of fiction. That is, instead of the usual Western/Europe/Anglo approach to magic as found in modern media (most of which are misconceptions, exaagerated to fit a plot).


However, one could say the magic shown in Gerda's world, though inspired by folklore of magic in Slavic cultures, is exaggerated because it is fantasy. The very core element found in the concept of fantasy is exaggeration itself.


Thanks so much for your interest and questions!


To answer them:

Her husband remains in his land, since they are the same ethnic group, technically speaking. Her second husband, in his past, had been entirely misanthropic- that is, he really hated people because of the persecution against mages. He became deadset on making wherever he was a miserable place through malice. However, over time, he gradually realized some goodness thrived in people, and he began to regret his abuse of power.


It really depends on the mages themselves. Some mages, seeking wealth and political favor, will sell their services to those willing to pay for their abilities. Some find themselves controlled by other mages because their powers are unique from another mages. Some are extorted by nobles and the like, so they serve their extortionists in exchange for "protection". Some mages conceal their abilities and can hide as non-mages.


Initially, her sons are too numbed by shock. However, they first feel hatred against people- this frightens Gerda, because she never wanted her sons to experience this sort of hate. Needless to say, constantly fleeing and having distrust potentially everyone on their way, it does wear down the boys. They begin to question everything- whether people are actually good, whether magic is really good or bad, and other questions.


At first, they're stunned by their mother's transformation. They do have slight fear of her alternative form, but over time, as Gerda learns to control her other form and use it for good, she overs her own fear of herself, and so do her sons of her other form.

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rainbow000pegasus In reply to Tete-DePunk [2018-12-12 22:10:56 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about it, thank you so much for writing such a long and detailed reply!

I've always liked tales of change like Gerda's second husband, so that's really glad to hear!
Though overall I feel like the mages of your land are very interesting, and how each utilize their power, especially those working for others. Do you think there might be a day where Gerda could encounter another in the future?

Nothing's black and white, that's probably something we all eventually realise when we all grow up, nothing is really just good or bad, so there's that haha. Though the way they try to prevent the punishment of the villagers upon their mother (by turning the whip into vines and flowers, or of the sort if I recalled right?) was something I would not guess to be of someone thinking about hating the people around them. Harbouring hate for years might end up creating an interesting character though in seeing how they would take the world into perspective-
Sorry for the random rambling haha.

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Tete-DePunk In reply to rainbow000pegasus [2018-12-13 23:08:13 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome! I worry my replies tend to be too long, so let me know if they are!


Thanks so much! Yes, we need more tales of change in people, and although her second husband DID change, he still had to face the residual consequences of his actions. But he was happy for a time with Gerda and her sons.


Thanks! It's interesting to take new ideas on mages, and see how magic would work in their world.


Gerda did encounter a number of these in her childhood, and she particularly admires those who clearly communicate with animals and can shapeshift into animals as well.


Yes, that's absolutely true. Unfortunately, so much fantasy (and stories in general), tend to take a black and white stance on sides and issues. Or else, it just gets into a sad, dark mess of messed-up ideas and endless violence.

Well, if they learned deeper, stronger magic, I fear the boys might have done some great harm to the villagers for flogging their mother. However, this all happened so quickly, and the boys were so used to the village being their home, and knowing most of the people as friends, it might have been hard for them to fully accept the tragedy that was happening before them.

They still have resentment towards most people and other beings, since they have this sense of distrust that their mother's condemnation sprouted in them. This scares Gerda, and she hopes to show them to trust others again.


No, please, by all means, please ramble away! I love it when people want to talk about things.

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rainbow000pegasus In reply to Tete-DePunk [2019-02-01 06:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Blarg I thought to myself, "I'll reply later", oh the horror when I realise this is still here being forgotten!
Anyway long replies are no worries to me, except I usually find it a bit challenging to respond back, since I have a feeling I have to type just as much as the other-

If the boys had friends, would they really be able to cast a magic of greater harm in response to their action to their mom? I find that anger is indeed blinding, but sometimes self-awareness or realization gets in the way. If they had done so before Gerda fled with their sons, would they feel remorse for harming them, or not at all, for they harmed their mother?
Thinking about how one's world could have branched out is simply fascinating!

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