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Transformers-Mosaic — Sowers of Discord - Part 1
Published: 2009-12-21 02:59:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 6318; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 164
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Written by:Kat "someone else" McCord [link]
Art, colors and letters by:
Razzie Mbessai [link]
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Comments: 52
^.^ I have no complaints here. I especially love the way the characters are drawn. Colors awesome, too! looks just like the Graphic Novels/Comics.
Can't wait for part 2!
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Thank you! 
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HEEE TURBINE BOOBS
Oh god this is awesome. Razzles I love your colouring and your drawing and Eel your story writing and and and ;w;
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Honestly I think the drawing is better than the writing
... SEEKERBOOBIES
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THANK YOU SIR
and at last someone made the word BOOBS in the comments
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Ugh, I'm trying to like this one ... but something about it just doesn't do it for me. Sorry, guys. Good job on it though, look forward to reading part two to get the 'full' experience of the story.
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Hopefully Part 2 will be up soon so you can get the complete picture
I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it, but I'm grateful you said so without being rude
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NP, it's hard to do something TF related that -everyone- enjoys.
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Shifty little bugger, he is.
Awesome art, Razzie!
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Shifty robots are shifty
And thank you!
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That's Jetfire and Starscream, actually. Though the Fallen does show up in the second half of this.
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what reason does starscream has a reason saying the planet is empty?
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Pretty much he's just lying for the hell of it, because lying is fun for Starscream.
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It will make more sense when the second part is published 
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I'm not really feeling it either to be honest. The story is really brief and doesn't tell anything. It remains to be seen if this is just a one page story stretched over three parts. Personally if something is a multiparter, I'd prefer it to be more like the Breakdown one, where each part was a completely self sufficient story but it gained more by being linked to others, rather than one where the story is just stretched out over three pages. I'm trying to be helpful, I hope you don't take offence at that!
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It's two parts, actually. Hopefully the second half will clear everything up. Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.
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It is a good effort though. One important thing is to signpost. I was assuming it was Earth and that Starscream was betraying everyone, but then you said it wasn't Earth, which relegates this to just 'Starscream and Jetfire on a boring day job' which is a bit less interesting for one page.
Also never assume everyone knows who every character is (heck, I thought Jetfire was Stratosphere, but that's the movie designs for you!). Each character needs to be named at least once in the page, so there's your challenge!
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Thank you for all the feedback, this is the first time I've drawn a Mosaic so it's awesome to hear what I did wrong just as much as what I did right
I gave Jetfire my own Cybertronian design, so apologies for the Stratosphere confusion
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Heh, I suppose that's what I get for saying the Outer Arm of the galaxy and just banking on everyone knowing that Earth is in the Orion Arm.
And I hear you on the movie designs. They can be really confusing-- especially since Jetfire here is Razzie's own redesign. Starscream is pretty much straight out of "Reign of Starscream" though, thought that would help. The second half does have more names in it, phew!
Thanks again for the feedback, it helps.
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You guys did a mosaic!!!!!!!!!
AWESOMESAUCE!!!!! HUZZAH!!! CONGRATS!!! ETC.!!!
Of course you put Jetfire in it... (lol)
Big Red Robot Hugs for th' both o' ya's!
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Awwww, thank you Sir! 
Alas, the chance to doo eet was too strong to resist any longer
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Not feeling it. Both the timeline and the age for both characters as given in the movieverse contradict this.
If it wasn't for the color I'd never have even recognised SS btw.
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Were either of them ever given an age in canon? The timescale is something that came completely from my head, but if I knew either characters' age from canon I would have used it. Do you know anywhere I can find their ages?
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We know from tales of the Fallen that Jetfire is active during the Dynasty time. We also know that the Dynasty time is a time of legend for the current bots from the movie prequels.
Hence them meeting can never happen. We also know humans are around at first contact time so we're talking 150.000 years ago max and probably a lot more recent for Jetfire landing on Earth.
It's been noted before that the movie-verse bots are nowehere near as ancient as the bots we all know and love in G1.
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I think you're assuming this is Earth. (That's what I get for just saying "the Outer Arm" and banking that everyone knows Earth is in the Orion Arm. My bad.) It's a completely different system, which is why the timescale is so different.
Where was it noted? I remember reading somewhere- I think in the prequel comics to the first movie- that five million years passed between the battle of Tyger Pax (when everyone left) and the Autobots' arrival on Earth, so I decided on a timescale of millions of years.
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Earth is generally refered to as being in (one of) the outer arms so that's not really saying all that much.
Defiance has Screamer as a part of the military in a time when the fallen is dug up and rediscovered by Megatron.
Tales of the Fallen 3 has Jetfire in the Dynastic times being one of the first of the first age of Decepticons (Megatron and Starscream being the second age)
Perhaps even THE first as all the constructions there seem to be drones... At least the text refers to them as construction drones.
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Well, if you think about it, every arm in a spiral galaxy is an "outer" arm (and also an inner arm!) so I went with what Wikipedia said.
I have Defiance, and was somewhat frustrated that it didn't give any actual numbers, just "many many years ago." Could be thousands, millions, even billions. If you know of someplace in canon where they mention just how old Jetfire or Starscream is in numbers, I'd like to hear about that plz.
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ROTF pretty much ignores all that, since the timescale in there is that the ancient time of Transformer myth and legend is 150,000 years ago (in the film's beginning)
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Ah yes, Bay sure did his homework to make sure canon didn't contradict itself, eh? 
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At THAT time, the system WAS clear...
Okay, some lifeforms like dinosaurs were there, but no sentinent life...
Beautiful artwork, nice cooperation! Hoping for moar!! ^^
Side note: Aaargh, they are really OLD!!
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This isn't set on Earth, but I can't say more than that
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This is a system in an entirely different arm of the galaxy, actually. Our planet has had life for... eh, can't remember, but it's been billions of years.
Thanks, there's another half on its way! 
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Actually that was before the Dinosaurs...The greatest Mass Extinction in History, between Permian and Triassic.
Although, doesn't that Harvester thing completely destroy the sun?
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Was the harvester ever working? Or it was just planned to set on work later? I ll rewatch the ROTF next week, with friends...
Thanks for correction! Yay for fellow closet-prehistorian here!
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I don't think the one on earth was ever used. According to the descriptions it would however completely destroy a sun, so that would cause way more than "just" a mass extinction. More like end of the solar system.
You are welcome. Also, the then ruling animals most likely would still count as sentient, just not as sapient.
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EEL AND RAZZIE YOU DEVIOUS FOOLSAUCES.
Looks great, I cannot WAIT for the other parts! -hops around-
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*eats moar devioussauce*
And nor can I!
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I love the painterly stuff going on in the colours - especially the backdrops. Very nice indeed!
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Wicked! Interesting relationship like in G1 as well!
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Huh, interesting to see more multi-part Mosaics cropping up.
Anyway, nifty idea, giving Starscream and Jetfire a relationship in the movieverse as well.
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awesome! starscream caused it all. what didn't he cause?
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Loving it! Especially how its blending movieverse back into the TF verse as a whole.
Of course awesome story and art!!!
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starscream IS a seeker
i like the subtle redesign of his head to make it look more g1-ish
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