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I'm usually not a bandwagon kind of person, but these Error Message things have gotten so popular lately, I figured I'd give it a shot. I took my Adventure Game story as inspiration. WARNING: TG may be involved!EDIT: No More Entries from people who haven't posted please! I'm trying to finish this up so I can get back to work on stories.
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What the? Wow she's beautiful! What's going on though? and who's that guy? Crap... i wanna get closer but i'm afraid that i might get caught. Maybe i can hear them if i listen real good (Starts listening intently)
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If you listen real hard, you hear Japanese. Do you know any random words?
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Listening, most of the words i can't understand. But there are a few i can like doragon and shoujo also, i also hear the words majin, youkai, and nekomata. But there's to many other words in between them for me to understand the conversation.
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Well, shoujo certainly applies, even if not all of the others do. You also hear the world Hanayome, which you remember means bride.
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What the, Bride? is she his bride or is he looking for one? (looks down at my body) I hope he's not looking for me because he's going to have a tough time finding me.... Though he dose look good (I think about what i just said) okaayy, estrogen down. Breathe in (HMMMM) breathe out (HHAAAA). Alright i need to get out of here before they find out i'm not in my room, and before i end up doing something i'd regret later.
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It seems like the woman is the bride, and you decide to move onward into the facility. You come to a fork in the vents, they go left and right.
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Well i'm right handedso i usually choose right but, let's go left instead. (Goes down the left vent)
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You move down the left vent until you find another grate, this one appears to lead to some sort of break room, with comfortable chairs and a coffee machine.
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(I suddenly realise just how thirsty i am) I don't like coffee to much but anything is better than nothing. Also, there might be an exit somewhere close by giving that this room looks like a break room of some sort. But, where there is a break room there are also workers.... Adding to that, giving the size and scope of this facility, there are more than likely gaurds at all of the exits anyway. Crap, first thing first, i need something to drink (Slowly opens the grate, thankful that nobody noticed, and got myself a cup of coffee and some sugar) (Gulp,gulp, Ahhh) Wow that's the best coffee i've had! Maybe it has something to do with my new body but that was really good. Okay time to get back up (slowly puts the coffee cup in the sink and quickly goes back up the vent to contemplate my options)
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You see a couple of men entering the room, they are wearing black suits and seem to be a little concerned. You hear a few words from their conversation. "Hey, did you hear about that escapee?" "Yeah man, that craps crazy, those chicks never escape!" "The guards'll probably handle it," "Yeah...shame too, she ended up quite pretty, client'll be pissed if he finds out." "And you were wondering why there's no alarms going off?"
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C-Client? So somebody paid for this to happen (i say under my breath)? Not that i'm complaining, but something tells me that i don't want to meet this "client". At least i now know why no alarms have been raised. But now i might be in trouble, now they know that i'm no longer in my room. Which means that they're now looking for me. So now i have to try to find a way out that won't allow people to see me. I've been good so far but,(looks down the air duct) I seriously doubt that these lead all the way outside....And I could very well be looking at the way out. (Then I remember the client) Hmmm, I have an idea and it might just work out. Now i just need to figure out who my client is.
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Alright then, what is it you wish to do to accomplish this goal.
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Well, I decide to find out who my client is and what he's like. It's easier to deal with one person than it is to deal with a whole company/organization and besides, I haven't even met my "client" yet it could even be a member of my family for all I know. So yeah, I need go gather more info before I decide weather or not to break out of this place. (looks down the air duct) There are probably more rooms up ahead and maybe my client is in one of 'em.
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You crawl forward in the duct, hoping to find your client. You come across one door where a man is talking to some men in black suits, who look very apologetic.
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Well, who do we have here? This guy looks promising, whoever he is he's someone important because those suits look stressed out. He's either my client or possibly one of the ones in control of this place. In either case, I need more info (Stays and listens)
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You stay and listen, you can't hear very well, but you manage to capture a few words of the conversation. The rich looking man sounds annoyed. "Where is she! I thought you had already found my perfect bride! I'll demand a refund soon!" The other man looked distressed and apologetic. "Don't worry sir, there's been a simple traffic miscalculation, She'll be here soon Mr. President of Robtech." You wonder why the man said his client's name so oddly.
