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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto.
Naruto The Last (c) Masashi Kishimoto. Studio Pierrot.
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Comments: 10

Aevrum [2016-11-12 10:28:50 +0000 UTC]

Hey,
I just discovered this and created an Account to thank you for your good work and to follow this story.
I like the subtle changes; they dont destroy the flow and coherency with the original story, but also make in the same time already a huge difference in the story with furthermore better pacing and focusing.
I especially liked the way you showed Sakuras Inner thought process as a bounceback from the last Manga Chapters with (I believe? My memory is not very good^^) minor changes within the Flashbacks respectively the omission of parts, that would made it hard to weave a plausible romantic reapproach between Naruto and Sakura in the next pages/chapters. I hope you keep your good hand woth this, I already can imagine the developments.

So thanks again and I hope you keep up the good work and hope to commenting henceworth the individual pages^^
(Please excuse, if this comment is odd placed, its the first time I "use" deviantart and the mobile app is no big help)

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tokai2000 In reply to Aevrum [2016-11-15 21:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your comment, I'm glad you like it. I will do my best with the rest of the story.

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KonohasCrimsonFox [2016-11-09 12:58:36 +0000 UTC]

I see. So Sai and Hinata are not with the team.

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tokai2000 In reply to KonohasCrimsonFox [2016-11-11 14:25:49 +0000 UTC]

No no, they are all working together as a team. Maybe I should have drawn them in the last panel, now it seems they were left behind.

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KonohasCrimsonFox In reply to tokai2000 [2016-11-11 17:32:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh I see. Yeah it seems that way. Continue the good work.

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StarWritter [2016-11-09 10:29:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice as always ^^

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tokai2000 In reply to StarWritter [2016-11-11 14:22:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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TheDarkpokeone [2016-11-09 10:11:42 +0000 UTC]

Sweet new page and now they are going into the great cave of ret-cons lol that is what I like to call it, but I know that you man will change things up a lot that the Film and make it a 100 times better as well.

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tokai2000 In reply to TheDarkpokeone [2016-11-11 14:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'll try my best. 

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TheDarkpokeone In reply to tokai2000 [2016-11-11 23:58:52 +0000 UTC]

That is okay just worried you mat get attacked by Hinata fans

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