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Published: 2012-01-27 03:37:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 509; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 8
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I hope you don't mind, Fuchi |D Natalie was in my mind when I wanted to practice a new style.SO. I WANT CRITIQUES. BASICALLY ON.... uh.... EVERYTHING.
More around the style and using the thicker and thinner lines.
Any help is appreciated and I know you guys will be constructive about it! <3
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CalumTraveler [2012-01-29 15:21:49 +0000 UTC]
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I Happen to think it's cute! And I like the eyes too!
The style itself is very good for the Chibi-Style and I can't really complain about the Chibi style as it's one of my favorites. The light source is a bit hard to place at first though, but makes sense upon looking at it really hard. How did you do the stars? Some sort of texture brush? If so, then it's pretty good for that and I can't really complain. If not, then I'd suggest not cluttering them up as closely as they are in some places when you use it in the future.
I like the hair, too. Purple and white? I don't think I've ever seen that combination before!
All in all, I really like it!
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Unknown-Variable In reply to CalumTraveler [2012-01-29 15:29:13 +0000 UTC]
Aww! Thank you! ^w^
Shading is not a strong point of mine, so I'll keep the light source in mind on future pictures! :3
Thanks so much for the critique! Very helpful! ^O^
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Jared-hai [2012-01-29 15:06:11 +0000 UTC]
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Absolutely terrible. This is possibly the worst thing for reality to deign to let exist. Just looking at it makes me sick, and practically, my limbless two year old child could make something better than this. While he writhes in pain from constantly shattered bones from a birth defect, while my wife and i spend our entire living life trying to keep it alive, there are people like YOU making art like THIS. If you can call it art, that is - this more akin to vomit, and you should feel utterly worthless foe spawning such a travesty and blight upon my eyes.
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Unknown-Variable In reply to Jared-hai [2012-01-29 15:11:39 +0000 UTC]
xDD LOL Jared!!!
That was hilarious!
nice imagery! Why can't I critique a critique?
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AngelicDragonPuppy [2012-02-18 14:06:48 +0000 UTC]
I think the thick/thin line mix looks great! And this is really cute, so it's got a definite thumbs up from me! XD
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LordSnipe [2012-01-27 03:45:48 +0000 UTC]
her right arm is kinda stubby
should be longer, like her left arm
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oofuchibioo [2012-01-27 03:44:44 +0000 UTC]
HOLY CRAP UNO THAT IS ADORABLE DSLKFSDKGDSKLFDS OMG ;A;
THE EYES ARE REALLY CUTE OMG.
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Unknown-Variable In reply to oofuchibioo [2012-01-27 03:47:57 +0000 UTC]
Yaaaay! 8D I'm glad you like it! <333
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