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Published: 2012-05-05 19:49:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2217; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 0
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Description Horizon Break Chapter #1 what the soldier saw 'Intro

HORIZON BREAK


prolouge: << all [link] >> next: coming soon

Cover:[link]
Prolouge 1:[link]
Prolouge 2:[link]

German translation pages: [link]

Horizon break's art and story made and copyrighted to :icondreamingFarytale

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You want start an own comic, and need help for backgrounds or anything else? just send me a note. (:

dreaming Farytale
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Comments: 32

Vilue [2012-06-24 17:46:54 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely stunning background ;_; I wish I had your skills!

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valachhim In reply to Vilue [2012-06-24 19:05:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you (: Maybe you'll have them soon (:

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Droakir [2012-06-18 04:57:27 +0000 UTC]

I love the coloring.

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valachhim In reply to Droakir [2012-06-18 19:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you (:

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Droakir In reply to valachhim [2012-06-19 00:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Keep up the great work!

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valachhim In reply to Droakir [2012-06-19 17:59:48 +0000 UTC]

i will, thanks (:

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graciegra [2012-05-15 20:56:05 +0000 UTC]

Cute page <3 and you put "i" instead of its capital "I" on the second panel

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heatwill [2012-05-07 12:39:30 +0000 UTC]

awesome!

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valachhim In reply to heatwill [2012-05-07 13:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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heatwill In reply to valachhim [2012-05-07 15:01:17 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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xVexVamp [2012-05-06 16:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful page the backgrounds are stunning and I love the way you shaded the character. You also managed to make a character that fits with the background style while keeping her from blending into it, not an easy task. Wonderful job, I look foward to seeing the next page.

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valachhim In reply to xVexVamp [2012-05-06 17:53:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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littlevillagewolf [2012-05-06 13:38:30 +0000 UTC]

cool

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valachhim In reply to littlevillagewolf [2012-05-06 17:53:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks (:

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littlevillagewolf In reply to valachhim [2012-05-07 13:57:36 +0000 UTC]

no prob =3

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Chunkymonkey94 [2012-05-06 00:07:52 +0000 UTC]

I love the background! (=

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valachhim In reply to Chunkymonkey94 [2012-05-06 09:47:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Jes, it was hard work..

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GreyMornArt [2012-05-06 00:06:39 +0000 UTC]

The art is very well done. It has a distinctive style to it, and the hook isn't bad. You do have a few grammar errors though. Here are a few corrections:

"Day by day, the sky gets darker"

'Day by day' is an introductory statement, so it should be separated with a comma. 'Get' becomes 'gets', but you could also swap it out with a stronger verb like 'grows'.

"A storm will come. I can feel it."

These are two complete sentences; therefore, you should have a period between them.

"But I have other concerns."

Your original isn't incorrect per say, but it's awkward wording.

Hope that helps!

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valachhim In reply to GreyMornArt [2012-05-06 09:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you a lot!
You're pretty good in english, you know? I'm german, so you have to forgive me my bad english :/

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GreyMornArt In reply to valachhim [2012-05-06 16:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Sure, no problem. They're very common mistakes. Don't feel bad!

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LewKat [2012-05-05 22:25:22 +0000 UTC]

truly a beautiful page
I love the landscape

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valachhim In reply to LewKat [2012-05-06 09:48:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LewKat In reply to valachhim [2012-05-06 17:06:19 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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JaneCherrytree [2012-05-05 20:21:38 +0000 UTC]

Es muss zwar heissen: "The sky getS darker", aber trotzdem toll :*
Der Wolf sieht mal echt toll aus^^

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valachhim In reply to JaneCherrytree [2012-05-06 09:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Ja weiß ich jetzt auch schon :/ ich dachte nur weil es eben kein he she it gab dass man kein S zufügen muss, ahhhh englisch ich kanns nicht
danke

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JaneCherrytree In reply to valachhim [2012-05-07 04:31:36 +0000 UTC]

Naja kannst dich ja unterhalten in englisch und bist verstΓ€ndlich^^ Anscheinend lernt mans an unserer Schule aber unheimlich gut^^ Ich kenn nΓ€mlich einige leute die nicht so richtig damit vertraut sind
Ist aber keine Schande xD

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valachhim In reply to JaneCherrytree [2012-05-07 13:17:37 +0000 UTC]

schaaande ΓΌber mich wa swill ich eigentlich in zwei wochen in london? Oo meine Gastfamilie wird mich auslachen

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JaneCherrytree In reply to valachhim [2012-05-07 15:16:18 +0000 UTC]

du? nach london? =O.O=
Kommst du dann noch online?
*hoff*

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valachhim In reply to JaneCherrytree [2012-05-07 15:36:07 +0000 UTC]

jop
mh wenn dann mit iphone abert sonst eher nicht.. sind ja nur fΓΌnf tage

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JaneCherrytree In reply to valachhim [2012-05-07 15:41:00 +0000 UTC]

achso ich dachte jetzt son jahr xD
hab dich schon vermisst
Naja, du wirsts schon backen

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valachhim In reply to JaneCherrytree [2012-05-07 16:16:55 +0000 UTC]

ja, ich backe gerne

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JaneCherrytree In reply to valachhim [2012-05-07 17:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Haha ich nicht

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