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Published: 2014-06-06 03:16:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1658; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 0
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Things are really heating up! Is that a signature spell Ame is casting? A spell I've wanted to draw the execution of in this redo for AGES~ The next few pages are a doozy, I'll do my best to get em out in a timely fashion!SHOTS FIRED, ROYCE IS KING SHITLORD. But they're demons, it's kind of the norm.
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Suko is a bit of a mystery at this point - it's intentional!
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Oh, okay
Royce is a dick, but he's not "insane king Nero", just king douchecanoe, so that threw me for a loop
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Yeah he's a butthole, but he's not super nuts.
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I dunno about KING Shitlord. Duke, perhaps. Or the Earl of Shitlordery. I mean, he doesn't even work for EA; that alone should disqualify his claim on kingship.
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Fair enough, he's a bastard, but he's not a slavedriver! ...to TOO many demons anyway, ahah.
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Exactly. He'd have to be a far grander dickwaffle to be KING Shitlord. But at least he has a goal to aim for!
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Ame looks deliciously evil in the last panel. Very nice.
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Thank you~! She is evil at her core after all!
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Royce: possible candidate for worst father of all time?
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Definitely in the running!
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That makes me ponder, how much Ame would be up to give for Royce Heartcore?
I mean, if hatred it's directly proportional to the reward. ย ย
I was just wondering, how can you measured a heartcore value? is it according to their demon rank or the power behind it?
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A lot, I imagine!
It's largely the power, but rank kind of coincides with that!
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Given the circumatances, he /has/ to, huh... Given that she has been, up to this point, the image of an obedient daughter, I get the odd sense there's something very deep and very serious behind the scenes on this one-
...wait. Wild theory coming via note.
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Yeeeeee, you're getting somewhere with that!
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Oh boy, coming up to some action! Can't wait to see how you handle more it!
Definitely liking the pose Ame has in the second panel, as well as Suko's expressions! Highly anticipating the next page, madame!
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YES, MORE ACTION~
Thank you very much, that means a lot <3
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I would imagine there would be quite a bit of collateral damage before all is said and done.
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Well, it's either a signature spell or a magical girl transformation sequence. Either's fine.
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Ron Burgundy: Boy, that escalated quickly... I mean, that really got out of hand fast.
Champ Kind: It jumped up a notch.
Ron Burgundy: It did, didn't it?
That was the first thing I thought of when this happened. ย I like the redone effects on her spell I also love Suko's cute little face in panel 1. Geez, although to be honest if I was a demon I would be like.... "But no matter what rank I have you might kill me if you are killing your own daughters..right?" but I guess demons usually don't ask those questions. XDย
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Haaaaw!
Yeeeah, demons are a little too selfish to consider the ramifications! But of course, Lilium is pretty much public enemy number one at this point for them, so they likely have a "WELL, I'm not THAT bad!" outlook.
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Be careful on the tone here, a lot of your influences like mine, are straight out comedies, and comedies can get away with a certain amount of silly. For example no one is going to question too hard how Pokey can fly around shoulder to shoulder and then Madeline can destroy a dock with Random and later it's fine, because it's funny; it's a wacky cartoon for the most part, the Worgs blow up but they are just smokey and cartoon bandaged. But once things get too dramatic and serious people will start to ask questions and it can be a mess.
Ame for example has real scars, her father is really abusive.ย
I know in Disgaea the demons go nuts like this, but it's very derpy and silly. No one really gets dramatic or if they do it's to make another joke. Ame's exchange with her dad is getting sort of serious, I am not quite sure what you are going for here, so I am just saying this to say it for now, but you know what I mean. And I am only trying to help XDย
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I'm definitely aiming for the Slayers approach - which has both serious and comedic moments! More in favor of comedy and adventure of course, as too much seriousness can be a drag.
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(They didn't have a Skies of Arcadia or Vyse one) ย lol My favorites as wellย
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It appears Sukina isn't daddy's favourite anymore. Instead of nine sports cars she now gets a helping of murder. I see her being a bit more spiteful with this turn of events.
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Aye! I definitely wanted Suko more involved in general, instead of JUST something important to Ame~ AM WRITE THING.
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It'll be interesting to see what happens with her this time around. Hope she helps out somewhat over being background fodder for most of the first seven chapters. xD;;
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Yeeeeeeeah, I AM LEARN THING FROM LAST TIME AHAH.
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Learning things is for weirdos
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yeah, that is a new low for mister royce. i cant wait til lilith kicks his behind in again, please tell me you arent taking that out?
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Yeah, Ame's big bad mom is still totally a thing!
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Aww Sukina's expressions ;w;
And yeah, heating up indeed :3
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