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Published: 2015-01-25 20:07:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 65524; Favourites: 581; Downloads: 286
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Description "Like mother, like son. The apple doesn't fall far from the tree."

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)

Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/


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Comments: 254

kayarei In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 17:21:51 +0000 UTC]

Heh. What's so special about 'first kisses' anyway? It's just a number. 

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GraybeardTheWise In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 17:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Sacrifice your son to all the hate and disrespect, FOR SCIENCE!

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kabhes In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 17:19:25 +0000 UTC]

well with the mens could it be easier if she did it who would not diny if a good looking presses wants to kiss you

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TheRussBus [2015-01-26 15:49:26 +0000 UTC]

Saw that coming from a mile away Twi.

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SchwarzerRitter In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 15:34:20 +0000 UTC]

Spartiy, if that makes you feel any better, your father made the whole dragon code thing up.
There was no need for getting kissed in your dragon and your hybrid form.

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Dev-i In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 14:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Twily is the best mom.

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White-Spark In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 14:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Why 3 kisses?
1) Pony form
2) Dragon form
3) ??????????

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GraybeardTheWise In reply to White-Spark [2015-01-26 17:22:09 +0000 UTC]

2nd kiss was for the experiment, the third most likely out of pleasure since she couldn't stop herself ^_^

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nightcore0 In reply to White-Spark [2015-01-26 15:47:12 +0000 UTC]

I know right? Did Alter kiss her 2 times in dragon form?

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Cador2004 In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 13:06:46 +0000 UTC]

I'm guessing that the third was for the in process transformation, right? 

...So when's he going to make one for Rarity and Spike?

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snowsong2003 In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 13:03:27 +0000 UTC]

wat has spike had to say about this? i he going to be mad or FATHER LIKE PROCEKTING?

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BeardyKomodo In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 09:55:09 +0000 UTC]

I've seen some comments about Twi' being a poor mother / leader...
Meh. May I remind you that it is just kisses? And it gives magicians
and medics all over everything they need to heal you if injured?
It isn't just a spoiled prince being a whore, he DOES do it for a good
cause What he does, benefits the ponies in Twilight's rule.
So lay off the bookworm and accept the fan serv- ahem, fan fiction!

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Daiskida In reply to BeardyKomodo [2015-01-26 18:30:25 +0000 UTC]

No, it's not for a good 'cause. The guy acts like a creep, a hypocrite and he gets all the hate he deserves.

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BeardyKomodo In reply to Daiskida [2015-01-26 22:14:50 +0000 UTC]

And also one of the few characters that actually
gets something valuable done in their world ^_^
Besides, it is just a kiss... or three.
(ps, fictional character. Chill out with the hate)

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Daiskida In reply to BeardyKomodo [2015-01-26 23:00:52 +0000 UTC]

No, he doesn't do anything valuable, he's a little pervert with an ability that makes him come off as a creep and even more bizarre ID card ability  (which is based off a really bad manga from I've been told), and also the way you are phrasing it makes it sound like others are doing jack, while Alt Dawn is somehow a special snowflake.

So? Just because he's a fictional character doesn't mean I can't express my dislike for him and say that I find him essentially unlikable in any sense. I'm not exactly hating on him, now I am?

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BeardyKomodo In reply to Daiskida [2015-01-26 23:56:38 +0000 UTC]

I never said everyone was doing nothing,
I only said that he is one of the few that
DOES do something a bit more important.
It is more than an ID card, as we got told.
And I never claimed him to be a special
snowflake. I don't personally like him.
I don't like my dentist either, but I can
appreciate their existence when I get ill.

Also... this is what I love with this fandom.
Banish aggressive teen sister to the moon
for a thousand years, imprison chaotic
demi-gods in easily broken statues, send
young and ill experienced teens to solve
any problem, destruction in fire and magic
on a daily basis, all of that is A-OK!
But a kiss for medical purposes? NO!! NO!!  xD

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Daiskida In reply to BeardyKomodo [2015-01-27 00:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, well I don't appreciate his existence, and the care thing is still silly no matter how you explain it.

You are really comparing all that stuff to a kiss that is claimed to be for "medical purposes", do you even realize what is wrong with your argument?

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BeardyKomodo In reply to Daiskida [2015-01-27 00:38:45 +0000 UTC]

I made that argument to widen your
tight-ass view on this world xD
You guys accept a shit-ton of crazy
on a daily basis, yet what triggers
your buttons is a kiss that can help
in medical assistance?
It is FAN FICTION and doesn't even
matter! I only told a bunch of kids
that they didn't need all the negative
energy that they put in this.
If you don't like him, that's fine.
But if you are reading a comic that
is obviously fan-fiction / clop mat,
what do you expect to see?
Just laugh it off and focus your
hate on things that really matters.

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Daiskida In reply to BeardyKomodo [2015-01-27 11:56:47 +0000 UTC]

There's so much wrong with this statement I don't even know where to begin.

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JoeEngland In reply to BeardyKomodo [2015-01-26 17:56:16 +0000 UTC]

It might be "just kisses," but the truth is that it really is something that matters to some people.  Their reasons may seem irrelevant to others, but it's not up to others to decide what should and shouldn't be important to the individual.  This girl clearly valued her privacy and held the idea of intimate contact to certain standards, and that's her privilege.  Advancing medical science is no excuse, "the greater good" is never a justification for assault.

And you can say that it's not "really" assault, but... well, consider Fluttershy.  There's a personality type with certain issues who would likely panic if someone took such liberties.  People can be (and have a right to be) very sensitive.  And princesses and physicians both should have an exceptional responsibility to respect those individuals.