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Okay, that's wierd "Mr. President of Robtech" is this guy in charge of this place or is he the CEO of a equally powerful company? Is he even my client? If he isn't my client then what's happening to the person of whom he has paid for?Ah-geeze, there's just too many questions and not enough answers... (Sigh) First things first, I need to know just who this guy is, Robtech.... I swear that i've heard of that before, but where? (Gets closer to the opening of the vent where the men are to be able to hear the conversation better) Hopefully they won't see me....
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You hear another snippet of the conversation. Mr President looks a little angry. "I thought you could provide me with my dream woman, but now she is missing! If you can't provide, I'm afraid I may have to pull my support..." The other man looks visibly distressed by this notion. He looks up in exasperation, and then his face changes to one of surprise. "Excuse me right now Mr. President, I um, have to go for a moment!" He turns around...
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Crap, it looks like he saw me! Now they know where i am, and i'm no closer to finding out if this guy is my client or not! The way that guy reacted makes me think that he is my client but, there's no way to know. If that guy saw me, there is no telling when they'll come after me. (looks down the air duct) I could full on sprint to an exit and hope to all that's good and holy that i make it, but somehow that feels like a bad idea.Damn it, (SIGH) okay calm down Michelle, I can't hear anyone in the duct with me yet, so for the moment i'm staying put. I need to find out a little more about mr. president here before i decide wether or not to get the hell out of dodge. (listens more intently to the conversation and my surroundings)
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You try to listen to the president after the other man ran out, but his mumblings are a little too quiet. You hear a small clattering coming from far down the duct in the direction you came from.
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Okay, it's time to leave (Continues down the air duct quickly but quietly). Hopefully there's someone or something that can help me up ahead. I don't want to get caught!
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As you move down the duct, the clattering increases both in speed and sound! You come to a fork in the ducts, to the left, you hear some kind of mechanical noise, to the right, you hear some voices coming out of a duct.
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Great, I either go to that mechanical thing or, towards the voices. In either case, i'm more than likely to get caught either way! (Looks down the vent and hears the encroaching noise) Argh, F-it (looks down the right vent) i'll take my chances with whoever's down door number two.
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You look back for a second at the clattering noise, seeing it to be a small spidery robot! Now you remember what Robtech does! You barely have time to look as you rush towards the vent with the people. You look through the vent, noticing what looks like a small infirmary. There are various people tied down, most of them look asleep, but a few are screeching angrily.
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(Looks down the vent at the little robot) Great, I rush all the way down here just to find out that a little spiderbot is following me....it's a good thing that arachnophobia only effects me with real spiders. (Looks down at the people screaming, and then looks back at the spiderbot) Hmm, that gives me an idea (grabs the little robot, opens the vent, throws it down to cause a little chaos, and quickly closes the vent before anyone sees me) Sorry guys, i need a little distraction.
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I apologize, it appears that what I said was a little misleading. This spider robot is nearly as big as you, and appears to have syringes instead of pincers.
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Whoa, okay that's something that i can't just grab. Well then, looks like i've no choice (Opens the vent and jumps down). (looks around and thankfully there's no doctors/scientists yet just the "Patients") Sorry everyone but, could you act as though i'm not here? If you do i'll let you guys out of those restraints. And by the way, do any of you know where an exit is?
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Most of the patients are still asleep, but the rest cry for help, making quite a bit of racket.
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Alright everyone, lets help each other out. (Walks around releasing all of those who're awake while explaining to them what's happened to me and that we need to get out together) Listen everyone, we need to get out of here, there's a spiderbot in the air duct above us and I don't want to be in here when it decides to come down. Also, i've been changed into a woman by these guys and, while i personally like the changes that i've gone through, i'm sure there are some of you who won't like them. Besides, if they can change my gender think about what else they could do to us! So tell me, do any of you know of a way out of this place?
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Most of the patients are too scared to do anything. One nods however. "I don't think any of us know a way out of here, they keep us all in the dark!" The spiderbot bursts down through the whole you created. It talks in a robotic voice. "SUBJECT DESIGNATED MICHELLE, GIVE UP IMMEDIATELY AND REPORT FOR MENTAL ADJUSTMENT" It looks at you and aims its pincer-syringes at you.
