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I'm usually not a bandwagon kind of person, but these Error Message things have gotten so popular lately, I figured I'd give it a shot. I took my Adventure Game story as inspiration. WARNING: TG may be involved!EDIT: No More Entries from people who haven't posted please! I'm trying to finish this up so I can get back to work on stories.
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TF-Wizard In reply to ??? [2013-07-14 21:02:02 +0000 UTC]
You open the file, finding it to be a simple text-based UI. It has a few places to enter data on it. The text boxes consist of "Age" "Race" "Height" "Weight" "Bust Size" and "Gender" they are filled with remarkably accurate information on you.
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TheNashNetwork In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 00:16:55 +0000 UTC]
Wow...that's...strange.
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TF-Wizard In reply to TheNashNetwork [2013-07-15 00:24:07 +0000 UTC]
Feel free to play with the numbers if you wish, I'm sure they do nothing...
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TheNashNetwork In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 00:40:11 +0000 UTC]
I don't know....I wouldn't want to jynx it or something...
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TF-Wizard In reply to TheNashNetwork [2013-07-15 04:53:57 +0000 UTC]
Well then, it appears that this story is going to be very boring...
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TheNashNetwork In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 05:34:30 +0000 UTC]
Heh, I'm happy with myself. I thought you would do the change.
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TF-Wizard In reply to TheNashNetwork [2013-07-15 07:02:19 +0000 UTC]
Oh my dear friend, All I can do is present you the scenario, it is up to you to initiate the change. Think of a horror movie where the hapless victims choose not to enter the scary room and awake the terrifying creature. That is essentially what you are doing by not changing these settings. Although, I suppose we can end this little tale with you feeling happy and confident as well...
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TF-Wizard In reply to TheNashNetwork [2013-07-15 14:47:14 +0000 UTC]
So it's up to you how we continue then. That was the experiment of this scenario.
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-14 15:17:45 +0000 UTC]
You click the button and, nothing happens. Ah, isn't it exhilarating to realize when you are writing these things that you have that sort of power! To simply dash someone's hopes of a fun little Roleplaying experience and scatter them on the winds! But no matter, we can certainly have fun anyway. You find yourself on a street corner when you hear a great explosion and a monstrous roar.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 19:35:09 +0000 UTC]
I run in the direction of the explosion to see if anyone is hurt and how I can help
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-14 19:37:39 +0000 UTC]
As you run in the direction, you see some sort of giant monster! It is breathing fire and there are people scattering everywhere. Curiously enough, they seem to be ignoring the small green squirrel creature running towards you.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-14 23:48:20 +0000 UTC]
I scan the area for anyone thats hurt, before getting distracted, "Wait, green squirrel?"
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-15 00:20:15 +0000 UTC]
The green squirrel hops toward you and looks at you. "I need your help or all of these people will die! Will you help, please!" He looks at you with adorable puppy dog (despite being a squirrel...) eyes.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 01:26:10 +0000 UTC]
"What in the seven hells?" I say to myself before nodding to the odd, green animal
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-15 07:04:42 +0000 UTC]
The green animal nods back to you. "Then we have made our contract!" It cries as you feel a strange rush of energy flowing through you!
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 14:25:07 +0000 UTC]
I fall to the ground. "Ah. Whats happening to me?" I demand
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-15 14:48:58 +0000 UTC]
The green squirrel cheerily replies "With this power, you can stop all the monsters." For you time seems to slow to a near stop, you are covered in an odd green light, the energy flowing through you feels good, like it is empowering you, helping you, giving you power.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 21:16:07 +0000 UTC]
I look the the squirrel "What must I do? How do I control this power?"
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-15 21:38:50 +0000 UTC]
"You will soon see, It'll be quite natural." You feel the magical energies filling you, changing you, blessing you. You feel your skin clearing of blemishes and your hair becoming clean and silky. You feel yourself becoming more powerful and beautiful all at the same time.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 22:29:15 +0000 UTC]
I smile at the power boost and look to find the monster from before, I run to where it is and prepare to attack
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-15 22:45:08 +0000 UTC]
Your changes do not stop however as you dash towards the monster, you find your body becoming leaner and smoother, while your hips expand and your torso begins to press inward.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-15 23:24:41 +0000 UTC]
As I near the monster I shout at it "Hey stop, or I shall punish you!" I skid to a halt and strike a pose
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-16 01:59:41 +0000 UTC]
As you skid to a pose, you find your voice has changed to that of a young woman's. Your breasts expand to modst B-cups, and you find the bulge that formerly occupied your pants is gone.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-16 02:22:24 +0000 UTC]
"Kyaaa!" I scream after noticing my new body, before looking back at the monster and dodging out of the way of the mosters attack, landing painfully on my new boob "Owww. Damn that little green monster"
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-16 02:32:20 +0000 UTC]
Now your clothes glow and begin to shift!
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-16 02:37:31 +0000 UTC]
'Well at least they will fit better' I think as I slip behind a dumpter to dodge another attack 'Man I used to be a 13 in mens shoes, now I can't be more than a womens 6'
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-16 02:42:11 +0000 UTC]
Your clothes, still glowing green, begin to reform themselves into an exquisitely ornate white and green schoolgirl uniform, with lovely tassels and beautiful green knee high socks. Your hair has also turned green in the sequence.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-16 02:47:08 +0000 UTC]
"Oh goody, whats next, heels and pigtails?" I jump away from the dumpster just before its destoyed "And why am I green?"
