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Description So this is page 7 off 1st issue of Street Fighter II Turbo (which is out now, BUY IT!)

I'm just posting it up as an example of how I'm a moron.
See, (A) was my first colour attempt, which was both fun and challenging to colour (light setting etc, lots of playing around). Re-read the script and realized that I had coloured it showing the wrong time of day (I'm a moron)
So yeah, There went a few hours work down the drain, fortunatly the flats were layed out and it was all about re-lighting.
(B) is how It was supposed to look like and how it was printed.

Thought I'd share this.
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Comments: 276

Shizoru In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 16:21:57 +0000 UTC]

A looks way better, good job ~`

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OrangePopFox [2008-10-17 16:18:14 +0000 UTC]

Well that sucks! That first panel's lighting does look really great though!

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glorwen [2008-10-17 16:13:19 +0000 UTC]

I actually like A way better... XD

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geoffreydean [2008-10-17 16:03:14 +0000 UTC]

Really cool insight. Thank you!

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unexpectedgift [2008-10-17 16:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Hooray for lighting changes! I had to fav. This is too good.

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JoeMDavis [2008-10-17 16:01:48 +0000 UTC]

the lighting one the first I like a lot more. Sucks you worked so hard on it. Either way great page!

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Cynosura In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 16:01:24 +0000 UTC]

Even if it was the right time of day... nobody sits in their office when it's all dark like that.

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mooseace In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 15:44:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh man I've done that kind of thing before I like them both but the first one is way more dynamic.

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skyshrouds In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 15:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Aww Jeff, you're not a moron, we all make mistakes, with all your posts lately, it's understandable, your works are great, please don't bully yourself.

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Santolouco [2008-10-17 15:30:52 +0000 UTC]

I like the first one better!
Too bad this should be happeing at night
But it came out nicely anyway!

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sky665 [2008-10-17 15:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow! But A looks so much better! XP

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martabeceiro [2008-10-17 15:11:55 +0000 UTC]

I preffer A

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Hesstoons [2008-10-17 15:11:01 +0000 UTC]

I have done that before lol right on bro!

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MOtero [2008-10-17 15:09:36 +0000 UTC]

B tiene el look de que es serio, de que son guardias secretos o algo y tienen el money por que en la oficina hay luz y se ve elegante, el otro parese que no hay luz en la oficina y eso esta misterioso.

Son profesionales, nose, estan buenos.

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Lulie [2008-10-17 15:08:59 +0000 UTC]

That's neat. It's amazing how much lighting can affect the feel to the picture. In the first, it seems a lot more ominous and uncomfortable for the girl. In the second, it seems a lot more relaxed and closer to them being equals, instead of the guy being her superior.

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JadedJay [2008-10-17 15:06:26 +0000 UTC]

They're both pretty awesome. ^.^

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akusma In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 14:52:51 +0000 UTC]

I think A looks much nicer.

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MrEdison In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 14:49:28 +0000 UTC]

The lighting is outrageous... In the thumbnail view I seriously thought these were photographs.

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RustedUrsa [2008-10-17 14:42:41 +0000 UTC]

If I were the writer, I would have at least tried to alter the script to keep A in, because it looks so much better. I love the light pouring in from under the shade.

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theCHAMBA In reply to RustedUrsa [2008-10-17 15:03:38 +0000 UTC]

wouldn't of worked if it was changed.
it was best that I corrected my own error

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RustedUrsa In reply to theCHAMBA [2008-10-17 17:33:13 +0000 UTC]

Too bad. Well, thanks for posting the older one. Like I said, it's really cool.

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brokenALCHEMY [2008-10-17 14:39:39 +0000 UTC]

I actually think the colours on the left create a better atmosphere, but obviously, you can't publish something that doesn't go with the script. xD

Great work.

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subtitleb In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 14:39:26 +0000 UTC]

shit happens...

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Osha-Briefs In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 14:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic job!

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Jeffrywith1e In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 14:22:59 +0000 UTC]

the wall and window frame in B look like a photo. Amazing

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ZurdoM [2008-10-17 14:21:25 +0000 UTC]

these look sweeet man, love the pannel structure

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fernyxferny [2008-10-17 14:13:40 +0000 UTC]

You are a generous god, -with a two days beard-

There's a fat lot to learn from something like this... not only about lining, but also about working conciousness...

