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I'm usually not a bandwagon kind of person, but these Error Message things have gotten so popular lately, I figured I'd give it a shot. I took my Adventure Game story as inspiration. WARNING: TG may be involved!EDIT: No More Entries from people who haven't posted please! I'm trying to finish this up so I can get back to work on stories.
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EmienDorwin In reply to ??? [2013-07-13 23:24:17 +0000 UTC]
Can I suggest dragon? Human is over-rated anyways.
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-13 23:26:33 +0000 UTC]
Maybe you are a little confused. I'm afraid you barely have any power at all in this instance. In fact, just by agreeing to this little game, you'll find that things are about to change for you quite a bit. Maybe this'll be fun for you, maybe it won't. But I assure you, it's certainly going to be interesting.
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 01:41:05 +0000 UTC]
Errr....Well, no risk no reward, right? Though, if I click human what will the challenges I face be? And if I click monster how monstrous do you mean? ....and just who am I addressing anyways?
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-14 01:49:40 +0000 UTC]
You are addressing this little person, this construct, this great creature that calls upon you from across time and space itself. I am present in words all across the world, in a sense. This little author claims to have control over me, to decide what I say, but I say bah! He merely draws from the muse, from inspiration, from the front of his head. He does not truly control me, but I certainly control you, I certainly control this little tale. If I but stop talking, the whole illusion disappears, and you find yourself staring at your screen, incredibly bored. But perhaps I will give you a little more fun than that. You find yourself in a mysterious cave. There are three carvings on the wall, one of a bone, one of a paw, and one of a worm, which do you press?
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 03:46:07 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm....a bone, a paw, and a worm. Worm I do not fancy so that just leaves the paw and the bone. Of course I do not know what the outcome would be for each... but I guess this wouldn't be as interesting if I did. hmmm.... *ponders his decision fro a while, wondering which one he will press. In the end the paw has the stronger attraction to him* I shall press the paw. *presses the paw*
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-14 04:18:44 +0000 UTC]
Who is "him?" I thought we were talking about you? Anyhow, as you press the marking on the wall, you see an odd light emerging from it. By the way, why hadn't you just touched none of them? But I suppose this would be quite boring if you hadn't touched anything. You feel the light entering your hand, and immediately notice your nails elongating and curving forward.
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 04:54:25 +0000 UTC]
Would be boring to do nothing at all. Also, claws are neat and all but I'm sure you can do better. *flexes claws and admires them*
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-14 05:06:59 +0000 UTC]
You feel bones cracking as your arms seem to shift and reform, your hands start to scrunch together into new paws, the pain is searing.
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 06:22:30 +0000 UTC]
*cries out in pain, falling over against my desk* Ffffff.....ok, note to self... don't tempt the possibly evil computer program virus thing that's transforming you into who know's what.
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-14 06:27:42 +0000 UTC]
Ha, that's not all I can do I assure you! You feel a similar sensation in your feet, starting with the claws and ending with them transforming into paws. You see slight furry growth coming from the paws, warning you of your impending transformation. Don't worry dear viewer, the fun has only just begun!
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 06:53:55 +0000 UTC]
*tears off the remains of my socks and tosses them aside, groaning in pain as the bones in my feet shift* Could you at least give me a hint as to what you are turning me into? *starts removing other pieces of clothing before they tear apart too*
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-14 06:59:45 +0000 UTC]
Why do I have to do that? Figuring out the transformation is your job! At least until the end. You shake in pain as you feel a protrusion coming out of your rear you try to turn to see it but I don't let you. Your new tail sags a little, you having trouble conceiving how to move it.
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 15:34:33 +0000 UTC]
MMnnggg....what do you mean until the end? *is hunched over my desk, using it to keep balanced, mind attempting to make sense of my new appendage*
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-14 15:49:07 +0000 UTC]
Your new appendage seems to waggle excitedly now, you are not sure why. You feel your ears extending and drooping a little. You are not sure why, but you think you hear more sounds than you had before. You feel your teeth growing and sharpening, and your vocal chords erupt in a horrible choking pain. You cough, it sounding more animalistic. From your paws, you notice fur the color of your hair erupting outwards, claiming your skin for its furry gods.
