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vavacung — Crazy Future Part 51

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Published: 2014-12-27 15:05:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 65391; Favourites: 544; Downloads: 263
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Description "You're stolen my first kiss!!!"

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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Comments: 469

TheHowlingStorm In reply to ??? [2014-12-29 16:40:39 +0000 UTC]

NOW YOU F*CKED UP!

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ChaoticNote In reply to ??? [2014-12-29 08:52:06 +0000 UTC]

See I told you he was a jerk. He's pretty possessive, and a thief.

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AJR001 In reply to ??? [2014-12-29 08:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Rage mode activated...

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Dragon-style In reply to ??? [2014-12-29 06:39:31 +0000 UTC]

Jeez, kind of like his mom and jumping into things head first.

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TigerGeekGuy In reply to ??? [2014-12-29 05:54:51 +0000 UTC]

  DUCK AND COVER!!!

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QuestionDeca In reply to ??? [2014-12-29 03:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Comeuppance.

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DynamoDazzle In reply to ??? [2014-12-29 00:54:31 +0000 UTC]

This guy must REALLY get around if he can identify species by the taste of their saliva!

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therougerogue In reply to ??? [2014-12-29 00:17:57 +0000 UTC]

- "Run!"

- "Fly, you fool!"

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Tyrant-Swain In reply to therougerogue [2014-12-29 03:27:55 +0000 UTC]

Don't you mean "Fly, you foal!"?

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therougerogue In reply to Tyrant-Swain [2014-12-30 06:22:08 +0000 UTC]

Ooo... Clever. Never even thought about that. lol

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Crushermach3 In reply to Tyrant-Swain [2014-12-29 04:51:36 +0000 UTC]

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cajobif In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 23:22:18 +0000 UTC]

What do you expect from someone who read a lot of romance novels?

Now, kick his butt Sparity!!! He deserves it.

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zaiali In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 23:01:44 +0000 UTC]

shut up, baby, you loved it. 

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ULTRADJ4EVER In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 22:36:47 +0000 UTC]

I've never gotten the whole first kiss thing, but that's just me

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turian-kabale In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 22:16:39 +0000 UTC]

so NOW you have to run !
xD

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DeathDustwalker In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 22:12:47 +0000 UTC]

You are dead Pal

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fusionguybrony In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 22:05:48 +0000 UTC]

Alter, go f**k yourself

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Sturmlion1 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 21:34:46 +0000 UTC]

And then he died, but he died after tasting the sweet taste of Sparity! So all good.

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gorgeouspony In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 15:06:11 +0000 UTC]

You'd better run, or she will eat you up like what she did to her parents!

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MugenSeiRyuu In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 14:04:29 +0000 UTC]

Judging by his words, he already kissed a Dragon before...

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lonercs In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 13:02:26 +0000 UTC]

wep, somepony just got added to the sex offender's list.

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Sarchiappone In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 12:34:11 +0000 UTC]

I can see next page.

Rarity and Twilight come back to the castle just in time to see Alter fly away out of a window.
R: What?!?
T: I can see that Sparity has met my son.
R: Oh my. I'm so sorry.
T: It's all right. It happens every time he meet a cute mare.

Continue...

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OoOCarolineOoO In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 12:33:56 +0000 UTC]

YAY!! kill him!!

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DarylChin In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 12:33:52 +0000 UTC]

And thus, Nightmare Rarity is awakened, all thanks to Alternate Dawn.

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derpy526 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 12:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Kill him Sparity!!! Do it!!

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Terrortheslayer In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 11:51:32 +0000 UTC]

run you fool, RUN!!!!!

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CandyFlightTV In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 11:36:23 +0000 UTC]

O__O oh my....poor Sparity

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firecharge44371 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 11:16:30 +0000 UTC]

oh, you're in for it now mr

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OnlyOn9Games In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 11:16:10 +0000 UTC]

That moment you realised...
You've bucked up.

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Lonewolf1138 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 10:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Her reaction is priceless. XD 

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cisutsu123 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 10:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Run boy, if you want to live.   

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gillspar In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 09:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Bane:  "We both know she has to kill you now." 

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VelvetyLicks In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 09:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Time to see if that foal is FIRE PROOF!!!

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PinkFluffyUnicorns24 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 09:08:10 +0000 UTC]

Damn

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mlprocks06 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 08:54:49 +0000 UTC]

This is hilarious I can't wait for more

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Joshua-Sora In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 08:22:32 +0000 UTC]

Shit just got real! XD Goooo get em' !

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Elitas-2 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 08:04:27 +0000 UTC]

I think he use lips contact to collect and memorises stuff like Starfire with her languages....or he's just a casanova 

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kevin110197 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 07:56:06 +0000 UTC]

*Turn to the left, leave the chair slowly, and then RUN!!!*

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Randomreader-001 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 07:55:15 +0000 UTC]

O.O.....Alter.....
in the words of the"The Doctor"....."Run!"

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Merc-King In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 07:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, you just pissed off a Pony-Dragon hybrid. No matter how strong magically you are I suggest you run as fast as you can.

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MysteryDeath13 In reply to Merc-King [2014-12-28 07:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Run!!! Boy!!! Run!!!!

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Jdueler11 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 06:21:53 +0000 UTC]

And what's wrong with that?

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uncommentator In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 06:18:12 +0000 UTC]

You screwed up now.

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Gamerkm95 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 05:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Sparity uses Flame thrower spell,......Super Effective,........Prince Dick bag has fainted

^Taking Bets on that's what's going to happen next

Also Lol Slightly Burned marshmallow taste, yummy 

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Jonos13 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 05:36:57 +0000 UTC]

I hate this cliché... still gonna read though...

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Merc-King In reply to Jonos13 [2014-12-28 07:25:15 +0000 UTC]

It sounds cliche but some girls (and boys) tend to savour and remember their first kiss as something to remember/treasure.

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Jonos13 In reply to Merc-King [2014-12-28 18:31:04 +0000 UTC]

I was talking about the scene where we have a know-it-all guy who just claims her as his own without even knowing a thing about her, Kissing her, and treating as if he did nothing wrong. That's the cliché I'm talking about and see a lot in anime.

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Merc-King In reply to Jonos13 [2014-12-28 20:50:40 +0000 UTC]

It's not just Japanese anime though. In western movies it's pretty common tropes for douchebag characters. They tend to be very narcissistic. It's played for laugh and they tend to be the bad guy or if they are the main character then they will turn for the better in the end.

Example movies:

Zoolander

When in Rome.

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QuietTiger4ever In reply to Merc-King [2015-11-20 04:55:24 +0000 UTC]

and beauty and the beast

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Robotic-Turtle In reply to Merc-King [2014-12-28 08:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Come of age Japanese dealy thing.
Boy and girl.
It might be an anime cliché, but it still has a grain of truth.

I don't think westerners care QUITE as much. Am I wrong?

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