But seriously, your generosity as a professional artist is just stunning... there's not a day I regret having you in the top of my admiration list....

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OrenDotan In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 14:12:59 +0000 UTC]

B looks more dramatic

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AccruedAbroad In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 14:04:51 +0000 UTC]

I like A better.

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Animus3 [2008-10-17 13:45:07 +0000 UTC]

lol

Aww...poor Chamba. ^^ At least you made the correction quickly enough.

And I prefer A, personally.

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DSil [2008-10-17 13:24:38 +0000 UTC]

Ouch. A looks so good and everything. I woulda just thrown something about a time machine in there.

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StevenSanchez [2008-10-17 13:10:07 +0000 UTC]

Looks great, but the office needs some plants Great work!

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theCHAMBA In reply to StevenSanchez [2008-10-17 14:04:04 +0000 UTC]

haha i was gonna say the same thing.
but there is one offscreen (which can be seen in the page before) heh

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HughFreeman [2008-10-17 13:06:02 +0000 UTC]

Dumbass.. lol
I kid.
The first one rules, so much infact they should've re-wrote the script to accomodate for you mistake haha

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theCHAMBA In reply to HughFreeman [2008-10-17 14:04:27 +0000 UTC]

nah, t'was my mistake
my mistake to fix.

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Atata In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 12:57:44 +0000 UTC]

This is still a great example on how well you can display lighting dawn - dusk :] gj. I really don't think it's time wasted if you really had put effort and skill into it. They should changed the time of day to fit your first pic anyways XP.

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theCHAMBA In reply to Atata [2008-10-17 14:05:34 +0000 UTC]

my fault for not clearly reading the script (and only one line did it describe it, the one line i missed, hah)

still yeah, it was fun seeing the outcome of a scene lit in two different ways.

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obsidianfists [2008-10-17 12:57:19 +0000 UTC]

I like your first one better - your instincts were on point!!

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theCHAMBA In reply to obsidianfists [2008-10-17 14:06:19 +0000 UTC]

instincts maybe, but didn't follow script
so instinct for the 2nd and proper version was more corect

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obsidianfists In reply to theCHAMBA [2008-10-19 00:05:36 +0000 UTC]

yes, yes I know. But I have a problem with authority. heh. Both of them are dope though!

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DeadlyPancake [2008-10-17 12:49:04 +0000 UTC]

That's a little tragic, and a little funny. It's also pretty damn cool.

I personally might've thrown this in the resources bin. To a beginnier in this style, it'd be a great PSD to look at in order to learn how to create different kinds of light. But a rose is a rose, yeah?

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theCHAMBA In reply to DeadlyPancake [2008-10-17 12:52:41 +0000 UTC]

and in this case, the different lighting's smell differently (if they're both roses that is)

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DeadlyPancake In reply to theCHAMBA [2008-10-17 13:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Well, I was really just saying that about categorizing it differently (a rose by any other name would smell as sweet - recategorizing doesn't really change what it is), but as far as misdirected applications of a metaphor go, that one was pretty good. lol

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theCHAMBA In reply to DeadlyPancake [2008-10-17 14:06:39 +0000 UTC]

mmhmm

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DeadlyPancake In reply to theCHAMBA [2008-10-17 17:08:36 +0000 UTC]

(I said "misdirected applications of a metaphor" before noon. I feel like an egghead.) Xd

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AmandaMac1992 [2008-10-17 12:30:56 +0000 UTC]

I still like the (A) better. I sets that a little bit better.
:#

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emmychidna In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 12:30:29 +0000 UTC]

lol. Everyone has their 'duh' moments. It's alright XD both look good though.

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Squiggler In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 12:30:00 +0000 UTC]

ah sounds annoying
I like A better though so it wasn't for nothing

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chogotou In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 12:29:11 +0000 UTC]

i really like your first version XD
ahhh sucks that you had to redo it, but it looks good

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Timon1771 [2008-10-17 12:26:44 +0000 UTC]

wow its so dark outside (panel B)

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