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Published: 2014-12-27 15:05:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 65405; Favourites: 544; Downloads: 263
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"You're stolen my first kiss!!!"Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*
If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…
English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
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#First : Crazy Future Part 01
#Previous : Crazy Future Part 50
#Next : Crazy Future Part 52
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Comments: 469
Merc-King In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 09:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Actually from several social sites I frequent westerners love to talk about who was their first kiss too! Just like their teenage first crush and the time they lost their virginity.
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lollipopflower In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 05:22:20 +0000 UTC]
LOL! Marshmallows! We all know where that part of her came from!
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EL-JEMVI In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 05:12:27 +0000 UTC]
she have fire powers or normal powers? [o.o]
PD Alter maybe can anwer me.
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Darkagumon2000 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 04:53:25 +0000 UTC]
In a burst of Dragon/Pony flames.......Alternate Dawn became Extra Crispy Dawn.
"YOU STOLE MY FIRST KISS!!!!"
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Zenrix In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 04:45:19 +0000 UTC]
Rarity: "I'm sorry darling, but it appears my daughter has murdered your son."
Spike: -glaring off to the side- "She beat me to it."
Twilight: -facehoof- "I knew this was going to happen at some point. Tried to be the lenient mother, but no..."
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Coletrain12 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 04:32:09 +0000 UTC]
Eeyup,dick move Dawn,Dick...move
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The-Only-Nyx-Sparkle In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 04:25:48 +0000 UTC]
Uh oh. Alternate Dawn, teleport for your life...
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2tail In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 04:23:58 +0000 UTC]
He is able to be sent to tartarus for his crime. Hope Twilight has a portal set up to get him back. That is a long walk.
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Kaira-theKnight In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 03:36:59 +0000 UTC]
Run,run as fast as you can and never come back!
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TipsyAi In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 02:52:03 +0000 UTC]
..why do i get the feeling part of the library is gonna be..burned down.. .w.;
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Shadowcatcherfox In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 02:23:33 +0000 UTC]
This can't be the first time his 'testing' has resulted in this kind of reaction.
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PonyvilleFC11 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 02:11:03 +0000 UTC]
Note to self: Don't make Sparity angry.
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ultrixcrow In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 02:07:25 +0000 UTC]
*rolls around laughing my ass off* XD
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SoulfulMirror In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 01:52:34 +0000 UTC]
Do it do it do it do it do it do it
www.youtube.com/watch?v=iSf_cs…
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coffinjockie In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 01:42:15 +0000 UTC]
KILL HIM. KILL HIM WITH FIRE.
lolnojk...
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shaduron In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 01:29:57 +0000 UTC]
Alter, I have one thing to say.........Run. Run like your life depends on it and pray that you don't run into her dad or your mom or her dad and your mom.
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TerraHv1 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 01:29:48 +0000 UTC]
And here I was thinking that was a fantasy...
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tyruvelp In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 01:07:07 +0000 UTC]
please tell me she can breathe dragon fire
DRAGON FIRE!
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NCbrony In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 01:06:43 +0000 UTC]
I dont think he thought this through
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Blitz2423 In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 00:46:16 +0000 UTC]
The combine fury of a Dragon and a Drama Queen wrapped up in a pony dragon hybrid... Alter, your f***ed.
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mistymoonphase In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 00:31:33 +0000 UTC]
well... that's twilight's son. using a kiss as an analysis scan...
on the other hand....
31.media.tumblr.com/3cd2a65b66…
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lycanthropicleo In reply to ??? [2014-12-28 00:09:31 +0000 UTC]
That face in the last panel reminds me of something, can't remember what tho
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tyruvelp In reply to lycanthropicleo [2014-12-28 01:08:49 +0000 UTC]
just about every anime girl before they about to pwn-3 (see what i did lol) some one
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asuraludu In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 23:55:37 +0000 UTC]
Kiss analysis..... an amusing talent.
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Corsair43 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 23:51:24 +0000 UTC]
As I said for part 50: I hope she bucks the snot out of him. How was THAT raised by Twilight?
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NightWolf574 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 23:51:23 +0000 UTC]
I sense doom in his immediate future.
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EL-JEMVI In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 23:42:14 +0000 UTC]
Now Sparity transform into Nightmare Sparity and seal Alter to the moon.
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2tailedDerpy In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 23:38:50 +0000 UTC]
Sparity knows that even if Dawn is an Offspring of Twilight, he's getting his ass whooping ALL the same.
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Ultimaexe24 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 23:34:03 +0000 UTC]
holy crap she lost run pony boy run!!!!!
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Shalidar13 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 23:12:51 +0000 UTC]
He just angered a powerful pony/dragon hybrid, who is the daughter of Spike and Rarity. My advice to him would be 'Run. Just start running now'
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PinkiePopForever In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 22:53:21 +0000 UTC]
You've fucked up now Alter you better ready for an ass whooping now
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RainbowBlast124 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 22:44:53 +0000 UTC]
I don't think he kissed her... I think he just get some DNA example from her... XD
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ObsiKyfimic In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 22:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Im guessing that she liked someone else to kiss or that she isnt old enough to kiss yet
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