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-16 02:51:59 +0000 UTC]
The squirrel, who has run next to you, replies to your questions. "How do you figure this stuff out!" You realize your longer hair is held up in pigtails, and you feel your shoes shift into beautiful jade high heels. "As for the green, every hero needs a color!"
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-16 02:59:25 +0000 UTC]
"Of coarse they do" I say dryly "Any idea what I should be doing to stop this thing?" I jump back again, landing a lot easier then I should in the heels
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-16 12:51:47 +0000 UTC]
The squirrel-creature grinned and continued to talk a little. "Oh, you'll know soon." You see more green magical light in frontΒ of you in a long curved shape. You can feel the power running through it. As you grip the magical thing, the light flies away and you now hold a magical bow with green tassles! A quiver appears on your back.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-16 14:54:40 +0000 UTC]
"Thats more like it" I jump back again, further then I ever would have been able to do before as I knock and arrow and take aim. "Emerald Twilight!" I release the arrow and send it flying toward the monster
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-16 17:02:00 +0000 UTC]
The arrow grows with a beautiful radiant green light as it flies towards the monster, the monster roars before being pierced by the arrow. It starts to growl before cracks leaking green light appear on its frame. It screams as it explodes in light.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-16 19:30:04 +0000 UTC]
"Well, I'm glad that the monster is gone. Now what am I called? And how do I turn back?" I ask as I pull down the skirt of my outfit, which is a tad too short
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-16 22:09:33 +0000 UTC]
The green squirrel-creature looks at you. "You can call yourself whatever you want! But you may want to add magical warrior or Jade Wizard or something to your name when you're on the job. How to turn back? All you have to do is say Henshin!"
((Feel free to say Henshin, but I'd like to describe your transformation please))Β
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-17 02:52:58 +0000 UTC]
"Well, I think Green Arrow is right out. I don't wanna get sued. Think Jade Archer is too close?" I muse before saying "Henshin" I don't feel too different though, and my clothes and haircolor are all that change. I'm now wearing green and black striped thigh high socks, knee high black boots, with a black mini and a green tee. There is also a small arrow shaped pandant around my neck, and my hair is now black-with green streaks. "WHY AM I STILL A GIRL" I shout "AND WHY DO I LOOK LIKE A GOTH CHICK"Β
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-17 15:08:42 +0000 UTC]
The squirrel smiles innocently, and maybe a little lewdly. "Well, we can't have our legendary hero be a boy! That's no fun, she has to be a high school girl! As for the clothes, I figured you'd like them, I can change them if you really want me to...Oh, you'll have to reapply for high school by the way, I've never been very good at paperwork."
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-17 15:47:00 +0000 UTC]
My face gets redder and redder as the squirrel speaks "And where am I supposed to live? And how am I supposed to get food? You better run before I figure out how to change again. You might catch a stray arrow" I threaten and my pendant flashes
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-17 15:59:39 +0000 UTC]
The green squirrel looks a little surprise. "Oh, uh, erm, huh. Well I can understand you're a little angry, not that you can use your powers against me, but I think I can help you. A former client of mine runs a burger shop downtown, I'm sure she can get you a job, and maybe even food. As for where you live, don'' you have a house or something?"
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-17 20:13:35 +0000 UTC]
"Under my old identity. I have nothing now, unless you somehow changed reality when you changed me, which from the sound of it, you didn't. Where is this burger shop? I could use one"
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-18 15:09:46 +0000 UTC]
The green squirrel looked a little embarrassed. "Oh, er, right. I can get you an apartment, It'll be pretty cheap though, this gig pays surprisingly low. Oh, and I can show you to the burger shop." The green squirrel runs into the city.
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-18 15:50:23 +0000 UTC]
I sigh and run after Β the small green creature, trying not to flash anyone in my short skirt and slightly heeled boots, which is are still really new to me
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-18 19:06:20 +0000 UTC]
((Would it be alright with you if we wrap this up soon?))
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-19 03:16:39 +0000 UTC]
((oh sure, sorry, i was really enjoying it. I might actually wanna use this character in future rps XD))
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-19 14:46:20 +0000 UTC]
((Oh don't get me wrong, I was enjoying this a ton too! I just figured we should finish it up soon as I have some other work I'd like toΒ do, we'll haveΒ a few more posts however))
You run through the city streets, finding more people staring at you than ever before. YouΒ reach the burger joint and enter the shop. It looks somewhat like a Mcdonald's, but with significantly more class. It is around 2Β O'clock, so there are very fewΒ people in the store. A young woman greets you, "Welcome to Fletcher's! How Can we help you! She doesn't seem to notice the little green squirrel." The squirrel whispersΒ to you. "Make sure to ask for the manager, and say your name is Jade, okay?"Β
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-19 16:58:05 +0000 UTC]
"Hi, I'm Jade. Is there any chance I could talk to the manager?" My stomach growls slightly, but all my cash was in my now non-existent pockets, so I ignore it and wait for the manager
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TF-Wizard In reply to onnanohikari [2013-07-19 17:17:18 +0000 UTC]
The young lady at the counter blinks in surprise. "Oh, so you're a , huh...interesting. You said you were Jade or something, you can call me Aquamarine when we're on the job, okay?"
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onnanohikari In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-07-19 18:19:10 +0000 UTC]
"Yeah, I guess it's Jade. Nice to meet you" I say as I give the little green furball a dirty look
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