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Published: 2017-12-16 01:46:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 32761; Favourites: 1109; Downloads: 169
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For some reason I could imagine that dialogue going this way.ΒRelated content
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This is a cartoon; a joke told with visuals. As a cartoon, it's a winner. As artwork, it's not the best you've ever done, but it conveys the joke successfully. The art appeal of the first panel is very weak, Tempest's lower body looks distorted and elongated, as if it was being pulled into a sci-fi dimensional portal and for her head, her ears are pinned back (which makes sense) but they look odd which I may be due to relative size to the rest of her head, I'm not 100% sure why it bothers me. The second panel is spot on as Tempest spirals off into the tempest. (...yes, I wrote that.)
Overall, this piece looks like a quick, one-off sketch. It meets the minimum standards to convey the joke and does that well, but the art doesn't really do much for me. I honestly feel you could do the first panel better.
BTW, the joke is freaking hilarious. You get full marks for that.
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Well, because you both hate the Storm king, that's why! A lot more than you hate each other now, considering that even though Tempest loyally served him, he still screwed her over without even trying to fix her problem. And considering Tempest's background and skill, it would be better to have her on Equestria's side against the Storm king, even if it's just for a little while. It's called Allies of Convenience.
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Heh...heh...haha...hahaha...hahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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If you love me let me g o O O O O O O O O O O
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her horn look like a broken heart shape!
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LET IT GOOO, LET IT GOOOOO, YOU WERE FOOLED BY PRINCESS OF FRIENDSHIP OH NOOOOOOOΒ
lmao
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And thus Twilight started her reign of dictatorial friendship.
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Tempest's horn looks like a heartbroken
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TEMPEST!!!!!!!!!!!!! OUR ADORABLE JELLY HORSE!!!!!!!!!!
CURSE YOU TWILIGHT!!! CURSE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(sorry twilight fans)
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Β Most ponies are so ungrateful to be alive,
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Β but no you.
Β Not anymore.
Β AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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"I'll be back for you!!!", she says before letting go.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but LOL anyway
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