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TF-Wizard β€” Error Message (Joining the Bandwagon: CLOSED)

Published: 2013-07-13 23:20:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 4489; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 21
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Description I'm usually not a bandwagon kind of person, but these Error Message things have gotten so popular lately, I figured I'd give it a shot. I took my Adventure Game story as inspiration. WARNING: TG may be involved!

EDIT: No More Entries from people who haven't posted please! I'm trying to finish this up so I can get back to work on stories.
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Kiroku09 In reply to ??? [2013-07-23 19:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh, um okay. (We both get up and he opens a door to a long hallway, that we both start walking down) Um, Mr. Takemi do you mind if i ask you one more question before i meet Mr. White? (He looks at me quizically) Hmm, Ask away. (I look around the hallway) Just how big is this place, i mean robtech? I know that it must be huge because of what i've seen. I mean robtech's not only into robotics, but biological engineering as well. You guys must be making a lot of money? Ha ha (I laugh to myself) it kinda reminds me of a favorite video game of mine.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-23 21:32:44 +0000 UTC]

"Which video game again? Anyway, we are not a part of Robtech industries, although they are sponsors of our operations. Robtech is a massive international megacorporation with power bases in America, Europe, and Japan. And now," he motions to a door and steps out of the way. "You are about to meet their president."

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-24 08:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh, i see... Well, we best not keep the man waiting. (We walk down the hallway to a set of doors. Just before he opens them i think to myself) well here you go Michelle, god only knowhat's gonna happen to me after all of this but, whatever happens, happens!

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-24 15:00:32 +0000 UTC]

You see a handsome brown-haired man in an exquisite business suit clapping happily. He looks you over for a second and smiles. "Oh, so you're Michelle? Would you mind telling me about yourself?" He asks.

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-24 20:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, umm, w-wel i'm sure you know that i was a guy a few hours ago. I'm 24 years old, unemployed, with no friends,Β and living with my parents in tennessee. I have a brother who's working in a factory in my hometown, he's 28 and like me not married and next to no chance of it. Not to say that we were ugly or anything, it's just that we were trying to get jobs and other things before we even thought about it. Anyway, truthfully speaking it was my mother who sighned me up to that dating service after hearing about it from my aunt, she kept telling me that i nedded to find someone and that no one can survive this world alone.Β  I remember having to fill out an information page on the webite that is much more detailed but, this is the jist of it. So, the rest i'm pretty sure you allready know sir.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-24 22:32:23 +0000 UTC]

The man laughs loudly. ""Ha! You worry too much about the past young lady! I care more about the present and the future! Tell me about yourself now, I hear you have powers or something, what do you think about yourself?" He looks at you with interest.

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-25 07:41:25 +0000 UTC]

Well, as far as my powers are concerned, i don't really know much sir. What i do know is that when your spiderbot attacked me i was able to dodge its attacks pretty easily, it was allmost like it was moving in slow motion or something. However, i was caught off gaurd and it knocked me through a wall, to my surprise i wasn't even scratched. That's all i really know about any powers i might have. As to how i feel about my new body, i really like it. You've granted a wish that i've had for a while now, honestly it's almost like you knew what i wanted before changing my gender. Honestly, (i look down at my hands, breasts, and long brown hair) Thank you very much! You've done something that i didn't think was possible.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-25 08:17:21 +0000 UTC]

"Well don't thank me Michelle, thank the company that makes this little miracle possible. What the hell, you wanna go on a date sometime?"

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-25 08:43:15 +0000 UTC]

W-wait, umm huh? I mean what? That's a little too sudden, don't you think. I-I mean i haven't been a woman for more than half a day and i'm allready being asked out on a date! (I look towards the floor flustered blushing) I-I mean c-come on Mr. White i don't even k-know how to put a bra on, let a-alone go out on a.... d-date. (I blush furiously apon saying the last word) I-I mean.... (Sigh) well there gose my tough girl act, ha ha.... (I look at him smirking at me) I'm not saying no but, (i look down to the ground blushing) i-i don't even know the first thing about being a woman yet. C-Can i think about it (i look again at him a little surprised about just how flustered he's making me feel)?