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How the hell dose it know the name i gave myself? I was already in the vent and by myself when i gave myself that name! Hey, (Turns to the guy that talked) what's your name? J-Justin he answers. Listen Justin, if you want to keep that name, we're gonna have to find a way out of here! And accoring to what the spiderbot just said, they can appearently "Mentally Adjust" us to whatever they want. And like I said before, I don't really care what they do to my body, but my mind and memories is something that I HAVE to keep Period! (The spiderbot rushes at me with its pincer-syringes but, luckily my new body seems to be built for this sort of thing and i'm able to dodge its attacks) Hey, Spiderbot or Rather, the guy in control of it, back to my first question. How did you know about that name, unless you guys have microphones in the air ducts, which for some reason i doubt, I am supposed to be the only one who knows it? So tell me Hmm, How'd you find out about my new name?
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The Robot Actually replies while attempting to attack you, sending the other patients scattering throughout the room "WE HAVE PREDITICTION FORMULAS: CORRECT 99% OF TEST CASES." He rushes you!
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So.... you just guessed at it... ( Sigh) If anything you guys are good guessers. (The spiderbot rushes forward, luckily i am able to dodge the attack and am able to kick it into the wall breaking the syringes) Yes, they broke! Hey justin! Y-Yes mam (he answers)? Ugh, i'm gonna have to get used to that, Listen you're gonna have to find a way out of here not just for me but for yourself as well. I'm sure that this thing crashing from the ceiling has raised at least a few alarms so, try to find an exit so that we all can get out of here would you? ( the spiderbot rushes at me again unfortunately, it's able to hit me sending me flying into a wall smashing the wall into pieces) Michelle (Justin yells)! Are you alright (he asks)? Y-Yeah, (I ook down at myself in shock) I'm perfectly fine! W-What the hell was this body desighned for? To be a weapon, a body gaurd, hah or a super hero? (Looks over at the spiderbot and asks) Just what in the hell did you guys do to me anyway huh?( the spiderbot stops moving seemingly in thought) Well, answer me, maybe if you guys would start answering some of my question i just might stop running, haven't you guys thought about that yet? (The spiderbot "stares" at me for a second and then)
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You hear a strange rumbling sound as something seems to enter the room you are in. It is another robot! this one however, is quite large and shaped like a human. "HALT HUMAN" it cries "YOU HAVE UNEXPECTED SIDE EFFECTS, MUST BE EXAMINED, COME WITH ME" It raises its metallic hand to you.
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(Sigh) Another robot, it's starting to get crowded in here. "Unexpected Side Effects" huh, just what's unexpected about this huh? The fact that I still have my mind or the fact that i seem to be a living weapon able to fight with you robots?(I look over at the big human-like robot) Look all I want is a few answers, I just want to know just what the hell is going on here. Hell, i might just come with you to be examined, if you'd just explain to me what's going on. And honestly, I love what you guys have done to my body, you've fullfilled a wish that i've had for a while. My only complaint is that you want to "Mentally adjust" me. Now could you guys just stop for a few seconds and tell me what's going on?
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The robot, which looks extremely powerful, waits for a second before responding. "ACCEPTABLE. COME QUIETLY FEMALE HUMAN DESIGNATED MICHELLE. WE WILL LEAD YOU TO A ROOM WITH A COMPANY REPRESENATIVE."
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Company representative? Cuoldn't the guy in control of you talk to me, or are you controlled by an AI? (Ilook at the robot and it "stares' at me) (Sigh) Fine, i'll come with you but, if i fell for even a second that something's amiss i'll do whatever it takes to get away. And seeing as I went through a wall a minute ago, this body seems to be pretty durable. (The robot motions for me to go down a hallway with it) (I think to myself) I didn't see Justin anywhere after this robot appeared, hopefully he'll find his way out. Looks like i'm gonna go a different route....
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The robot leads you to a room with clean, fancy furnishings. Inside is a black suited man who looks rather angry. He stares at you for a moment, looking you over.
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(I look at the man while taking in the surroundings) So you're the one who has been causing me so much triuble (he asks)? Yes sir, i'm sorry for the trouble that i've caused but, throwing someone in a room, changing their gender, and god only knows what else would freak them out a little. Not that i'm complaining mind you, I actually love what's happened to me. The only thing that i am complaining about is this mentally adjusting the robots keep saying that I need. So you do not wish to be mentally adjusted (he asks)? No sir, I don't want to loose my mind....my memories, they're pretty much all i have of my family right now. Is that why you tried to escape this facility ( he asks)? Yes sir. I see, is that the reason why you let Justin Beaverly and the other patients go (he asks)? No sir, at the time I was still tring my darndest to escape, I also had that spidrebot chasing me, so it felt like a good idea at the time. I'm glad that you respect my authority, and that you're answering my questions truthfully Michelle (he says). Well, i know what position i'm in right now besides, i've never been any good at lying. So, you what they say "the truth will set you free". I figure that telling the truth right now would be in my best interest right now anyway. I see (he says). Now that i've told you everything can you answer a few of my question if it's not too much trouble?
