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Transformers-Mosaic — A Matter of Perspective
Published: 2009-01-19 03:29:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 4632; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 81
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Story by;Alasdair Stuart
Art by;
James Ferran
Colors & Letters by;
S.A. Hopkins [link]
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Comments: 20
Go Jetfire!! x3
After the first three panels the action gets muddled, but a good mosaic nontheless.
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Ok...what actually happened? Because neither the art nor the dialogue conveyed what cosmo actually DID...it seemed like he did nothing at all, and the disguise comments served little to no purpose.
What aspect of his personality was he disguising?
From whom? Comment indicated something deeper when the entire strip pointed to something very shallow/meaningless.
Recommend back to the drawing board.
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The action gets a bit hard to follow, but I like the panel of Cosmos just zooming along through the air there.
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Its pretty good, I think that there is too many colours. Try limiting your colour palette. Other than that I like the story! Good job!
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That's pretty cool, Cosmos is, despite what the other 'Bots think, having a blast in his role, right?
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Not exactly the best art I've seen, but interesting tale on Cosmos!
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Probably more of a IDW Cosmos but a bit odd to follow.
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I have to agree with pretty much everyone else. The art just didn't interest me and it was hard to follow the story. I did like the dialogue, I just felt it was poorly executed.
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The dilogue doesn't feel very much like Cosmos to me, and the organization on this page is prettyy horrendous. It was hard to care and follow.
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Huh. I have no idea what's going on in that dogfight scene, and the dialogue seems to ramble with the "disguise" stuff. It's not bad, but there are some definite weak points in this one.
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the art is a bit put-offish, and the dialog seems to have been written by somebody in 3rd grade
I really tried to give this one a chance but alas I just couldn't force myself to read all of it.
And I usually love mosiacs.
Nice attempt though it was just a bit poorly executed.
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I read it all, but it was just a tad hard to follow. Perhaps if I had surrounding pages, it would be better, but...
I can look past the art, it's more the story I'm into.
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the art should be able to convay the story though, and i personally just could follow it, it's all over the place unfortunatly
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Yeah, I get what you mean.
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