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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto.
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It’s going slowly but surely. I’m getting excited to see how this all plays out.
Good work as always
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Sorry but I think you made a little grammar error, Sakura should say: "You saw my memories, don't you?"
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Wrong. You were almost there, but you should actually say "You saw my memories, didn't you?".
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just caught up on this story, been reading since forever. so glad it's still going!
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Oh, this is so good I wonder what the answers they will have for the other.
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Come on people I think Tokai wouldn´t do something like trolling us. I believe that this is a Narusaku doujin
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If he's a Troll, people will turn their backs on him like a traitor.
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You are so RIGHT. BUT I believe in him
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Which means Sakura also got to see Naruto's memories... Right ?
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Let me guess, in the next page Toneri will appear ruining the moment.
PS: this story is NaruHina... right?
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No, it is not a NaruHina story. Tokai said in earlier chats that the pairings will be NaruSaku and SasuKarin. This is why it is called "The Alternative Last."
No offense, but why not just watch the Naruto the Last if you want a NaruHina ending? This is what I don't get. Why are Naruto fans going to obvious NaruSaku or whatever fanfictions and asking "Are you making NaruHina canon?" NaruHina is already canon. Just read/watch the original story. Unless, you feel, that the canon you got sucks and want to do NH "proper," but I'd argue isn't that what you wanted?
I used to get told by proenders that I need to accept the canon for what it is, but these same proenders are rewriting the canon for their own fanfictions because "it's not what they wanted?" Isn't it a bit hypocritical to tell one group to accept the canon as it is only to turn around and not accept that very same canon they are defending?
Isn't that kind of proof that Kishimoto is a horrible writer and NH is a retcon if you are asking to redo it despite getting exactly what you wanted?
I mean, the anti-enders admit they didn't like the ending and wanted something different and they don't deny this.
"I was talking about Tokai and... we can't know what he'll do. Maybe he's fooling all of us building a story around Sakura and... with a big surprise, he'll change girl for the blonde."
You mean like how Kishimoto wasted our life building all these great characters in his story only to abandon them completely for a useless side-character all for supposed fanservice while essentially abandoning all meaningful moral story elements for the story of an obsessive girl who couldn't be bothered being original and just stole elements from other characters? No, I don't think Tokai would be that stupid or insulting.
You could say NaruHina would be a "red herring."
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No. If you're here for this plain and boring ship that is NaruHina...
You're in the wrong place dude.
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Calm down friend, I don't think you can read the mid of the autor.
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Oh I'm calm no need to worry about that...
But Huh... Which author were you talking about ? The author of this doujin or the author of Naruto ?
Anyway, of course I can't read the mind of either one...
But I'm pretty sure tokai2000 said that he intended to make this doujin a NaruSaku one.
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I was talking about Tokai and... we can't know what he'll do. Maybe he's fooling all of us building a story around Sakura and... with a big surprise, he'll change girl for the blonde.
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You think so ? I can't really imagine tokai being a troll with his readers...
Then again, who knows ? I don't know him so well.
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If he does that one day, a lot of people will lose all respect for him.
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This is getting good. What will Naruto say?
You have me trapped in the story, hope to see some NARUSAKU in the near future
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omg this is so beautiful..looking forward for the next page..
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I check here on the daily for an update and lo and behold. Sakura looks breathtakingly beautiful. Just stunning. Really looking forward to Naruto's response.
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Nice, after many days an upload. I almost mist it lol
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Good, but at the end of Sakura's sentence, it should be "didn't you?", not "isn't it?"
Always feel free to ask someone to proofread your english.
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it's ok it just simple mistake he's probably correct it as we speak. Its all good lol
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I love this so much!! I get so keen whenever you update your doujinshi! I mean, this is exactly what Sakura would say, and I can't wait to hear what Naruto has to say about all of this. Hopefully, he won't shy from what he saw and discovered. But then again, it's Naruto we're talking about, so anything can happen. XD Once again, amazing work with the doujinshi! The lineart is so smooth and crisp, and I love their expressions, there's defiantly a serious convo going on. The only thing I can really fault is your use of grammar on one of the lines. It's only a tiny little thing really. XD Where Sakura says "You saw my memories, isn't it?" I recommend changing the "isn't it?" to "didn't you?" to be more grammatically correct. But despite that, you did an amazing job and I'm hooked on this doujinshi. Keep up the amazing work!
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