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Published: 2009-10-03 22:22:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 6668; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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Description I decided to give my little "Transformation" strip a makeover. For those of you who don't know, this is where Terence makes the official transition from unicorn to man. This is from my original novel that I plan to publish someday (hopefully) soon.

This new version will be longer, more intricate, more detailed, and more gripping.

Of course, you already know Terence. The elf is Aldridge, a young forest elf who possesses magical abilities but can't really execute them properly, and the girl is Wendye (yes, it is supposed to be spelled that way), a homeless and orphaned human. She's about 19; Aldridge is somewhere around 17. They are also my OCs, whom I've regretfully neglected this past year. I resolve to give them both a little more of the spotlight from now on.

Yes, I know this is reminiscent of The Last Unicorn. I'll admit, my story was initially inspired by that novel, but I promise, my novel is WAY different from Mr. Beagle's. I am NOT a plagiarist. There is a difference between basing your work off someone else's work, and claiming someone else's ideas as entirely your own. Mr. Beagle isn't the only guy in the world who can write about a unicorn becoming human, after all; and besides, his book already references other works. I see plenty of snippets from other books and poems scattered about in there.

Furthermore, when you really think about it, there aren't that many "completely original" stories around here anymore. Almost everything you read or watch these days is reminiscent of, however subtly, at least one thing or another.

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to ??? [2009-10-05 18:21:35 +0000 UTC]

really?

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-05 19:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Yep. First got the idea when I was a senior in high school, and I've been working on it ever since.

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-06 13:26:02 +0000 UTC]

sounds great

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-06 18:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I just wish I could finish it already.

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-06 18:22:39 +0000 UTC]

oh I know how you feel

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-16 05:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-16 10:19:02 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-17 05:03:14 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-17 11:38:17 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-19 13:24:33 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-19 13:26:15 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 05:27:10 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-22 12:54:48 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 13:22:07 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-22 13:25:41 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 13:34:15 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-22 13:45:24 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 14:29:21 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-22 14:32:41 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 14:33:50 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-22 14:43:22 +0000 UTC]

I love these dragon icons

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 15:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Me too. I lost count of how many times I've used them.

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-22 15:46:33 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 15:48:50 +0000 UTC]

That marks another one!

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-22 16:00:21 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 17:54:40 +0000 UTC]

We could do this forever.

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-22 17:56:47 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 19:42:01 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-22 19:45:18 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 19:46:04 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-22 19:48:54 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-22 21:21:45 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-23 13:00:44 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-23 14:04:09 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Mare910 In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-23 14:34:33 +0000 UTC]

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Dark-Mare910 [2009-10-23 14:59:36 +0000 UTC]

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SillySock In reply to ??? [2009-10-04 02:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Looking epic!

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to SillySock [2009-10-04 02:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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SillySock In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-04 03:20:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to SillySock [2009-10-04 04:15:33 +0000 UTC]

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forestfairyunicorn In reply to ??? [2009-10-04 02:14:06 +0000 UTC]

MOARMOARMOARMOAR!!!!!! nextpagenextpagenextpage!! Also text, plz!!And are you planning to involve Aldridge and Wendye more often to your works?

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to forestfairyunicorn [2009-10-04 02:54:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I've kinda been giving them the silent treatment this past year. Oh, sure, I've written about them in my novel, but I haven't really included them in my art.

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forestfairyunicorn In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-04 12:53:37 +0000 UTC]

We, the readers, want to know thier stories.

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to forestfairyunicorn [2009-10-04 15:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Okay. I got their backgrounds pretty much figured out.

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Kerristanne [2009-10-04 00:50:57 +0000 UTC]

The suspense is killing me! I think it's the lack of words which gives off the dead silence. But obviously Terence heard something, so maybe it's notr so dead after all. Next page pwease.

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Kerristanne [2009-10-04 02:55:38 +0000 UTC]

You'll have to wait, my dear. It took me a while to complete just this first page. But if it makes you feel a little more at ease, the second page is already drawn and scanned.

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Kerristanne In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-04 19:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay... Yays!

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Kerristanne [2009-10-05 15:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Nice to see your enthusiasm.

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Kerristanne In reply to unicorn-skydancer08 [2009-10-05 20:49:09 +0000 UTC]

XD

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to Kerristanne [2009-10-18 04:40:46 +0000 UTC]

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