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Published: 2009-10-03 22:22:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 6664; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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Description I decided to give my little "Transformation" strip a makeover. For those of you who don't know, this is where Terence makes the official transition from unicorn to man. This is from my original novel that I plan to publish someday (hopefully) soon.

This new version will be longer, more intricate, more detailed, and more gripping.

Of course, you already know Terence. The elf is Aldridge, a young forest elf who possesses magical abilities but can't really execute them properly, and the girl is Wendye (yes, it is supposed to be spelled that way), a homeless and orphaned human. She's about 19; Aldridge is somewhere around 17. They are also my OCs, whom I've regretfully neglected this past year. I resolve to give them both a little more of the spotlight from now on.

Yes, I know this is reminiscent of The Last Unicorn. I'll admit, my story was initially inspired by that novel, but I promise, my novel is WAY different from Mr. Beagle's. I am NOT a plagiarist. There is a difference between basing your work off someone else's work, and claiming someone else's ideas as entirely your own. Mr. Beagle isn't the only guy in the world who can write about a unicorn becoming human, after all; and besides, his book already references other works. I see plenty of snippets from other books and poems scattered about in there.

Furthermore, when you really think about it, there aren't that many "completely original" stories around here anymore. Almost everything you read or watch these days is reminiscent of, however subtly, at least one thing or another.

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Comments: 172

unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ??? [2009-10-22 05:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Michelle! Your comic's way better, but it sure feels good to hear a word of approval from a master comic maker like you!

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nesilverwing [2009-10-05 19:46:09 +0000 UTC]

oooOOOOOooooo! I love the suspense that's already building!! i can't wait for the next page!!! ^_^

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to nesilverwing [2009-10-06 16:18:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm almost done.

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nesilverwing In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-07 01:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh, how exciting! ^_^

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to nesilverwing [2009-10-08 21:28:02 +0000 UTC]

And it's up now!

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nesilverwing In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-09 01:38:45 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to nesilverwing [2009-10-09 14:35:13 +0000 UTC]

I've been looking for that icon for ages.

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Senshee [2009-10-05 19:13:19 +0000 UTC]

I love the look of suprise on his face in the second panel, it's very well drawn! Fabulous work!

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Senshee [2009-10-09 14:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Hey, my second page is up, if you want to see it.

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Senshee In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2010-11-09 15:54:19 +0000 UTC]

Sure, I'll browse your gallery to find it. ^^

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Senshee [2010-11-09 16:35:58 +0000 UTC]

I got a lot of stuff; I need to seriously organize my gallery.

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Senshee [2009-10-05 19:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! He's hearing a strange, unpleasant sound, hence the reason his face is like that.

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ArweynXSilver [2009-10-04 18:18:38 +0000 UTC]

It's Awesome Continue please!!! I love it

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ArweynXSilver [2009-10-04 19:10:46 +0000 UTC]

The second page is already scanned; it'll take a while to color, though.

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ArweynXSilver In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-04 19:13:23 +0000 UTC]

Well, good luck then!!

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ArweynXSilver [2009-10-05 00:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm working on it right now.

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ArweynXSilver In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-05 15:25:14 +0000 UTC]

No problem and again Good luck xD

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ArweynXSilver [2009-10-05 15:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'll need it.

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ArweynXSilver In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-05 15:34:16 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ArweynXSilver [2009-10-05 18:17:46 +0000 UTC]

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ArweynXSilver In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-06 16:18:14 +0000 UTC]

You remember that I told you that I had a new dog?
Well...she's very ill, we don't think she'll survive it...

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ArweynXSilver [2009-10-06 16:26:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh, no...

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ArweynXSilver In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-07 16:23:53 +0000 UTC]

She died....15 minutes after that I sended you this message
She was in shock and her heart stopped... I feel so sad

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ArweynXSilver [2009-10-07 17:28:16 +0000 UTC]

Aww, come here...

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ArweynXSilver In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-07 17:46:35 +0000 UTC]

She was only 2 weeks

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ArweynXSilver [2009-10-07 21:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh, man, I'm really sorry. That's just terrible.

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ArweynXSilver In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-09 14:23:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes :C I still can't believe it

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ArweynXSilver [2009-10-09 14:28:40 +0000 UTC]

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ArweynXSilver In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-09 15:54:18 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ArweynXSilver [2009-10-16 05:33:29 +0000 UTC]

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Harlequine-mania [2009-10-04 12:27:14 +0000 UTC]

oooo lovely! love terance's expression in the third pannel!

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Harlequine-mania [2009-10-04 15:18:31 +0000 UTC]

Can you guess what he just heard?

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Harlequine-mania In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-04 16:03:24 +0000 UTC]

no actually, it baffles me, do tell?

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Harlequine-mania [2009-10-05 13:51:03 +0000 UTC]

Look through my gallery, and look for the werewolf called Moloth. That should give you a hint.

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Harlequine-mania In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-05 17:50:48 +0000 UTC]

okey dokey!

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Harlequine-mania [2009-10-05 17:57:11 +0000 UTC]

Can you guess what Terence hears now?

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Harlequine-mania In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-05 18:22:17 +0000 UTC]

wooo! he looks creepy!

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Harlequine-mania [2009-10-05 19:42:27 +0000 UTC]

Naturally! He's a werewolf.

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Harlequine-mania In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-06 16:41:09 +0000 UTC]

lol!

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Harlequine-mania [2009-10-06 18:02:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you may laugh now, but you won't think it's nearly so funny when you see him on the following page.

That guy is seriously bad news. He is a first-rate hunter; he has a keen nose and keen ears and keen eyes, and you can almost never hide from him. And he delights in killing; his main goal in life is to kill and maim and bite as many creatures as he can. He was bitten by a werewolf himself once, and he ended up killing that same werewolf later.

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Harlequine-mania In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-08 11:19:59 +0000 UTC]

oh, ok

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Harlequine-mania [2009-10-08 15:18:13 +0000 UTC]

He's one of the last guys you'd ever want to mess with.

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Harlequine-mania In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-08 16:00:15 +0000 UTC]

lol

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Harlequine-mania [2009-10-08 17:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Seriously.

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Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-04 11:46:51 +0000 UTC]

oh thats awesome and I makes me very curious

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-04 15:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I promise my book's very good.

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-04 15:29:04 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to see it

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-05 15:16:53 +0000 UTC]

If I could just get the dang thing down on paper already!

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-05 15:26:21 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-05 18:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Seriously, I've been working my rear end off on it for nearly four years.

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