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Published: 2008-10-17 08:24:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 22806; Favourites: 513; Downloads: 0
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So this is page 7 off 1st issue of Street Fighter II Turbo (which is out now, BUY IT!)I'm just posting it up as an example of how I'm a moron.
See, (A) was my first colour attempt, which was both fun and challenging to colour (light setting etc, lots of playing around). Re-read the script and realized that I had coloured it showing the wrong time of day (I'm a moron)
So yeah, There went a few hours work down the drain, fortunatly the flats were layed out and it was all about re-lighting.
(B) is how It was supposed to look like and how it was printed.
Thought I'd share this.
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I really need to find time to go to the comic shop soon, so i could see how it printed out for myself.
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aw, how unfortunate, i like the lighting better in the first one, but if it it requires a different time, i guess that can't be helped, lol
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the need to read indeed i see.
the 1st one doth rock harder though, ur stuff rock hard all the time, like rock is ever soft ...pshh...well i think sedimentary is...but thats stil hard compared to sponge n stuff
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I just bought the comic and this scene was my least favorite and let me tell you why. This is just a critique, don't get pissed but this scene didn't look real at all. The walls and the desk are empty. Their should at least be a laptop and a picture of his family, it should also include though other case files on the desk and maybe a drink. The scene was really plain and boring. I'd like to see you punch it up and blow me out of my seat. I think this comic, and YOU, have a lot more to offer.
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mate i totally felt the same about the scene.
I was told later later, that I should've added more shit in the room, but then I directed them to the reference of the the office room from one of the previous issues (it was a really bare room)
So me, who likes to follow as much continuity from the previous series as I can, did such. Only being infomed later that I probably should've added more shit (Which now I have been)
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I posted a pic, hope you don't mind. I copied this pic into photoshop and painted over it what the office should probably look like. I added a bunch of stuff on his desk, i gave credit to you but if you want me to take it down let me know.
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Good to hear. I can guarantee you then that i will buy every issue of street fighter. Keep up the good work Chamba!
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oh well, lesson learned lol. But A is definitely the best
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Dang, too bad, I love the lighting in the first one!
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I'm buying it today, I promise. I prefer your original lighting. The light creeping through the blind looks great. And the long shadows on the desk do too.
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Awesome. I actually like A better. The lighting gives it a cool look.
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still kinda lost there bud, what time of the day is the second one?I cant tell, it looks dark outside, and light from indoors.
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its night time w/ office light on that '
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I think it will be much better with white BG
great done dude
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Awesome piece, are you or any of the other udon guys going to give tutorials on the way you draw? Not just coloring?
Also, you said the comic is out now, but the only place I've seen it says it won't be out until the 28th of October.
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looks great, I cant wait to pick up the book
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I like A better. It seems to have more life. The lighting is excellent.
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Showing how the light changes is very interesting...
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Its interesting how the mood changes heavily from just the type of day. Looking at your art is the equivalent of taking an art class.
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Confucious Jay say, "thou not moron for if he take what he thinks is mistake and turn it into practice." Dude, chalk it up to simple practice of lighting, which I so desperately need!!!
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well in the end, that is what it became of it. lighting experimentation and further practice.
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Yeah god knows I need to practice more and get some art finished
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If it makes you feel any better. I wouldn't have noticed until it was printed. I suck like that.
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They both look great, I actually really liked the left one!Haha! Awesome work!
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Wooooow, that is CRAZY! I really like the way A looks but I guess you gotta do whatcha gotta do.
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i usually do it but for me is so normale that i don't take care and pass through
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It's funny, I actually don't think I would have had this great urge to fave it instantly, if both versions hadn't been there. It's the difference in effects I really like. You really know what you're doing. Err... that came out wrong. I guess what I'm trying to say is that this shows a great deal of talent. *goes to check rest of your gallery*
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i try and learn from surrounding when it comes to lighting/shadowcasting etc.
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OH JEEZE, that's excellent
Personally, if it makes you feel any better,
both are awesome, but I love your first version.
I thought it was a real photo before I clicked.
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aint that a bitch. oh well. i really did A more too. has a casablanca feel to it. know what i mean...
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The colors are fantastic in both I'm terrible at lighting that why I draw black and white comics with little to no shadowing XD LOL But as amazing as ever You deserv to draw for a published comic your arts really great ^^
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haha , wasted hours, that sucks. too bad i think A looks better,more intense. would be SO awesome if it had venetian blinds or something, having that striped shadow across the room 
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What's up with the room? It looks skewed, not one horizontal or vertical line. Was that intentional for story telling? The tiles in the Chun-Li panel look also weird, not like they share the perspective of her.
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ya knwo what's funny and odd.
when I actually follow the graphics rule of technical perspective, most things tend to look 'unproper' in accordance to what we see.
But when I myself skew and tweak around with perspecting following the basis of the perspective rule, I usually work it so that it would work it within a fish eye lense which is closer to what we see.
so to answer your question, yes it was inetentional.
the use of technical perspective really helped convey the office atmosphere I was after. Nothing organic and flowy.
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There is nice work on both panels! I would still prefer A, but they are both incredible... On the third panel down her eye looks a little disproportionate but overall this is FANTASTIC! KEEP IT UP! (I'm still jealous of your mad skills!!!!
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disproportionate in accordance to?
It's the lack of 'white shine' that might give off a certain appearance.
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In accordance to the other eye, the left one looks unnaturally smaller to me but then again... that's probably just me... and yes the lack of white shine could be giving it that illusion. It's definetly a better job than I could do (that's for sure...) I didn't mean any harm by it... thought I would just point it out is all. [link]
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oh no, it's good that you did point out something you notice, whether it be just something you see or was done by accident etc.
all good.
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I like A better... >_< But time of day is important....
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