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torchickn — White Harmony--Ch.1 Pg. 4
Published: 2012-03-13 18:54:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 5898; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 17
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Update time, yay!
Yeah, sorry for the Cheren hate, my friend convinced me his character was horrible and reflects here. Trying to get over that though!
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I actually didn't mind Cheren at all. He's alot less creepy in comparison to real live creepers in college... :/
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Really? You have people creeping on you at college? XD
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lol XD. I can read it over and over and still laugh like every time lol
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Unpopular opinion: I like Cheren and he is not a creeper. 
So... yeah. Gigantic pet peeve; Cheren is not an asshole! A stick in the mud, maybe, but not an asshole.
Art-wise... hmm. Something strikes me as sort of odd about the way you draw torsos, but I think it has something to do with the way they seem to vary in length and thickness each panel. The way the strap falls on White facing profile sort of bothers me, too, since it should probably be going down the center of her chest, whereas it looks more like it's only hanging on one shoulder in that particular panel.
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Yeah, my friend convinced me to hate him, but I want to give him a chance! White's mean-ness to him will be explained later on though. But after this page and the next one I'm going to try and paint him in a different light. I think it could work out since there's only two pages where he is seen; he'll appear later and then I can flesh out his character more.
Also, thanks for the critique, but this age is like 2-3 months old. (Did like 11 before hand to avoid falling behind XD) So, I've already noticed all of the flaws. I hate this page actually. I see all the mistakes now that I didn't before and I'm like "why did i do that??" But yeah, thanks for taking the time to do that, don't get many people besides my friends to critique me I really do appreciate it.
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Your friend is a bit judgmental, then, it sounds like. O_o I definitely think it'd be good to depict him in a more sympathetic, positive light, at least... in an AU, you have room to work with that stuff, luckily.
Oh pfft, I didn't look at the date, sorry. 
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Oh no, it was posted just today, no need to apologize XD
I just did pages ahead to avoid catching up and possibly getting lazy and falling behind on updates.
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I agree about Cheren. He has his flaws but he's not a bad guy. He just needs to grow up a bit.
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He did during the course of the game, actually! There's a huge difference in him if you compare him in the beginning before he meets Alder, to him at the Elite Four and even post-game. Just... a lot of people like to pretend that didn't happen. ><
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True, he did grow up a little bit.
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XD I love this page.
But I think Cheren looks kinda hot in that second to last panel, no? MAYBE ITS JUST ME.
I love White's faces throughout this.
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It is just you. That's just his suggestive face
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ew.. you like Cheren?... ew...
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He IS!! I'm going to try to draw him hotter now because he's too cute. Guys with glasses can be hot too. I saw this one picture where someone drew him hot and IT INSPIRED ME. Seriously.
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Lol srsly. I need to draw him hotter too.
But he's not even in the comic yet XD
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You better draw him hot! We need to start the fad of actually making him attractive!
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Hehe XD
Gonna try to make him less of a creeper when he appears WAY later on. I need to give the guy a chance right?
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XD My feelings exactly. Every time he creeped I had another unwanted battle.
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Rivals are such stalkers aren't they? XD
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XD A bit, yes. Plus, Bianca was all the rival I could handle. At least Cheren was better than her. *shot*
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Really? I actually thought Bianca was cute, but then again I never really got to finish the game and my memory of it is pretty bad. lol
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XD She gets to be a little much. And a tad of a whiner.
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True True. But I do feel sorry for her because of her dad
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A little. Sad he's trying to hold her back, but those two get over it! And make up. You really need to finish the game. XD
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Yeah, I really do! Especially before the sequel come out.
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So that's what it is now? XD Heard so many rumors it's ridiculous.
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But its true! And, I can't wait to play it, its gonna be so AWESOME!
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lol Cheren IS creeper material XD
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lol XD omg that's amazing. lolololol. its cuz he's a creeper!
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lolol poor Cheren no one likes him.
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