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 16:06:30 +0000 UTC]
*is finding it harder to remain on two feet as the changes progress, bones snapping and re-arranging, the pain of the change almost becoming unbearable, making it hard to think clearly, growling harshly from the pain. Looking myself over a little from what I'm allowed to see I begin to ponder if I'm becoming some sort of canine*
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-14 16:11:18 +0000 UTC]
You may be right dear Dorwin, you may be right. You feel your nose shifting and changing while your face seems to press outwards. You feel a grinding pain as your teeth grow longer and sharper. Your genitals feel exceedingly odd as they begin to shift and grow inwards. With your nose changing you notice an odd scent in the distance, it is far away but somehow enticing. Your arms and legs still continue to shift painfully however, adopting a new shape.
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 16:30:50 +0000 UTC]
*growls and snarls in pain, attempting to speak, to cry out for help but only getting out barks and growls as human vocals are all but lost from me, desperately trying not to fall on all fours and looking down to see what was happening between my legs, trying to ignore the strange but somehow enticing scent that draws the attention of my altered nose*
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-14 18:00:01 +0000 UTC]
Between your legs, you see a particularly odd sight. Your canine tail is swishing around excitedly, but your member, which you saw to be rather small, seems to be sucking inwards into your body. You shudder as you feel the organs rearranging and shifting, radiating a hot, wet arousal throughout your nearly canine frame. The smell seems a little closer, and it smells delicious and musky and hot.
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 19:05:39 +0000 UTC]
*my tail wags furiously as the scent draws closer, fogging my mind as the arousal hits me. I try to remain focused but more primal urges start calling to me. My grip on my desk falters and I drop down onto all fours, the scent urging a part of me to go towards it even as I futility try to fight these urges, knowing full well that if I let my mind slip I'll lose my humanity mentally as easily as it had been lost physically... even though there is a small but gnawing part of my mind that wants to let go*
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-14 22:47:48 +0000 UTC]
The scent comes closer, and you feel those instincts growing ever stronger. A little voice in your head tells you that you are human, a much louder one tells you to just give in and enjoy what's coming to you. You feel your new sex just quivering with wet anticipation, your body aching for release from this dreaded heat. Your heart tells you of your new role, your new purpose in life.
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 23:55:58 +0000 UTC]
*I try to ignore the voice telling me to give in, but the building need within me causes me to slip more and more, thoughts of finding a mate becoming stronger along with that delightful scent. I begin to trot closer to the source, tail wagging frantically, wanting desperately to mate with this male I smell nearby*
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-15 00:11:03 +0000 UTC]
As you trot closer you see...him. He's a beautiful dog, with a wonderful coat and a luscious member. He is clearly the source of that wonderful odor that sends your heart a flutter and your loins aflame. He looks toward you now, moving toward you as you feel your mind starting to shatter away. The voice grows ever louder, and brags of your reward for simply giving in.
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 00:52:44 +0000 UTC]
*all resistance just shatters as the need overwhelms me. I know my place now and I turn around to submit to the male before me, lifting my tail, inviting him to take me*
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-15 01:37:59 +0000 UTC]
The creature comes to you, and you know your place. I do believe we should end this little tale here, I believe it has run its course.
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 01:41:13 +0000 UTC]
Yes, the tale is indeed at its end. And it was fun. Perhaps we might do this again sometime. *bows gracefully*
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-15 04:40:32 +0000 UTC]
Well I suppose this is over then...