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He grins and speaks to you again. "I suppose I can listen to your questions Dear Michelle. I have nothing to lose."
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Yeah, i know.... Okay, first off what's going on here? And why did you do this (looks down and gestures to my body) to me?
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"Now my dear Michelle? I believe you remember sigining a contract a while back? Perhaps you don't remember, the chemicals we use sometimes include short term memory loss. You agreed to be used for a kind of dating service I believe."
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A-A dating service? W-Wait a minute, yeah I do remember something like that! But hold on, what kind of dating service kidnapps people and changes their genders? And why all the secrets? If you'd told me that you could change my gender I would've came willingly.
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"Well you see my dear, our operation hosts two kinds of clients, the free clients like you, and the more lucrative paid clients. The latter receive from our service their perfect dream partners, down to the last detail. Our free clients are used to fulfill the wishes of our paid ones, even if they don't initially fit the description. You are a free client, transformed into someone's dream woman. And I think you'll find most are not as willing as you are to switch gender or other characteristics, you were an unfortunate oddity in our usual protocols."
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Yeah, I can understand how most people wouldn't want to become someone else's dream person. Though I have to admit that is pretty ingenious, using the clients that don't pay you to fullfill the wishes of the ones that do. (the man looks at me with a little surprise and intrigue) I don't mind becoming someone's "dream partner" as long as i get to keep my mind and that they allow me to smoothe things over with my family, in a way that benifits you as well as my family. And if it dosen't work out, i'll find a way to pay you back for what you guys have done for me. Look i don't want to disrupt whatever you're doing here, even though you're rewriting people's memories, if they and their clients can live happily ever after then alls well that ends well. The questions that i have to ask now is, who is my client? And why did that spiderbot not hurt me when it threw me into the wall a little earlier?
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"Fine my dear Michelle. Your client is Redd White, CEO of Robtech, the premier robotics company in well, the entire world. As for your extranormal abilities, they were a side effect of your transformation. We were originally going to change your mind to fit his vision of the ideal woman, but the situation may have changed considering your new abilities. It will be up to the client to decide matters. He should give us his decision soon."
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I see so he was my client after all... ( He looks at me and asks) What do you mean? When i went into the air ducts, before the spiderbot started chasing me, i was able to see some of the other rooms that the air duct was giving air to. in the first room i was able to see japanese couple, of whom one of them was someone else a few hours ago. in the second room two of the emplyees was talking to him, that's when i was spotted. Of course, the rest you already know. (He looks at me and asks) You're very honest aren't you my dear Michelle? Yes sir, i've found out through my life that i was a very poor lyer, and that 9 times out of 10 it's better to tell the truth anyway. Which is part of the reason why i want to keep my memories, i'm afraid of becoming a compulsive lyer like my mom and brother.... (Sigh) A pretty silly thing to be afraid of right now huh?
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The man laughs a little. "I suppose you could say so, although not entirely unjustified considering your circumstances. I understand your unwillingness to receive mental adjustment. Now, I suppose it is up to your client, who we are having talks with now. He is being informed of the situation, and his decision will affect your future quite a bit."
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(Sigh) Yeah, i guess that's true. (I look up at the ceiling) You know, most people from a poor class family like mine should be overjoyed about possibly having your future set, but all i keep thinking about is my family and what they'd do without me.... Honestly though, my immeadiate family is probably the only people on earth that would know that i'm gone. (Sigh) Oh well, whatever happens i'll see to it that my family is okay afterwards. (I look over at the man) It was nice to meet you, whoever you are. And thank you for talking with me and answering my questions, i still have a few but i'll leave them for my client. (The man looks at me a little ashamed, and puts out his hand) Sorry my dear, my names Koji Takemi. (Alittle shocked that he actually gave me his name, i shake his hand) Nice to meet you Mr. Takemi.
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Mr. Takemi puts his hand to his headset and listens for a moment. "Yes, fine, okay, I'll bring her now. Michelle, it looks like you've had a lucky break. Our client is very interested in your new abilities, and would like to speak with you. Just this way please." He stands and leads the way out of the room.
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