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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto.
Naruto The Last (c) Masashi Kishimoto. Studio Pierrot
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Comments: 49

ImAShipper57 [2021-12-17 02:59:50 +0000 UTC]

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laprasomg [2021-08-05 00:02:28 +0000 UTC]

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SoraLove7 [2019-08-13 01:44:07 +0000 UTC]

you are so awesome!!! thank u so much for this!!

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tokai2000 In reply to SoraLove7 [2019-09-04 23:19:30 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias

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Crimson-Kaizer [2018-03-30 01:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Where is the lie, though?

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msyukimimaro97 [2017-05-28 15:08:30 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooh god seriusly that is just what i thought too! I'm not gonna buy that shit of rivality with sasuke for her just like the film said. They think we are idiots and they can fool us? Just for stupid money. Is insulting. Anyway i love your designs you are a genius!

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Mavapao1 In reply to msyukimimaro97 [2021-07-05 21:21:46 +0000 UTC]

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Sinistro23 In reply to msyukimimaro97 [2020-11-08 16:53:54 +0000 UTC]

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tokai2000 In reply to msyukimimaro97 [2017-05-29 12:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Yup, They should have come up with something better. All this "I love you because a rivalry with Sasuke" thing is really stupid.

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neilas96 [2017-05-15 11:23:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry i can't read page by page, i want to read everything in once so i'll wait till you finish ur work i stop there and i'll wait.
u draw like kishimoto and maybe better, i love the story evrything is perfect. Keep on it.
Do u have any idea when your story will end?

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tokai2000 In reply to neilas96 [2017-05-16 23:22:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you like it

I'm sorry but I don't know for sure when I'll be able to finish the story. I'll try to update as soon as possible.

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amandaseijo1 [2017-05-09 02:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Tokai xD back at it again with your amazingness <3 

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tokai2000 In reply to amandaseijo1 [2017-05-10 20:41:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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AliceTedder [2017-05-05 08:26:16 +0000 UTC]

From this I conclude that Naruto have a serious existential crisis. 

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Hollow-Kurosaki88 [2017-05-05 07:26:54 +0000 UTC]

this is the real uzumaki naruto i know..always sacrificing his happiness for her..im looking forward for the next chapter..

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Sinistro23 In reply to Hollow-Kurosaki88 [2020-11-08 16:47:00 +0000 UTC]

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tokai2000 In reply to Hollow-Kurosaki88 [2017-05-10 20:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

I'm working on it now.

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Daarian [2017-05-03 01:32:11 +0000 UTC]

If only this line was in movie. Why make up something as stupid as "Oh, it was because of rivalry with sasuke" instead of what he said before XD

Sure Naruto would have ended up in the same shoes as Link from OoT, but that would at least make sense, uuuuaaaaa...

Still, it wouldn't save the movie it was bad written.

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tokai2000 In reply to Daarian [2017-05-04 23:06:43 +0000 UTC]

I suppose they didn't want Hinata as Naruto's second choice.

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Daarian In reply to tokai2000 [2017-05-05 02:23:10 +0000 UTC]

Trust me they could have just say something like Sakura rejecting him, and naruto trying things with hinata after year or so. This is just an option, there is alot of ways they could have done this if you look outside of the THE LAST story box. Only two reasons as to way they didn't did any of that was eaither because they wanted to get it out of their way, or they had alot planned out, but it got cut down like FMA conqueror of shambala. Either way, the final script was a mess to the point where Naruto became dumb and not interesting. No wonder Kishimoto didn't wanted to have anything to do with the movie, other than designes XD

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Sinistro23 In reply to Daarian [2020-11-08 16:43:26 +0000 UTC]

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TheDarkpokeone [2017-05-02 20:40:24 +0000 UTC]

AND THIS IS ALREADY FAR BETTER THAT THE LAST. So this is already far better than the Last as Naruto know that he was in Genjutsu but I wonder what else shall happen as he may see more in the Genjutsu more hurt and that as that is what a Genjutsu does after all.

