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LOL GETTING NERVOUS ABOUT SUBMITTING THIS AHAHAHAHA WHAT AM I DOING WITH MY LIFE
Whoooooa boy @___@ I hope this is okay. I got this done rather quickly, it would seem, and while I am a quick doodler, I was working on this for a lot longer than the official opening day. I knew which characters I wanted to use and how they would die, so I had about half of this already finished and planned as MOKO came closer and closer to their opening date. Plus, I'm not in school right now, so I'm either working at my job or in front of the computer, with an insane amount of free time.
This is the most effort I've put into an audition to date, so I hope it looks okay!!!
AND ANUBIS WAS HARD AS SHIT TO DRAW!!! DD: WHOSE IDEA WAS IT TO MAKE HIM SO DETAILED!??!? ;A; *gross sobbing*
Uh... I remember last time I was in an OCT, some people got confused as to what I was doing, so I'll write a quick summary here.
Ekhart and Nate live in a city of Tellurium. They have a bit of trouble in their everyday lives, but that's to be expected. Ekhart with her father, and Nate... well, you'll see soon enough. Knowing about the brawl between the Eternal Knight and Dragon Claw gangs, Ekhart challenges Nate, only to pick pleasing her father over fighting him. At her father's party, however, he surprises everyone by choosing a nonblood relative over his daughter as heir to his estate and fortune. Heartbroken, Ekhart ran out of the party to meet with Quinn in an attempt to rid her frustrations in the only way she knows how - fighting.
While Ekhart is at the party, Nate and Aru - the ghost who haunts him - head over to the mechanic's garage, where Nate works on cars until Cody and Bonecrusher fetch him for the brawl. Surprisingly, Ekhart is there, which only annoys Nate. The two start to brawl, prompted by their higher ups.
While they fight, an attack is led on three inhabitants of Tellurium. 1337, an android whose programming drives her to destroy all supernatural beings, attacks two werewolves and a winged man. The three flee from 1337, leading her directly to where the gangs are fighting. Thinking she would have a higher success rating here, she turns to attack the gangs. Ekhart, still hurting over her father's earlier betrayal, turns to 1337 to fight. However, Nate realizes this is a bad idea, and tries going to her to glitch them out of the way. He is too late, and 1337 and Ekhart attack, causing a massive explosion and backlash, which ultimately kill the two.
They appear on the shore to Hades, angrier than ever. Loki arrives on the scene, prompting the two across the river. The Ferryman chides Loki for leaving Hades for unspoken 'errands,' but the trickster just laughs it off. No harm done, after all. On the ferry ride across, Ekhart is left alone with her thoughts while Nate and Loki exchange phone numbers - much to Nate's displeasure. Once landed, Nate tells Ekhart off, his anger still simmering. Senri, feeling a familiar tug to Nate, follows the teen, leaving Ekhart alone on the shore, where she watches the ferryman sail off down the river... off course from whence he came.
Nate continues on his way to the hall, bemoaning his fate, and clinging to the hope that his multidimensional friend will bail him out. As he and Senri interact, Nate recognizes his language slightly, mostly due to the dreams of his past life, who ventured to Senri's world for a period of time. Deciding it worth it to put up with the Lespri, Nate allows him to tag along. The end up in the Hall, sitting away from the large group of souls in a small corner, Nate sleeping, Senri watching over him.
Ekhart continues to brood on her mistakes, stress overcoming her. When another suitable outlet for her rage appears in the form of a jackal god, she takes no time in yelling at him. However, when a scuffle breaks out between the two, Anubis succeeds in toting Ekhart off to the Halls, merely wanting a quiet place where no one will stumble upon him. In the halls, he is approached by a FLEET member, who relates the news that Charon has gone missing (as shown in the introduction comics. This is just a little bit after Hades discovers the discarded ferry). Anubis is stunned, and Ekhart, in her ignorance, relays that the ferryman was there just a couple minutes ago, pegging her as the last person to come in contact with him.
Ekhart (c) Me
Anubis (c) #MOKO-OCT
Mona Sawyddh (c) ~AndMyShadow
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Comments: 12
SunaBuna [2012-09-02 16:34:54 +0000 UTC]
Ahaha I loved the audition. A nice array of characters! :3
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Unknown-Variable In reply to SunaBuna [2012-09-02 16:41:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
Some of them aren't mine, though xD Cameo-ing is so much fun >u<
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SunaBuna In reply to Unknown-Variable [2012-09-03 01:38:19 +0000 UTC]
Well it's fun seeing them all interact. :>
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danickname [2012-08-24 13:23:59 +0000 UTC]
is it okay if I use Ekhart and/or Nate in my audition story?
why? because It'd be priceless to have my OC beaten up or humiliated!
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Unknown-Variable In reply to SalandreJerenity989 [2012-07-25 23:10:26 +0000 UTC]
Be in? |D I don't understand.
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SalandreJerenity989 In reply to Unknown-Variable [2012-07-26 15:48:01 +0000 UTC]
The OCT matches I mean.
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Unknown-Variable In reply to SalandreJerenity989 [2012-07-26 15:49:41 +0000 UTC]
There's still a month and a week left in the audition period. We have to wait for that to end, as well as give the judges time to read them all and decide who gets in the OCT. Then they will match opponents up randomly.
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RoguishLoaf [2012-06-07 09:53:16 +0000 UTC]
Wooo, you're done! YOU ARE THE CHAMPION! *stands at submission line doling out cheap medals*
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Unknown-Variable In reply to RoguishLoaf [2012-06-07 15:34:38 +0000 UTC]
YEAAAAAH! *takes a medal and holds it aloft proudly*
But now I have nothing to do but wait D:
And I suck at that :<
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1STW [2012-06-07 07:20:24 +0000 UTC]
Great job Uno! : D They should really let you join with this, it's great XD
To me it was interesting to see what the characters personalities are like in a more than just in the surface level, that's rare in an audition : o And the plot for this was good and well presented, and I also like their different reactions to being dead and all XD
And it looks overally finished enough, it's nice that you were so dedicated : D
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Unknown-Variable In reply to 1STW [2012-06-07 07:23:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! XD I hope they think the same thing! Ahaha!
Oh! yes! 8D I was going for that, so I'm glad you noticed it! Show their flaws a bit now, and you have more time and room to have them correct them and grow as characters as the tournament progresses. ^O^ Plus, sowing the seeds for future shenanigans is a must! Gotta have cliffhangers and good character development~
I'm glad you like it, Firsty :'D Being excited about this does do a lot for being dedicated xD Ahaha
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