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Published: 2016-03-29 07:57:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 13355; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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Initially when I started this project, I looked into alternate places to host the story that would allow me to format it as I like without being forced to stretch the page to absurd lengths. But I learned you can upload .pdf files to the site which basically accomplishes exactly what I wanted. So, from now on, the DB Redux project's story will be available here in my DA gallery.To start things off, we have the story of Jaco, presented in a hybrid novel and script format used by Toriyama when writing Resurrection "F". My Redux adaption of this specific arc is relatively unchanged from the original version, though there are some minor tweaks for better consistency with the rest of the project's world.
Proofread by PokeNuva
-*-*Disclaimer*-*-
The series of submissions labeled under the title of DB Redux are part of a fan rewrite of the official series. Anything that you see in the art or description that varies from the original manga or anime sources is most likely intentional. While I appreciate that you are taking the time to look at my gallery and notice these differences, I do not require a comment on what needs "correcting" because it wasn't "originally like that".
However, if you'd like to discuss these changes, or the project in general, you're welcome to join my DB Redux Discord server for the community members, an early look at finished & WIP character art and links to full battle power lists.
Thank you, and please enjoy!
Dragon Ball (Z, GT, etc.), copyright to Toriyama Akira, Shueisha, Toei Animation, etc.
No part of this gallery may be reproduced, distributed, performed, publicly displayed, or made into a derivative work without the permission of The-Devils-Corpse
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Comments: 12
BlueLightPirate [2017-05-27 20:29:53 +0000 UTC]
Am I the only one that can't read this? And, also, to the person right under me (I hope), Asura (from DBM) is an amazing artist.
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PokeNuva In reply to BlueLightPirate [2017-06-01 00:29:34 +0000 UTC]
Are you using mobile? I tried viewing this on my iPhone and it just shows the preview picture. It works fine on my laptop. If you have a desktop or laptop try those instead.
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BlueLightPirate In reply to PokeNuva [2017-06-01 08:03:36 +0000 UTC]
I was on my laptop xD...
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PokeNuva In reply to BlueLightPirate [2017-06-01 18:49:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh.. Well then I'm not sure what the problem is (or was? It might have fixed now). Sorry to hear that, the proofreader did a pretty handsome job, I think at least. lol
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BlueLightPirate In reply to PokeNuva [2017-06-04 14:45:30 +0000 UTC]
Nah man, still nothing turning up . But... "Handsome"? Was that a typo or a joke I'm missing.
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PokeNuva In reply to BlueLightPirate [2017-06-05 03:23:03 +0000 UTC]
The way I'm using handsome there, is just another way of saying something is well made/good quality.
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BlueLightPirate In reply to PokeNuva [2017-06-05 16:31:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh, ok. I thought it might've been something like you having been the proofreader or... I dunno .
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FlashFighter212 [2016-03-29 17:12:15 +0000 UTC]
Prehaps one day, a talented person would Redraw the manga lol
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The-Devils-Corpse In reply to FlashFighter212 [2016-03-29 19:31:37 +0000 UTC]
For Jaco specifically, there wouldn't be much need. Almost all of my changes are only to the dialogue.
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hg-project [2016-03-29 16:30:25 +0000 UTC]
Ah yes, the delicious Jaco fruit of proofreading hell.
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