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-25 08:53:54 +0000 UTC]

"Ha! Is our little lady shy? Well, take all the time you like, I'll be waiting for you. Hey!" He calls to a random uniformed man. "Tell these cowpokes I'm rather happy with what I got."Β 

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-25 19:57:20 +0000 UTC]

S-Surprisingly so (i look at the ground a little defeated and embaressed). (He calls the uniformed man and tells him he's happy with me). (He looks at me smiling) My you look so beautiful (He says, causing me to blush even harder at the situation)! C-Come on Mr.White, s-stop making me blush so much i mean,(Sigh) geeze i've never blushed this much in my life.( i look away from him embaressed) S-Sorry it's just that i've never had these kind of feelings before, let alone for a man....it's weird, not unpleasant, just weird.... (I look down at the ground clearly embaressed and a little ashamed)

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-25 21:01:52 +0000 UTC]

"Oh, that's fine little lady, just take your good old time."

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-26 07:54:19 +0000 UTC]

T-Thanks, Mr. White.... I-Is it possible to go and explain all of this to my family? ( He looks at me for a second) Hmm, i don't know, what do you say Mr. Takomi? (Koji looks at us and says) As long as there's no complications and you tell them everything i don't see any problem with it, you are the client Mr. White it's ultimately your decision. Well there you go my lady, looks like you're going home (Mr. White Says). (I look down at the ground in sheer relief and then something wet hits the ground) Whoa there Michelle, what's wrong (Mr. White asks)? I-I have no idea, I-I don't know why i'm crying! (I look at Mr. White until, i can't take it anymore and run at him hugging him saying thank you over and over until i stop crying)

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-26 15:20:26 +0000 UTC]

((Shall we end on such a cute, happy image? I'll wrap up some stuff if that's okay))

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-26 18:58:26 +0000 UTC]

(( Sure, go ahead be my guest. Have some fun with it!))

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-26 19:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Ad we end on this happy scene of a CEO hugging a budding new young woman. United in happiness, or possibly something greater. Who knows how her story will continue, or even if it will at all? For now though dear reader, I do believe we've found a happy ending.

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-26 19:47:57 +0000 UTC]

((Nice ending! Honestly, i'm not really sure if we should continue, i mean that was a really good ending. Although, there are a few things that we haven't covered huh? Like what Michelle's family whould say about their son turning into their daughter/sister. And about Michelle's powers and what she decides to do with them. So, there might be a continuation. I guess i'll leave it to you tf-wizard to decide wether or not the story continues. Anyway, i hope that the readers of this little stoy had fun reading it and that tf-wizard had as much fun writing it as i have had.))

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-26 21:53:31 +0000 UTC]

We could always continue it at a later date or something, I had a ton of fun but figured it was a good end point.

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-27 07:51:14 +0000 UTC]

Sure, that's fine by me. I'm just glad you had some fun with it.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-27 08:08:42 +0000 UTC]

As long as you had fun with it, that's what's important.

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-27 18:49:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, you too.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-28 01:47:06 +0000 UTC]

Well, see you later! Feel free to request a RP or story sometime!

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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-28 06:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Sure i'll do that and....Thanks!

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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-07-28 06:35:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you too!

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Elynsynos In reply to ??? [2013-07-13 23:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Eh, screw it. Monster and then something about yolo and swag combined.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Elynsynos [2013-07-14 00:59:12 +0000 UTC]

Ah, an Adventurous soul! Glad to have one! I'll give you a rather nice transformation perhaps. You feet begin to feel extremely odd, almost as if they were...hardening?

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Elynsynos In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 03:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Welp, better save the shoes, just in case. You never know about the permanency of these things.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Elynsynos [2013-07-14 04:20:19 +0000 UTC]

Having smartly removed your shoes, you find that your feet seem to be transforming into black hooves! A small amount of fur is also beginning to climb up your leg. You are distracted from this however, by the burning sensation on your head! It's almost as if your bones were growing!

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Elynsynos In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 06:04:44 +0000 UTC]

Guess I should find the nearest mirror, luckily enough I have a full body one in the bedroom!