As for giving medics what they need to heal you if you're injured, well, that sounds good, but taking that information without consent flies in the face of the hippocratic oath as we know it.  Things might be different in Equestria, but here there's a great sanctity placed on the concept of "doctor-patient confidentiality."  People allow doctors to examine them down to the bone, but only the doctors they choose.  The idea that a complete stranger can grab all your medical data and do what he wants with it is reprehensible to the ethical code that doctors are meant to uphold.

Sorry, sorry... I know I'm on a soapbox here.  I don't mean to jump down your throat.  This sort of thing just tends to send me off on a tangent, I know I'm taking it too seriously.  This clearly isn't a "too serious" comic!  But, ah, it's geek nature to make things more serious than they are.  Love the view from that soapbox, yessir... anyway.  Pardon my rant, it's a knee-jerk reaction.  Gotta learn to bite my tongue.

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BeardyKomodo In reply to JoeEngland [2015-01-26 22:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Hey its fine You have your opinion and I have mine.
Also, I am known to go on lengthy speeches as well,
so no harm done! If anything, I appreciate to see when
people get emotionally invested in something like this.
And you bring up good points, for human beings.
Though these are ponies ^_^' and their standards are
far different from our owns, no? I could be wrong too.
I mainly just reacted to all the people that has clearly
never seen manga / anime that focuses on teens until
this, and where violently hating the guy for the kiss.
Maybe it is just me and my culture, but a kiss is not a
big deal, unless you are a emotionally trapped teen
with way too expectations for what the world will hold.
Besides, it is just a cutesy MLP manga
And we are talking about a fictional world where it is
fully acceptable to banish your emotional teen sister
to the moon for 1000 years because you could not get
your royal white flank into action and care about it!
As well as to trap demi-gods in statues until someone
else can deal with it... But a kiss?! NOO! xD

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mlock [2015-01-26 09:39:18 +0000 UTC]

KISSES!
KISSES EVERYWHERE!

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Spongepierre In reply to mlock [2015-01-26 10:20:19 +0000 UTC]

*kiss you* /)*3*(\

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mlock In reply to Spongepierre [2015-01-28 11:39:25 +0000 UTC]

O.O

...wow! i'm a foil laminated card!

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Nikary [2015-01-26 09:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Wait, first, second and third? I thought two was enough? One for each form?

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refferee [2015-01-26 08:20:52 +0000 UTC]

So Twilight says kissing is dirty work...

Seems legit

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KingdomHeartsEWY [2015-01-26 06:58:32 +0000 UTC]

Lol, Twilight so sneaky XD

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Drayle88 In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 05:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow... Twilight you are such a pathetic example of a mom and a leader. Just... wow. 

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CraftyMaelyss [2015-01-26 04:07:33 +0000 UTC]

First kiss in normal form, second kiss in dragon hybrid form, what was the third kiss?

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ShadowRater1 [2015-01-26 03:54:04 +0000 UTC]

didn't she only have two kisses because of to different forms?

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GingerMay In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 03:52:21 +0000 UTC]

why 3 kisses? i thought only 2 kisses 

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FireFlowAlicornPony In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 03:36:04 +0000 UTC]

wait what she mean third

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Tunglskin In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 02:57:12 +0000 UTC]

So Twilight's son is basically a younger, genderbent version of herself?
Makes sense.

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cajobif In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 02:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Well Rarity lived with Spike long enough for him to have told her some very interesting stories about Twiligh's "researches" and the dirty works he had to do for her.

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lula77 In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 02:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Lol, More! I loved it!

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ItAchimex In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 01:30:03 +0000 UTC]

the Apple dont fall to far the tree

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Crazyaniknowit In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 01:23:15 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Wisp In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 01:20:27 +0000 UTC]

*claps* Brilliant!

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ArkadioRainrix In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 01:13:30 +0000 UTC]

guess he got a third kiss just to be extra sure it worked?

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SchwarzerRitter In reply to ArkadioRainrix [2015-01-26 01:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Sparity has a pony, a dragon and a hybrid form.

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ArkadioRainrix In reply to SchwarzerRitter [2015-01-26 09:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Madness MADNESS. Or she couldn't resist another?

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EL-JEMVI In reply to SchwarzerRitter [2015-01-26 01:25:34 +0000 UTC]

but her 'draco form' are a mix of pegasus and drago.

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SchwarzerRitter In reply to EL-JEMVI [2015-01-26 15:31:19 +0000 UTC]

The mix form would be Sparity's true form.
Having a mostly pure pony form would mean she also has a mostly pure dragon form.

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EL-JEMVI In reply to SchwarzerRitter [2015-01-26 21:44:02 +0000 UTC]

good  theory.

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WorldWalker128 [2015-01-26 01:06:50 +0000 UTC]

At least he didn't ask to kiss Rarity.

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EL-JEMVI In reply to WorldWalker128 [2015-01-26 01:24:34 +0000 UTC]

If hi try,Spike not only burning him. But, well, not a very nice end.

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Phaedrolous In reply to WorldWalker128 [2015-01-26 01:20:36 +0000 UTC]

...yet.

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anideterm3 In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 00:24:37 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh Twilight *sighs* and we yet have to see Spike's reaction to the kisses.

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EL-JEMVI In reply to anideterm3 [2015-01-26 01:23:14 +0000 UTC]

Easy, he kill the son of his 'sister'. Or force they marriage.

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tyruvelp In reply to ??? [2015-01-26 00:22:33 +0000 UTC]

3 kisses ? i only counted 2 ... 

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