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timmowarner β€” TIME Part 8

Published: 2014-01-06 00:58:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 37442; Favourites: 320; Downloads: 133
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Description Page 8 and the final part of "Time" written by myself and illustrated by Brainsister.


Inspired by the fan fiction "The Centrepiece of my Collection" by Geldon.


My Little Pony and all characters are Β© Hasbro.

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Comments: 252

schneelocke [2014-01-07 11:00:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh my... that was as beautiful as it was sad. What a gift to be able to see your dearest friend again when your time has come, even when you're aging so very differently; how wonderful to not be alone in your final moments. And what a gift that Rarity gave, too: being trapped in stone for an eternity for the sake of her beloved Spikey. Only the Element of Generosity herself could give so much, so selflessly.

Wow, I'm all teary-eyed now. Thank you.

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Blood-Phoenix78 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 10:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Just beautiful

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IguanaLeather [2014-01-07 09:45:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you. thank you so much for that. fallout equestria ruined me for spike. Β I needed this closure. I thought i was walking into the same hackneyed feels set up, but when you let them die together, i cried, and i cried hard. Β Thank you, you rock

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timmowarner In reply to IguanaLeather [2014-01-08 04:53:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Bysen In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 09:43:45 +0000 UTC]

Did Luna kill them?

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eksortso In reply to Bysen [2014-01-07 13:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Please don't let that have been the first thought that crossed your mind.

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Bysen In reply to eksortso [2014-01-12 13:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Well if she's not that what is she doing that she goes into the cave, flash of light, two shooting stars...?

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eksortso In reply to Bysen [2014-01-13 01:02:23 +0000 UTC]

Sorry to come across as abrupt. I hadn't noticed the two shooting stars. I'd thought the ending was a little more subtle than that (though it was subtle to begin with, for someone unfamiliar with what the shooting stars mean, which are most fans outside the fandom). Your question was legitimate, your guess was correct, but I misinterpreted it as being more callous than you intended it to sound.

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Bigstrital In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 08:29:06 +0000 UTC]

This fanfic was the first that made me cry. Evan more than MLD. This art bring back the feels.

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DerpyHooves216 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 08:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow im trying not to Cry in front of my brother...Β 

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Calimink [2014-01-07 08:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Just beautiful. Can't say more. My eyes are wet.

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T-2238 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 08:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice, but I would have thought Spike to have more thoughs about Twilight.

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akdsmith In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 08:02:17 +0000 UTC]

I wasn't prepared for these feels first thing in the morning!

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Dante-Wynter In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 07:58:23 +0000 UTC]

I - I - Damn! Got cinders in my eyes again.

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AmandaKuro In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 07:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Awmm :C

But I didn't get about Luna and the stars. I feel dumb .-.

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thasbrony In reply to AmandaKuro [2014-01-07 07:56:55 +0000 UTC]

rarity was frozen in time so they could die together, luna was there guide to the next world. and like with AJ's parents in apple family reunion the death become represented by the stars, i hope you get it now a little more

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CITRUSKING46 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 07:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Wish I could come up with a better comment, but that was great. Genuinely, 100% great.

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timmowarner In reply to CITRUSKING46 [2014-01-08 04:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Eye-Have-No-I In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 06:51:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh, god. The feels.

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secondsketch In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 06:50:33 +0000 UTC]

don't get me wrong, the story was very touching... i'm sorry but did Luna just straight up ice Rarity and Spike?

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midoricorey In reply to secondsketch [2014-01-07 12:00:34 +0000 UTC]

I believe so.

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DarkestSunset In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 06:11:09 +0000 UTC]

I hate you D;

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Kninjasticks In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 05:58:37 +0000 UTC]

crap... the feels have breached the liquid pride reserves.

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MoppyPuppy In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 05:44:50 +0000 UTC]

Did Luna just euthanize those two?

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Nightcolt-ca In reply to MoppyPuppy [2014-01-07 07:41:30 +0000 UTC]

Indirectly? Sure looks like it... quick teleport to the ionosphere (300-1000km altitude) and let them burn up on re-entry.

Or it could be that Spike called his own time and Rarity's down to the last minutes so all the dying was already done by the time Luna gave them their final parting gift.

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supermariodemon In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 05:30:54 +0000 UTC]

m.youtube.com/watch?v=zgoEspaz…

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BronyHunter97 [2014-01-07 05:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Well shit, now I'm tearing up.

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Bubz91 [2014-01-07 05:16:31 +0000 UTC]

how dare you throw those feels at me before bed!!! lol. beautifully written adn drawn.

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SHADOWtheHEJHOG In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 05:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Woah... The feels...

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frans97 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 05:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Dem feelz, an ting...

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AlphaOmega135 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 04:55:23 +0000 UTC]

This was awesome. Good job. The feela have been felt.

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ThatGuyOnTheInterweb In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 04:41:25 +0000 UTC]

Clap, clap, clap. This is the first and only tale of SpikexRarity that ended this way. It's very interesting and told quite well! Bravo!

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sammym09 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 04:24:11 +0000 UTC]

. . .wut. . .?



Β OOOHHHHHHH!

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Sturmlion1 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 04:08:46 +0000 UTC]

Wait? Luna is essentially there grim reaper?

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DeltsDash In reply to Sturmlion1 [2014-01-07 04:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Look in the stars of the last panel.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to DeltsDash [2014-01-09 03:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I saw them, two shooting stars. So she turned them into that. There still dead, so essentially she was their reaper.

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Odoga In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 04:05:16 +0000 UTC]

Hey look! Applejack's parents!Β 

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HallowNocturne In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 04:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh man... I was not expecting the way these last few pages went.Β  Well done.Β  Gonna go curl up in a ball for a little while.Β  Bravo.

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Cristatella In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 03:47:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to assume that Luna turned them into stars.

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Shadowscroller97 In reply to Cristatella [2014-01-07 04:59:04 +0000 UTC]

Naaah she just shot em and applejacks parents showed up to laugh

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cayleycom In reply to Shadowscroller97 [2014-01-07 06:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaaaaannd now the feels is gone. Thanks.
I cracked up when I read your comment Shadowscoller97. Totally Cracked.

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LAngel2 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 03:42:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm starting to tear up. Great comic series. Very soft simple and heartwarming, as well as sad. It is sad without trying to hard. The perfect kind of comic.

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typesolid In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 03:35:05 +0000 UTC]

que bonito

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Jdueler11 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 03:34:53 +0000 UTC]

WAIT! What did Luna do?!

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DeltsDash In reply to Jdueler11 [2014-01-07 04:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Look at the stars in the last panel.

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Mokrosuhibrijac In reply to Jdueler11 [2014-01-07 03:49:40 +0000 UTC]

euthanized them?

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PaperMatt202 [2014-01-07 03:28:13 +0000 UTC]

So Luna zapped AJ's parents and turned them into stars as well?Β  Eh, makes sense to me.

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Solaris90 In reply to ??? [2014-01-07 03:24:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm not crying, you're crying!


;~;

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TheFluffyNinja17 [2014-01-07 03:17:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, but I seem to be lost here, what happened at the end with Luna?

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DeltsDash In reply to TheFluffyNinja17 [2014-01-07 04:25:24 +0000 UTC]

Look at the stars in the last panel.

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