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VanHeist β The Winter of Discontent
Published: 2015-02-09 17:46:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 20242; Favourites: 295; Downloads: 166
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I haven't done one of these scratchy unfinished comics in a while. This one was meant to be finished, but I got distracted by other stuff.But in case you're curious, this is pretty much how "stage 1" of me doing a digital comic goes.
As some followers may know, this is Andy's uncle Roy Fisher, his wife Kari, and Andy's cousin Leesha there at the end, along with a VERY UNDETAILED Gogo, a laughably badly suggested pickup truck, and a collection of lines that is supposed to be Pablo.
Apologies for the sloppy handwritten dialogue and the general messiness of the piece. figured i'd share it anyway. wistfully odd
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Your artwork is wonderful, but sometimes the sketch look has its' own charm too! Thank you.
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Excellent work! Very funny stuff XD
P.S. I do hope you complete it someday though :3
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Thank you so much for sharing this! Your dialogue is so amazing that it being unfinished is just fine. 
Also. This person. Just shhhhh nosy, bossy, anal person. Shhh.
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When you finalize this, please make sure the truck is balanced.
It's really bothering me to see that most of the weight is BEHIND Gogo. I know that the front end is heavier since it has the engine but jesus that looks imbalanced.
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Well if the gass tank is low//empty and it's a diesl (which are heavier), the engine would weigh down the front and that very well could be the center of gravity.Β
It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.It's fine.
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That's what I tell myself to help me sleep at night.
It's fine. IT'S ALL FIIIIIINE.
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That is the best drawn truck, without details, EVER.
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no need to ever finish this; it is great as it is. Β Roy's et ux's expressions are terrific as is Leesha's. Β You're right about Gogo but I already have detailed images of her in my head; those get automatically transferred to the suggested sketch. Β The pickup is a total loss but this way I can change it easily to a boxcar or tombstone. Β Nothing supposedly about Pablo; that is Pablo and well done too. Β I'd be happy if they all came out this good. Β Thanx for sharing.
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And yet, you know that pile of squiggly lines is Pablo.
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Doesn't matter how the truck looks, just as long as it has good gas mileage.
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Great and very funny as usually ! Β
Sad that you don't plan to finish it Β
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BS and all that on the apology. You have no need to apologize at all. Anyone who has read a reasonable portion of Bomango can almost see the wonderfull finished piece. The last frame would be the beautifully depicted image of the perplexed Roy and Kari and straight out WTF reaction of Leesha. I would much rather see you posting scraps like this as an addition than to never see them.
In all honesty, I stopped at "bikini clad amazon" and called my wife over. I did that because I didn't want to blow the punch line before she had a chance to read it.
Thanks for the giggle fit - Not enough sleep and too much caffine.
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You think they'd be used to it by now
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I'm sure she's done stranger things...
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She has. So much stranger...
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Oh c'mon Roy you live next to Gogo. That's not even the strangest thing that's gonna happen this week.
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My guess is she is breaking them apart, to construct her own 26 wheeler Gogo-Mobile. Only that would be truly worthy of her to drive, and she'd certainly have the strength to turn the steering wheel on that beast.
The 16 wheel Monster Machine toy from the 80s in mind when I imagine Gogo building.
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Actually my theory on this is that she has a giant hot wheel track and needed vehicles to race.
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FUCKING. YES.
THIS.
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......I don't think i wanna know whats happening to those trucks.
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perhaps they were illegally parked in a snow emergency zone, and she's helpfully moving them to a vacant side street to avoid tickets.
"Like a good neighbor...."
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So, she works for StateFarm?
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It could be drwn with stick figures and I'd still ROFLOL.Β
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As usual, fantastic sir, just fantastic.Β Despite the fact that in my notifications I thought you were bein' a big ol' tease, and it's sketchy form, it makes me happy anytime I read any of these Bomango comics.Β You sir are a master of your craft, at least in this man's honest opinion.Β
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I thought this was blank at first. Thought you were teasing us for a min. guess i just had to fix the lighting lol.
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Hehe sorry. I figured I'd leave it at "working opacity", since it looks less like a car crash than 100% would have been
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Lol it's alright, my brightness was just turned up too much. And i'm just trying to figure out what Gogo was doing with those trucks
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I feel his pain, definitely closer to 50 than I feel like I should be. Β Pausing to reflect on your life is inevitable.
So is watching giant, bikini-clad Amazons move pick-ups...y'know if they live near you.
Thanks for sharing!
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Hmm. Gogo got a job with the local wrecking yard? And she takes the trucks home first to shake out any goodies left inside (loose change, CD's, shrunken heads).
Please do FLESH this one out a bit more. Also, good to see Leesha again. Always felt she had a crush (or first possession claim) on Andy.
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XDD Gogo makes ya think and reflect on your life XD
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She does make you question your life and your choices.
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According to Leesha, Gogo is Andy's Animal Wife.
Andy is as a son to Roy.
So that would make Gogo Roy's Animal Daughter in Law?
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Must be a hobby of Gogo... To Pickup... TRUCKS...
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Dang it! You beat me too it
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I SSSSSOOOOO hope you finish this one, even incomplete its hilarious! XD
P.S. I could MAYBE forgive the shitstorm winter weather I've been enduring lately if my neighborhood had its own bikini clad amazon prowling about...Especially if she carried away the snow piles in my yard along with her cars XD
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I suspect Gogo has learned the value of a quick buck and is offering a "snowy ferry" for those that can't afford to wait for commercial roadside service assistance.
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For whatever reason I cannot see this ending well for Roy. No matter how it plays out.Β
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Your comics are a highlight of logging in to check my messages.
Scratchy or not, they are entertaining and inventive.
Please don't stop sharing awesome Bomango stuff with us, even if it means sketchy, I'll take it!
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Meh. Stranger things can happen. So the guy and his family should be thankful it's just a scantily clad Amazon carrying trucks. That, and not something like one of the sanity shattering Elder Gods and such. (OR IS IT?)
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