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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto.
Naruto The Last (c) Masashi Kishimoto. Studio Pierrot
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Comments: 56

antonyjoy In reply to ??? [2024-11-03 10:42:39 +0000 UTC]

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Severusiana [2019-04-30 23:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Maravilloso, de lejos mucho mejor que la pelicula the last 

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MegaDarkly [2017-06-01 03:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Good stuff man. This is the first time I've come across this story. Keep up the good work.

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tokai2000 In reply to MegaDarkly [2017-06-06 17:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, glad you like it

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TheIllusiveMan90 [2017-05-29 00:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done.  

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tokai2000 In reply to TheIllusiveMan90 [2017-05-29 10:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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TheIllusiveMan90 In reply to tokai2000 [2017-05-29 11:21:38 +0000 UTC]

No problem. I can't wait the next page. ^^

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suzukikenzai [2017-05-28 11:43:33 +0000 UTC]

早く続きが読みたいです。

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tokai2000 In reply to suzukikenzai [2017-05-30 00:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it. I'm working on the next pages.

ありがとうございました。

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Meesumali [2017-05-25 09:54:20 +0000 UTC]

are u gonna put  the controversy between hinata and sakura over naruto ....because u showed the scene where hinata is also thinking about naruto ...and if so will u pair her up with sasuke or kiba ....well i do have say the story is much better then original.

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tokai2000 In reply to Meesumali [2017-05-30 00:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Maybe some awkward encounter between the three of them but this time Hinata will have to move on.

I don't know yet who could be a good match for her, I'll think about it.

Also I'm glad you like it, thank you.^^

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Trevyler In reply to tokai2000 [2017-05-30 01:06:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm interested to see more. How's the next page coming along?

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CrazyWolf76 [2017-05-23 14:40:01 +0000 UTC]

Real good job here

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tokai2000 In reply to CrazyWolf76 [2017-05-29 10:51:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Epic-JP [2017-05-19 21:52:04 +0000 UTC]

So you're basically making the same thing of the movie BUT with the memory of Sakura, right?

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tokai2000 In reply to Epic-JP [2017-05-21 13:51:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I'm using the same story outline.

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Trevyler In reply to Epic-JP [2017-05-21 03:27:48 +0000 UTC]

He's doing everything much better. At least from my perspective.

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TheDarkpokeone [2017-05-18 10:15:47 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm the way I am seeing it right now is that Naruto got out of the Genjutsu that he was in and is now in Sakura's own Genjutsu, after all they were close together when it happened. So and this is just a guess on my part it seems that things for Sakura will get darker hence what a Genjutsu is.

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tokai2000 In reply to TheDarkpokeone [2017-05-21 13:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Correct. Naruto can see her dream because they got caught together inside the genjutsu.

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TheDarkpokeone In reply to tokai2000 [2017-05-21 20:05:33 +0000 UTC]

I know it and there is knowing he can do but watch.

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Trevyler [2017-05-17 17:39:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm interested to see where this will go. This is so much better than the Last. Everything feels so natural and normal unlike the retcon no jutsu used in the Last. Keep up the good work and I wish you luck?

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tokai2000 In reply to Trevyler [2017-05-21 13:52:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Happy to hear that.

I hope you like the next one as well.

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Dudnishche [2017-05-17 16:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I love you! Really! You make my dream come true! I'm watch naruto since I was 5 and all this time I thought that Naruto would be with Sakura. I was very upset when I saw the ending naruto and was upset until now, but after I came across your work, I believed as if it had all been so. You make me happy. Thank you very much for this and continue in the same spirit. I'm from Ukraine, so I apologize in advance for my English.   Thank you!!!

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tokai2000 In reply to Dudnishche [2017-05-21 13:52:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comment. I'm happy you like it

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Dudnishche In reply to tokai2000 [2017-05-21 20:01:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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samuraipanda85 [2017-05-17 14:11:43 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic. 10/10, but why is Naruto remembering this?

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Simon19Fenix91 In reply to samuraipanda85 [2018-10-27 12:20:39 +0000 UTC]

This is 100/10

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tokai2000 In reply to samuraipanda85 [2017-05-21 13:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

He can see part of Sakura's memories inside the genjutsu.

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samuraipanda85 In reply to tokai2000 [2017-05-22 16:45:23 +0000 UTC]

I'll buy that. Thanks for clearing it up. Can't wait for the next page.

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Hollow-Kurosaki88 [2017-05-17 10:42:45 +0000 UTC]

as always..you're making a really really great job...this is getting better than The Last Shit..

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tokai2000 In reply to Hollow-Kurosaki88 [2017-05-21 13:52:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Glad you like it

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Hollow-Kurosaki88 In reply to tokai2000 [2017-05-22 08:11:31 +0000 UTC]

keep on going bro..I really love your art..

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ulquiorra461372 [2017-05-16 23:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Good work it's fixing the mistake of the movie and making it feel more natural. 

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tokai2000 In reply to ulquiorra461372 [2017-05-17 00:06:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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ulquiorra461372 In reply to tokai2000 [2017-05-17 00:13:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm just thankful you're redoing that awful movie into the couple that should have happened. Can't to see more from this.

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BigBDawg001 In reply to ulquiorra461372 [2017-05-17 00:42:38 +0000 UTC]

I know how you feel. Even the stuff I read about The Last tells me that this was done even better, without feeling forceful but also being more natural.

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ulquiorra461372 In reply to BigBDawg001 [2017-05-17 00:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Did you watch the last cause it's boring, accomplish nothing ruins naruto and Sakura and all the other characters to please hinata, who does nothing but make a scarf for 3 quarters of the movie. Almost implausible scientist that even by anime standard would call bull shit on.
This is taking its time and has a flow and focus without being forced like the actual movie was. Naruto and Hinata don't have any chemistry and that's what hurt the movie but naruto and Sakura have great chemistry to balance out the movie.

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Sinistro23 In reply to ulquiorra461372 [2020-12-11 03:27:02 +0000 UTC]

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Amonasiel In reply to Sinistro23 [2024-07-12 23:16:54 +0000 UTC]

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ulquiorra461372 In reply to Sinistro23 [2020-12-11 03:51:18 +0000 UTC]

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Sinistro23 In reply to ulquiorra461372 [2020-12-11 08:08:17 +0000 UTC]

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ulquiorra461372 In reply to Sinistro23 [2020-12-11 08:21:18 +0000 UTC]

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Sinistro23 In reply to ulquiorra461372 [2020-12-11 11:41:58 +0000 UTC]

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ulquiorra461372 In reply to Sinistro23 [2020-12-11 11:56:43 +0000 UTC]

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Sinistro23 In reply to ulquiorra461372 [2021-01-04 04:08:00 +0000 UTC]

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ulquiorra461372 In reply to Sinistro23 [2021-01-04 13:31:47 +0000 UTC]

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Sinistro23 In reply to ulquiorra461372 [2021-01-04 19:28:11 +0000 UTC]

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ulquiorra461372 In reply to Sinistro23 [2021-01-05 13:15:08 +0000 UTC]

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Sinistro23 In reply to ulquiorra461372 [2021-01-04 18:47:26 +0000 UTC]

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BigBDawg001 In reply to ulquiorra461372 [2017-05-17 02:47:03 +0000 UTC]

A lot of what I've read of it makes me NOT wanna watch it.

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