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Published: 2010-11-08 05:03:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 459; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description     Alex boarded the bustling train and sat down by himself. There was a train station right outside Shepherd's Glen, so he knew where he was going. He closed his eyes for a moment, but he was soon snapped out of his trance as an older woman, maybe in her early thirties, spoke to him. She had pale skin and very dark hair pulled back in a louse bun. She almost looking like his mother when she was younger.

    "E-excuse me...do you mind if I sit next to you?" She looked nervous and avoided his gaze.

    "Not at all." And then he turned his head to look out the window. She sat down, but seemed to be leaning as far away from him as possible. She looked rather uncomfortable. "You okay?" He asked softly.

    "Um...I'm fine...just a little nervous is all. I always get nervous when I'm out this late." She gripped onto her purse.

      "Do you want to talk...?" Alex smiled at the woman sweetly. She relaxed slightly.

      "I'm Angela...." She smiled brightly.

       "Alex...nice to meet you."
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Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 03:38:20 +0000 UTC]

SEE SEE EVERYONE LIKES ANGELA.
Fuck yea.
OKAY NOW FOR A REAL REVIEW:
Alex seems like a kind of a creeper in this chapter- No offense- But then again, isn't he always a creeper? Angela seems just a little more unstable than before. I can't really say if that's good or not. It's short, but as a basic story line for a longer remake, It's still pretty good.
ACTUAL REVIEW OVER.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 03:48:04 +0000 UTC]

DUDE, HOW IS HIM KILLING PEOPLE NOT BEING A CREEPER? XD
The point of the story isn't to make him bad, but DARKER. XD
But thankies for review. :3
(I'm making Angela like that on purpose. Sorta like she can sense what he's done)

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-10 04:08:51 +0000 UTC]

No, I mean like, Socializing Creeper.
And I never said it was to make him bad, did I? I understand it's supposed to make him darker. Very well done. And no problem.
By the way, when do you think the next chapter will be out?
(omgphysics.)

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 04:10:10 +0000 UTC]

LOL PHYSICS, WHAT IS THAT? XD
Hrm, maybe tonight.

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-10 04:13:29 +0000 UTC]

Physic = Someone who can sense crazy shit, like ghosts and stuff.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 04:14:27 +0000 UTC]

I THOUGHT YOU SAID PHYSICS, LIKE THE SCIENCE.
I CAN READ.
OH I KNOWS WHAT YOU MEAN. LOL

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-10 04:15:19 +0000 UTC]

FFFLOL.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 04:16:07 +0000 UTC]

LOLZ

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-10 04:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Ohgodyouriconissooodsitracting.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 04:19:39 +0000 UTC]

ISITREALLY?

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-10 04:21:05 +0000 UTC]

LOLYES.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 04:22:11 +0000 UTC]

WOOTSWRITINGNEXTCHAPTER

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-10 04:23:54 +0000 UTC]

LOLKAY.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 04:24:42 +0000 UTC]

WOOTS.

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-10 04:27:36 +0000 UTC]

INORITE.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 04:27:52 +0000 UTC]

LOLZ

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-10 04:29:04 +0000 UTC]

I WAS GONNA SAY SOMETHING BUT I FORGOT WHAT IT WAS

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 04:29:57 +0000 UTC]

REMEMBER, THEN.

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-10 04:39:41 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 04:40:06 +0000 UTC]

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-10 04:41:44 +0000 UTC]

I find the coolest shit.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-10 04:42:53 +0000 UTC]

YEAH.
FIND ME SOMETHING PERVERTED.

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sandrasabaka [2010-11-09 05:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Angela? What?! I wanna read the next part!

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thinkingorplotting In reply to sandrasabaka [2010-11-09 12:40:13 +0000 UTC]

xD
Soon.

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SilentHillFan1 [2010-11-08 21:15:28 +0000 UTC]

OMG it's Angela!

the story is very short, but then again very well writin.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to SilentHillFan1 [2010-11-08 22:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
I hope the next part will be longer.

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DaisukeBaka [2010-11-08 05:10:42 +0000 UTC]

ANGELA IS SUCH A CUTIE.
One of the only few chicks in Silent Hill I would go gay for.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to DaisukeBaka [2010-11-08 05:11:37 +0000 UTC]

SAME HERE.

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DaisukeBaka In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-08 05:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Mhmmm.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to DaisukeBaka [2010-11-08 05:21:54 +0000 UTC]

DELICIOUS.

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DaisukeBaka In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-08 12:25:58 +0000 UTC]

<3

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thinkingorplotting In reply to DaisukeBaka [2010-11-08 12:37:21 +0000 UTC]

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DaisukeBaka In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-08 20:17:03 +0000 UTC]

: D

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Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-08 05:05:32 +0000 UTC]

WHAT THE HELL PURSE.
MINDFUCK
*does the matrix*

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-08 05:06:08 +0000 UTC]


DO YOU LIKE?

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-08 05:10:15 +0000 UTC]

ITS SO SHORT.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-08 05:11:16 +0000 UTC]

IT'S CAUSE YOU WERE LIKE "BLLLLLLAAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHH ANGELA!"
So I wanted to get it out as soon as possible. I plan on writing 3 or 4 more parts tomorrow.

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Kyuubi-one-sama In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-11-08 05:15:17 +0000 UTC]

lolfine. :C
[link]

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kyuubi-one-sama [2010-11-08 05:16:59 +0000 UTC]

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