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EmienDorwin In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 04:54:36 +0000 UTC]
Don't sound so down. One adventure has ended but another will begin sooner or later. ^^
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TF-Wizard In reply to EmienDorwin [2013-07-15 05:00:44 +0000 UTC]
Did I sound down? Dear reader, I can reappear at any time! You clearly misunderstand. I am not sad, but relieved. Nevertheless, I bid you farewell.
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Obsidian-haunt In reply to ??? [2013-07-13 23:22:45 +0000 UTC]
*clicks on human* please stay human please stay human
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-13 23:27:18 +0000 UTC]
But of course! I'll probably be nice enough to keep you as a human, maybe...Anyway I'll change you in some way...
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-14 00:03:51 +0000 UTC]
You see a white flash and find yourself in front of a mirror. Everything appears normal, with one slight difference. You find that your hair is significantly shorter now than it was when you started this little game. Additionally, you find that your body hair is slightly more visible.
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Obsidian-haunt In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 00:08:37 +0000 UTC]
a boy! No no no no....
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-14 00:12:33 +0000 UTC]
What makes you say that? All you know is that you have shorter hair on your head and slightly more apparent body hair? Perhaps this will go in the direction you anticipated, but perhaps it will not? Who is to say for sure?
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-14 00:20:19 +0000 UTC]
All I'm saying is this could go a great number of directions, perhaps you're transforming into a monkey, or a hairy, female bodybuilder, you're not sure yet, maybe neither am I?
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Obsidian-haunt In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 00:21:59 +0000 UTC]
please not a body builder
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-14 00:26:24 +0000 UTC]
All right then, since you're such a good sport, maybe I'll make sure you're not a bodybuilder. You begin to think you haven't shaved in a while, when you notice something very odd. This hair, it has turned completely black! You're not sure what this means when you see a great flash of light and a horribly loud sound.
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Obsidian-haunt In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 00:27:23 +0000 UTC]
I cover my ears and close my eyes tightly. Whats going on!?!
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-14 00:31:50 +0000 UTC]
You're not sure, but you hear a lot of bangs and loud noises. It almost sounds like some sort of action movie, with men screaming and yelling.
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Obsidian-haunt In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 00:33:13 +0000 UTC]
I open my eyes and look around utterly confused
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-14 00:37:03 +0000 UTC]
(OOC: Pick one of the two group's uniform?)
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-14 00:36:15 +0000 UTC]
You find yourself in the middle of some sort of gun battle! You see black suited figures blasting away at men in Hawaiian shirts and bandanas. You look at yourself, what are you wearing?
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Obsidian-haunt In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 00:39:13 +0000 UTC]
A black suit? What? Whats going on here!?!
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-14 00:44:28 +0000 UTC]
You look at yourself and find yourself to be similar, but a little different. You are older and slimmer with a toned body, Your hair is cut short, but a very dark black. You look at your skin, and notice a slight yellow pigment. You are on the ground, hiding behind a car, some sort of pistol lays beside you. You hear screaming in both Japanese and Italian. Surprisingly, the former sounds very familiar to you.
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Obsidian-haunt In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 00:55:37 +0000 UTC]
This is so wierd.....am i in the mob or somethin?
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-14 01:07:32 +0000 UTC]
Something more like the Yakuza, but perhaps. You hear a man screaming Japanese at you. "Hey Mako! What're you doing, get these gaijin!" The voice says, what do you do?
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Obsidian-haunt In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 01:09:31 +0000 UTC]
"Uh.....gaijin? Mako? Is that my name?" I look around confused but i pick up the pistol
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TF-Wizard In reply to Obsidian-haunt [2013-07-14 01:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Mako appears to be your name, at least as you remember it, your mind is a little fuzzy however. A loud crack against the car you're behind seems to wake you up a little, there are people trying to kill you! You look at the gun and suddenly remember to check how much ammo is in the clip, you find that it is empty.
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Obsidian-haunt In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 01:42:40 +0000 UTC]
Im out of ammo over here! I shouts to the person who had shouted to him. I begin to look around worriedly
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