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TriteBristle β Heartstrings ch2/p21 - An hour later
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There, they ended up in bed. Happy?What? You wanted a kiss? This early? Nah. >:3
*Unlocked achievement: Lip-block!*
Don't worry, we'll get to that part sooner or later. Surely I won't keep it till the very end, will I? >:3
Nope, I hate it when a love story ends with the protagonists getting together, since the whole adventure just starts then!
So knowing my imagination, we might get to see them nursing their grandchildren.
Still, Lyra seems to be a bit embarrassed, I wonder why. :3
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I really was looking forward for your comment here!
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What do you mean?Β You keeping track of my blush counter?
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Well, mostly because it was Lyra's first blush.
And you had counted 8 blushes for BonBon.
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Well thank you for looking forward to the counter.
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To big bed for a single mare. Maybe BonBon lived with somepony else before?
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no someony ca have a double my sis does
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my sis haas a double bed
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Haha, I was going to get one too!
And my little cousin has one too!
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SINGLE THATS HOLDS ME AND A FRIEND LOL crap aps on
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tiny bed too Β i was 11 and that friend was 10
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um bonbon. DD might have been wrong about lyra. she seems a little bit, whats the word, awkward sleeping in the same bed.
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WELL! Nice story, so far! I love how well Lyra is playing out, and how well Bon-Bon is reacting to her. Also, HANDS!!!!!
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OH MY EGYPTIAN GODS (yes it does say what think it says) REALLY BONBON REALLY
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Which one? Anubis? Isis? Rah?... all of them?
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It is Ra not RahΒ
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And soon comes the scene where they have to "Conserve water and time." Β Followed by the question "I think I found something weird on my body, but can't see it well. Β will you check it for me?" Β And other cliche'd scenes
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They haven't exactly been subtle about their attraction: tritebristle.deviantart.com/ar⦠2-16
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Aww so cute! Plot contrivance
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DAYUM BON BON. IT'S ONLY BEEN 2 PANELS AND U BLUSHING MORE THAN RARITY WHEN SHE GETS THE "SPECIAL TREATMENT" AT THE SPA.
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It looks like you add to much blush to them. I would tone it down a bit unless it's a very compromising situation. Not that I'm an artist, three stick figures is a challenge for me.
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Oh...I can probably see where this is going... :/
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quick bro use slender's face to stop the camera!
Dawn: You herd her!
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why did I not see that coming
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hahaaaa thats what i'm talking about, baby!
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Goodness, what would one pony need with such a large bed if she didn't plan on having any guests over?
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I was wondering about the same thing.
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I roll around alot in my sleep.
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why not just split the bed in two?
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If it's already the end of the day, and this is only an hour later, why the heck is it morning outside that window?
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"Animation error!" :3
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Like they did in the actual show, you mean?
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Anyone who didn't see this coming when the uncomfortable couch was first mentioned?
Still, the plot device isn't any less cute for being overused.
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