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Comments: 48

Spicee23 [2018-08-03 05:10:12 +0000 UTC]

I have read your story over 4 times, and I must say I truly love your work. You are truly gifted and I like what you have done with the story. A lot of things could have been done differently to make NH and SS make sense, but the truth is they took a great anime with great characters and made it trash to me. The fact Sakura is a common house wife to me is trash because it degrades her character development on so many levels because she grew so much and the love she developed for Naruto a long the way is so evident in the numerous amount of memories they share. Not only do they trash Sakura, but they trash Naruto because he never told Sakura how he truly felt and never gives up. The truth is Naruto loves Sakura, the way Obito loves Rin and Jiraiya loves Tsunada, not because of some stupid rivalry with Saskue. Episode 235 in shippuden clearly shows Naruto loves Sakura and how he is wiling to do whatever it takes for her, and this episode is way later down the road after both Hinata and Sakura have confessed their love for him. The truth is Naruto knew how Hinata felt after the Pain fight yet he does nothing and his feeling in 235 clearly shows he loves Sakura, not matter if he felt she lied about her confession. My opinion is I believe Naruto should have gotten the girl he truly loved, since Obito never got Rin and Jiraiya never got Tsunada. I also believe Karin was developed for Saskue because she is so much like Sakura and the side by side comparison panels during the war arc was perfect to show both women feelings. Forgive me for ranting but there our so many facts and moments to why NS should be. The truth is Sakura developed to understand Naruto which you see in Road to Ninja, yeah she was a jerk at first but she realized her mistake and saw her flaw in wanting Saskue to understand her instead of Naruto.


Seriously, I cannot wait to see the ending and how you develop the story. Thank You!!

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Grazit [2018-07-30 00:38:20 +0000 UTC]

I will always be here to say how much I love your art! <3

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Guardian54 [2018-07-28 20:53:59 +0000 UTC]

We have special names for artists like you.
We call them gods among men, or the saviours of fandoms.

We also have special names for writers like Kishimoto or JK Rowling.
We call them Those Without Stamina (the last two sections for both of them were howlingly terrible), Antimatter of Romance, and other names.

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Nekolai98 [2018-07-28 17:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Love your work..
Waiting for the next page..😊

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Hollow-Kurosaki88 [2018-07-28 14:56:55 +0000 UTC]

good job dude..I hope you wont leave it unfinish..btw cant wait to read the next chapter..wanna see some narusaku moments..

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keitharmena [2018-07-21 21:34:44 +0000 UTC]

i like your dojinshi.

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tokai2000 In reply to keitharmena [2018-07-23 12:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it ^^

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keitharmena In reply to tokai2000 [2018-07-23 12:41:26 +0000 UTC]

naruto like hinata, eh ?

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TheDarkpokeone [2018-07-20 19:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Very good work I hope we get the whole Hinata thing over with soon and onto the real main stars Naruto Sakura and Sasuke, but I do fear Hinata will get that BS powerful which makes no sense at all if you ask me I mean I just hope that Sakura gets something to show she is the real Heroine.

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tokai2000 In reply to TheDarkpokeone [2018-07-24 00:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

This chapter is almost over. Next one will be more focused on Naruto and Sakura.

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TheDarkpokeone In reply to tokai2000 [2018-07-25 20:15:25 +0000 UTC]


Few I know some are worried mainly as we are still worried over the whole Hinata thing, lol I will add a friend thinks the brainwashed Hinata would fight Sakura.

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Cavansir [2018-07-18 23:41:23 +0000 UTC]

please continue to this story  This comic is very good, I love this comic

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tokai2000 In reply to Cavansir [2018-07-20 23:11:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it ^^

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LadyTyrell9 [2018-07-17 16:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Keep going!
Always support you!
<3

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tokai2000 In reply to LadyTyrell9 [2018-07-20 23:11:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^^

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2pactherapgod [2018-07-17 13:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Do not remember The Last as clearly as I should but I guess we're get the NaruSaku scene soon? I might be wrong but I think this idiotic talking between Naruto and Sakura about his "rivalry with Sasuke" instead of his feelings to Sakura is coming? Yeah man I know that you'll change this dialog to the right way without this stupid lie but is it coming soon? So excited to read your variation of this shit. And sorry for my English bro, I'm writing this comment being under the emotions and probably doing a lot of mistakes. Hope you'll got it anyway

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tokai2000 In reply to 2pactherapgod [2018-07-20 23:39:31 +0000 UTC]

Yes, there will be narusaku after this chapter and I'm going to skip all this nonsense about Naruto only loving Sakura because of his rivalry with Sasuke.

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2pactherapgod In reply to tokai2000 [2018-07-21 09:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Honestly there's one question I got to ask. Is Naruto lost Six Paths Power? He didn't but in The last and everything after authors made him lose this mode. I don't know why and wanna see the choice of your. Will be glad of your answer.

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HJSDGCE [2018-07-13 14:46:50 +0000 UTC]

You did the disintegration effect quite well. I like it.

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tokai2000 In reply to HJSDGCE [2018-07-20 23:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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StarWritter In reply to HJSDGCE [2018-07-18 04:41:12 +0000 UTC]

I think Jesus doesn't feel so good...

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KClaws [2018-07-13 05:49:14 +0000 UTC]

Hinata's role from the movie seems pretty much the same. However, considering we're going NS with this take on the movie, I've got a theory...

Is Hinata going to be brainwashed into becoming a villain?

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tokai2000 In reply to KClaws [2018-07-24 00:41:41 +0000 UTC]

In fact, she fights Naruto in the film because Toneri controls her. It could happen here too.