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tokai2000 In reply to TheDarkpokeone [2017-05-04 23:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

hope you'll like next pages  ^^

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Aevrum In reply to TheDarkpokeone [2017-05-02 22:15:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow, amazing, thanks for again for your hard work!

Just two remarks regarding the speeches; I'm not a native English speaker myself, but wouldn't a longer "Do you wanna fight!?" in the third panel be a little bit more fitting? And I think there is an 'a' missing in the sixth panel, "This is something I decided a long time ago".

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TheDarkpokeone In reply to Aevrum [2017-05-03 00:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Um I'm not the one who is doing this.

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Aevrum In reply to TheDarkpokeone [2017-05-03 13:18:57 +0000 UTC]

How did that happen? I didn't want to reply to you.^^

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TheDarkpokeone In reply to Aevrum [2017-05-03 21:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Not sure really, but its alright.

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samuraipanda85 [2017-05-02 17:31:44 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!

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tokai2000 In reply to samuraipanda85 [2017-05-04 23:27:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem

Thanks for your comments.

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NoOnis [2017-05-02 14:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! 

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tokai2000 In reply to NoOnis [2017-05-04 23:06:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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CrazyWolf76 [2017-05-02 13:58:00 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work, glad to see you back

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tokai2000 In reply to CrazyWolf76 [2017-05-04 23:09:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Trevyler [2017-05-02 07:07:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh I see you've updated. This wasn't what I was expecting but I liked it nonetheless. This basically is Naruto right here. You've managed to get his character right. This is the real Naruto man,
I'm glad you updated and hope you see this through to the end. It's amazing. Sorry for bothering you before I just get really anxious waiting for your pages more than I ever have for anything in a a little while.

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tokai2000 In reply to Trevyler [2017-05-05 00:27:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and don't worry about the message, It doesn't bother me. I'm happy you guys like the story

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Trevyler In reply to tokai2000 [2017-05-05 04:30:00 +0000 UTC]

Ok. I just don't want to be annoying. I just really like this especially compared to the canon so it's hard to wait for more.

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yusuke96 In reply to Trevyler [2017-05-02 17:47:54 +0000 UTC]

He's just so in character that I'm getting nostalgic here.

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Trevyler In reply to yusuke96 [2017-05-02 19:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Seriously. He's doing this better than Studio Perriot ever could.

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BigBDawg001 In reply to Trevyler [2017-05-02 19:23:34 +0000 UTC]

No kidding, and we're only a bit into some of the big stuff, so this makes a much better version of The Last. By a country mile

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Trevyler In reply to BigBDawg001 [2017-05-03 02:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Really? I've never watched the actual movie so I have no idea. I can't wait for more.

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BigBDawg001 In reply to Trevyler [2017-05-03 05:57:54 +0000 UTC]

I haven't watched The Last either, 'cause I refuse to on a moral point.

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Daarian In reply to BigBDawg001 [2017-05-05 02:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Wait, Wait, Wait, Wait you haven't watched it, but you call it bad? XDLMAO 
You should at least give it a watch before making statement like much better version, maybe you will like it.

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Trevyler In reply to Daarian [2017-05-05 04:29:01 +0000 UTC]

I know what happens in it. I'd rather not watch it. The only Naruto movie I've watched is Road to Ninja which I enjoyed.

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yusuke96 In reply to Trevyler [2017-05-15 10:06:29 +0000 UTC]

Wait a second. You haven't seen Naruto: Will of Fire? That was one of the best movies they have to offer between the character conflicts, fight scenes, and even comedy. It was just an all around good movie to watch that I suggest you get started on right away.

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Trevyler In reply to yusuke96 [2017-05-15 19:52:27 +0000 UTC]

I'll look into it then. I just never really watch the movies for most animes unless it's a short series on it's own.

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yusuke96 In reply to Trevyler [2017-05-16 19:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Well, tell me what you thought of it after you finish.

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Trevyler In reply to yusuke96 [2017-05-16 21:21:18 +0000 UTC]

Sure thing

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Daarian In reply to Trevyler [2017-05-05 22:18:46 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough)

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Trevyler In reply to BigBDawg001 [2017-05-03 17:19:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Same here

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