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TF-Wizard In reply to Elynsynos [2013-07-14 06:09:11 +0000 UTC]

All right then, you're a spirited one. You look in the mirror and find that bone like protrusions are beginning to sprout out from the hair on your head. Your lower body however, seems to be bulking up as the brown fur overtakes it. Luckily for you (as opposed to some of our other players) the sensation is only mildly painful.

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Elynsynos In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 14:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Not sure where this is going yet, so just keep watching and enduring the mildly painful changes.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Elynsynos [2013-07-14 15:01:03 +0000 UTC]

The muscle and fur growth continues up along your legs, growing at an incredibly fast rate. You notice the tiny horn-like protrusions growing outwards and curving into large horns. You feel your face shifting and turning, with your nose becoming black and flat, more fur seems to be spreading outwards from your new, cow-like nose.

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Elynsynos In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 19:51:22 +0000 UTC]

Not sure either, I think it's because of the Labyrinth from greek mythology but no idea what made them give the minotaur an ax.

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Elynsynos In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 17:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Does this transformation come with an ax and complementary maze?

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TF-Wizard In reply to Elynsynos [2013-07-14 17:46:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm afraid it does not good sir, you will have to search for those on your own. On a side note, I'm not entirely sure where the whole minotaurs with axes thing came from

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Elynsynos In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 19:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Not sure either, I think it's because of the Labyrinth from greek mythology but no idea what made them give the minotaur an ax.

Accidentally responded to myself lol.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Elynsynos [2013-07-14 20:59:46 +0000 UTC]

It is not a huge issue dear player. Your transformation continues, you feel your muscles bulking up and becoming more powerful, while the fur continues to capture your skin. Your face begins to shift ever more into the visage of a bull, pressing outwards and covering with fur.

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Elynsynos In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 21:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Just how strong are we talking? Been wanting to redecorate my room for some time but to lazy to move the bed.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Elynsynos [2013-07-14 21:43:42 +0000 UTC]

You are quite sure the bed will be no issue for you, especially as your transformation is entering its final stages.

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Elynsynos In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 22:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh? Well at least this makes cosplaying as a Tauren easier even if I stopped playing WoW quite a while back. Maybe I should go back to my computer.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Elynsynos [2013-07-14 22:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Alright then you are now a giant Minotaur, but I suppose old habits die hard and you sit back at your computer and continue whatever you were doing before. Perhaps this is a rather fitting end to your tale.

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Elynsynos In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 23:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Heh, was fun mr or mrs wizard

Maybe i'll see you in the next adventure.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Elynsynos [2013-07-14 23:05:50 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you will dear reader, maybe you will. Then again, who knows if my stupid writer will call upon me, or some other silly narrator. Who's to say, anyway I would like to thank you very much for a good story.

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Aungshadow In reply to ??? [2013-07-13 23:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Click......Human

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TF-Wizard In reply to Aungshadow [2013-07-14 15:06:42 +0000 UTC]

You click the button, and soon find that your surroundings have changed quite considerably. You seem to be in the chambers of some sort of stone building. You are in a bedroom with a lofty bed. In the distance you hear some sort of loud commotion, but it is very quiet in the room. Everything about you seems the same, except for how your hair seems to be blond now and slightly longer than you remember.

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Aungshadow In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 23:43:26 +0000 UTC]

I look around wonder wonder where I am, I scratch my head but then noticed the long blonde hair. I looked around a panicked, and then I found a Mirror, and quickly ran to it.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Aungshadow [2013-07-15 07:12:10 +0000 UTC]

As you look in the mirror, you find that you are a little more slender than before, and you notice your new curly blonde hair.

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Aungshadow In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 09:34:45 +0000 UTC]

As I look, i'm confused "I look kinda like a girl" I said scratching my head. I just noticed a commotion and decide to investigate it, maybe it might help me figure what happened.

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TF-Wizard In reply to Aungshadow [2013-07-15 14:46:40 +0000 UTC]

You try to investigate the noises outside, but find the large, sturdy door to be locked. It also seems to be a bit larger than it was a few minutes ago, in fact the whole room seems to be a little larger!

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Aungshadow In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 15:04:40 +0000 UTC]

I started to panic a bit as the room looked like it got bigger, I tried to force the door open but failed. I looked around the room to try to find a way out but to no avail,I sat down on the bed trying to calm down a make sense of things.

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