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Published: 2014-11-07 05:30:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1903; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 0
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THAT'S IT, COMIC'S OVER. SLADE WON.Except not really, gotta get Ame roughed up for the next part~! Slade is clearly taunting someone, so we'll see a bit of the overfiends before the real fun begins!
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Well uh, at least Ame went down the hole she wanted to get to in the first place at least?
The last two pages have been quite the payoff you've been touting, but be wary, you'r pages are getting a little over cluttered. Β If you're gonna have this much action/visual flair, be sure to space it out a little & show a clear distinction of your characters from the background.
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Oh these pages aren't shit, but thank you~! And yeah, I agree. I need to be okay with more open pages, a LOT of stuff happening here and I really could've easily pushed it back a page or so ;;
And yeah! Gotta work on pushing the characters. Thank you so much for the feedback! If you have suggestions for the backgrounds and characters popping, I'm all ears! Maybe blur, lighting? Hrmm.
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Blur is a easy solution, but you lose you'r awesome details sometimes which is frustrating. Β A recent trick I started to employ was to try SLIGHTLY saturating your BG's in whatever you'r ambient light source is. (bonus points if you create seperate shadow layer for your BG's, than apply said saturation only to the NON shaded area's. Β This effect doesn't take a lot of extra time if you plan it out right)
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Aye, I abuse blur sometimes after all! So basically, should consider adding different effects, and saturated colors. Integrating the two is definitely one of my weaker points, and I appreciate the help dude!
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lol Is it me or is Slade getting all feely with Ame? What a bad man Β
I'm surprised Suko wasn't like AAAAAA as the electricity had to have hit her too. So many great expressions on this page Β
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Slade IS pretty touchy feely, but y'know...creepy sadist!
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LOL Poor girl's stockings are worse for wear too, If you're a succubus you got to get more durable clothes, I mean Random just wears a t-shirt, but it's all magic-y to keep it on.....
Β Β Yep I explained that pretty well. Β
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Slade is hot XD lol sorry, Poor Ame!
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He is BEEF now, that much is true!
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Well that's probably going to leave a mark or three. And ya just gotta love Ame's face in the first panel.Β
Anywho, with this page, I guess I do share some issues that have been brought up already, such as Ame's seemingly stiff slugging in the third panel and her odd looking falling pose in the fourth.
Overall, could certainly be improved but it's not too bad a page.
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First panel is easily my favorite, yeee.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I need to loosen up the poses, especially in action sequences. Will definitely keep it in mind for the future! <3
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Well, Ame's face pretty much sums up everything in that panel just before the end.
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Mr. Goldilocks has quite the accent.
Also, putting someone in a hole is not game over, Slade, anime-version Team Rocket can attest to that!
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Hahaha, SO TRUE~ Bang em up sure, but it ain't over!
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Indeed, it ain't over for Ame 'til the fat lady sings!
...Err, not that you're fat Ame! While you appear to have a high-amount of fat in your upper abdominal region- I'm going to stop talking now, lest I give Ame more reason to mount my head on a wall.
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Bahahah!
Well, she's not rail thin either! I'm happy she's (relatively?) proportioned, ahahah!
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I probably woulda touched her somewhere else.
Like her heart~
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Her biggest assets weakness!
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Yar, hopefully just a setback!
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Wow, folks being really hard on this page. Β Honestly I'm enjoying Ame get a bit rattled and seeing Slade in action ... he's kinda hot. Β What accent should I be imagining him with? Β
The "well shit" is perfect and adorable XD
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Haaw! Well I explained myself - electricity damaging the stockings, something I got from MGS3 snrk.
Slade has a Scottish accent! And thank you~
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R u kidding me? Β Scottish? Β I'll be in my bunk.Β
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One attack fucked up her tights that much? But the rest are okay?
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While Metal Gear Solid may not be the best point of reference, I did that because of the electrocution scene with Eva. The electricity messed up her stockings in particular!
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Slaaaade...
Your zipper is undone. And your belt is sagging, Slade.
Slade. SLADE. You slob.
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A disgrace to all overfiends!
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Shit is richt and his accent is a trainwreck?
I can't believe this guy thinks he's cool.
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Yeah, he's largely just a shitlord, ahahh! None of the other overfiends like him, t'be fair!
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He's the George Costanza of the demon world.
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Oh god you gave him that kind of accent.. now we have to concentrate more to understand
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Thankfully he's not TOO chatty!
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Lightning powers go! Gotta say that the gals falling down looks a little weird. Considering that Ame was electrocuted I'm guessing she would fall forwards and be top heavy. But that's just a guess.
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Yar, I think that's one of the weaker points of the page. I have no idea how one would fall after electrocution, my guess would be ragdoll limp.
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I would say ragdoll. Suko seems okay since she was already in that position. But Ame fell forwards so would likely be going head first. Just my thoughts anyways.
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Smooth move, Slade. You knocked her down the hole she planned on escaping from anyway.
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S'TRUE. But I imagine her landing will now SUCK.
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She's a demon, she can walk it off.
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It's true! Eventually!
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What is his accent? I keep thinking Scottish/Irish, but I'm probably waaaaaaaaay off!
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