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theYTfox — Sphinx Labirynth OCT ref

Published: 2019-03-09 00:46:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1713; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 6
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PigeonPheonix [2019-03-27 07:30:55 +0000 UTC]

I would commit murder for this beautiful child. 

Seriously though, great job with the character design, he's adorable 

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Blippin [2019-03-10 02:19:07 +0000 UTC]

He's so cute! Poor little guy just wants to go somewhere he wont be turned into a coat! I'm definitely rooting for him, I love his design and characterization!

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ohnonotthem [2019-03-09 17:17:58 +0000 UTC]

Aww, this guy's adorable! Good luck!

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Nothofagus-obliqua [2019-03-09 16:29:24 +0000 UTC]

Gosh, he has such a beautiful design!! Best of luck in the competition ^^

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ChimericMachinations [2019-03-09 04:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Hi, YT! Sphinx just needs to be balanced before we accept him, and otherwise looks good.


Right now he has 7 strengths (his bug calming ability counts as one) and only 3 valid weaknesses: his fragility, physical weakness, and slowness, and the slowness need to be rephrased to state specifically that he is slow rather than just “easy to outrun”.


His “no strong natural offense” doesn’t count and having a bite comparable to a dog isn’t a weakness at all but could be a strength. It doesn’t have to be listed as such, but nor is it a valid weakness.


Not swimming isn’t a valid weakness as competitors will never be forced to swim during the tournament.


Kleptomania isn’t a weakness since he’s good at taking things, so it’d only count if he got noticed, and since he’s skilled, that doesn’t seem likely. it doesn’t create a particular disadvantage.


He needs four more weaknesses to be balanced; there is a list of suggestions in Character Design if that would be helpful to you!

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theYTfox In reply to ChimericMachinations [2019-03-09 11:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Alright! Sorry I was writing this late at night and kinda rushed that part and didn't think it through -w-"
Is it ok now? I added more weaknesess and also tried fixing the previous ones.

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ChimericMachinations In reply to theYTfox [2019-03-09 15:10:00 +0000 UTC]

No worries! He’s all set now, you can start your audition whenever you’d like.

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