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berninfa [2018-07-13 00:13:16 +0000 UTC]

From the Royalty she is.

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tokai2000 In reply to berninfa [2018-07-20 23:02:44 +0000 UTC]

Sorry about my poor english, I think is fixed now.

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berninfa In reply to tokai2000 [2018-07-24 08:38:46 +0000 UTC]

It's cool. I liked that Shikimaru talked like Yoda for a bit.

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DariaNarcisse In reply to berninfa [2018-07-13 15:51:25 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't mean anything because it's a very distant consanguinity. A royalty (or royal family) is the immediate family of a king or queen regnant, and sometimes his or her extended family. The term imperial family appropriately describes the family of an emperor or empress, and the term papal family describes the family of a pope, while the terms baronial family, comital family, ducal family, grand ducal family, or princely family are more appropriate to describe the relatives of a reigning baron, count, duke, grand duke, or prince. However, in common parlance members of any family which reigns by hereditary right are often referred to as "royalty" or "royals". 
 
Hyuuga, Uzumaki and Uchiha are normal clans of the village, they are not the closest relatives of the lord, imperor or feodal. As far as I remember Kaguya's sons and grandsons of this title didn't carry any more. 
In other words, even if Hinata, Hanabi, Naruto, Sasuke and Karin are direct descendants of Princess Kaguya, they are still not princes and princesses even with Royal blood at the moment, because the Royal title was lost many thousands of years ago.

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Ganthet2814 [2018-07-13 00:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Looks good. Keep it up.

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tokai2000 In reply to Ganthet2814 [2018-07-20 22:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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voodoomb [2018-07-12 22:21:12 +0000 UTC]

Excellent work as always, glad you can find time to update in summer as well. Just one minor correction. It's "Why did he call Hinata ... " not "called". All verbs return to their original form when asking in past tense.

For example: I walked for 3 hours. How long did you walk?

Keep up the amazing work!

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tokai2000 In reply to voodoomb [2018-07-20 23:01:20 +0000 UTC]

My bad, Thank you for the correction 

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samuraipanda85 [2018-07-12 14:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Who is THE royalty? 

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tokai2000 In reply to samuraipanda85 [2018-07-20 22:51:06 +0000 UTC]

My bad, sorry about my poor english.

I think its fixed now

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samuraipanda85 In reply to tokai2000 [2018-07-22 16:13:29 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you, this makes much more sense now.

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DariaNarcisse In reply to samuraipanda85 [2018-07-12 15:23:35 +0000 UTC]

A royalty (or royal family) is the immediate family of a king or queen regnant, and sometimes his or her extended family. The term imperial family appropriately describes the family of an emperor or empress, and the term papal family describes the family of a pope, while the terms baronial family, comital family, ducal family, grand ducal family, or princely family are more appropriate to describe the relatives of a reigning baron, count, duke, grand duke, or prince. However, in common parlance members of any family which reigns by hereditary right are often referred to as "royalty" or "royals". 
 
Hyūga, Uzumaki and Uchiha are normal clans of the village, they are not the closest relatives of the lord, imperor or feodal. As far as I remember Kaguya's sons and grandsons of this title didn't carry any more. 
In other words, even if Hinata, Hanabi, Naruto, Sasuke and Karin are direct descendants of Princess Kaguya, they are still not princes and princesses even with Royal blood at the moment, because the Royal title was lost many thousands of years ago.

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samuraipanda85 In reply to DariaNarcisse [2018-07-12 16:18:29 +0000 UTC]

Okay, thanks for the answer but I didn't need a definition on what royalty means.

I was wondering which royal bloodline Shikamaru was referring too. The Fire Daimyo? Was there once a Super Daimyo who ruled over the continent and his reign was famous enough to be remembered however many generations have passed since his empire was divided up into all the different lands?

Is Shikamaru referring to the royal bloodline of the Sage of Six Paths? Or his twin brother? The one with Byakugan?

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DariaNarcisse In reply to samuraipanda85 [2018-07-13 11:01:17 +0000 UTC]

OMG. He as well as all the appropriate audience wonders what the hell she is called the Princess, despite the fact that she's no royalty, not even close. Now you know what he meant.

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samuraipanda85 In reply to DariaNarcisse [2018-07-13 15:10:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank God I didn't watch the actual movie.

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DariaNarcisse In reply to samuraipanda85 [2018-07-13 15:49:00 +0000 UTC]

You didn't lose anything, the film is pathetic.

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samuraipanda85 In reply to DariaNarcisse [2018-07-13 18:53:18 +0000 UTC]

This comic is still awesome though.

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DariaNarcisse [2018-07-12 09:54:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm supposed to feel sorry for this girl, but after Hina ruined the final of manga 4 years ago, all I'm thinking about is keeping her distance from Naruto for at least a kilometer. I can't help myself  

P.S. It feels like here she's not wearing shorts here, but a mini skirt  

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tokai2000 In reply to DariaNarcisse [2018-07-24 00:53:43 +0000 UTC]

I know how you feel.

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CrazyWolf76 [2018-07-12 04:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work

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tokai2000 In reply to CrazyWolf76 [2018-07-20 22:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you 

I'm happy you like it.

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TheIllusiveMan90 [2018-07-12 03:24:27 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work!  

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tokai2000 In reply to TheIllusiveMan90 [2018-07-20 22:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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TheIllusiveMan90 In reply to tokai2000 [2018-07-20 23:33:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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QAYOUNG [2018-07-12 01:25:23 +0000 UTC]

That was Awesome!!! Please continue because as a promise I upload Chapter 1 for you Enjoy it Peace!!!! Here the Link

www.youtube.com/watch?v=8dD9Fn…

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