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Prev: [link] // Next: [link]Moonlight is thought to transform some people into strange creatures to drive others mad...
......Does the moon actually possess such strange powers or is it all just....lunacy?
Inspired by Godsmack's "Moon Baby"
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References to Yaoi pairing. Goku x Vegeta. This is about Veg (full name Vegeta Jr.), their child.
This storyline takes place about 6 months after the Cell Saga. Goku didn't stay dead and Veg is about 3 1/2 years old...
Welcome to the madness that is "This Time Imperfect"
Author's Note:
It's important to bring attention to the other ki sensing beings located around the planet.. I also gives me the opportunity to practice on drawing characters that I don't normally draw... A story needs plot and character embellishment.
EDIT: Neatened up the speech bubbles and blackened out the sky to show a little depth and some much needed stars... Man, does that moon look bright or what?
Dragonball Z, Master Roshi, Piccolo © Akira Toriyama
Veg © me
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Comments: 28
What is with Piccolo's ears?! Their more funny to laugh at! hehe
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Thank you, captain obvious. I was still learning to draw him at the time. I hate that panel but I haven't gotten around to fixing it either. Anyway, glad you're enjoying laughing at my expense.
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No problem... Though i would love to see the rest of it! You are good and something like this, you shouldn't leave it hangin'
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great job on the stones in the back, and I especially like your work on master Roshi
I think it's great that you have your own stille!
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You draw Piccolo so well! 
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Piccolo: God damn sayains and their monkey transforming... *grumble, grumble*
*snerk* There goes Piccolo meditating again. I guess it's not really hard to get his daily activities down huh?
I can't say I remember Master Roshi ever being able to ki sense, because I don't remember it being a skill Krillin learned from him and I know he can do it. However this still seems to fit and I'm probably just talking out of my own ass. It seems in the show though, that characters of higher power level seem more adept at accurate ki senseing than those of lower power level (or at least they seem to be the ones who do so more often in the show) so if Roshi can sense Veg's power while he transforms, then that's a real testament to the combined power of the child of the universe's two greatest fighters.
Full moons tend to be annoyingly bright for night time, so the way you portray it here, seems right to me. I was going to give some critque about the way Roshi was drawn, but I can't seem to come up with any good reference pictures of him to back up my critique. So I'll just leave it at that. So far so good with this story
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lol. I'm SO not used to drawing Roshi and it's hard to find good pics of him other than putting an episode on pause (I have the dvd box sets of seasons 1 - 3 so far and they come in handy for references).
I'm quite proud with how he came out considering the fact that this is the first time I've drawn him.
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Nice job on Piccolo and Master Roshi. Youve captured them very well. ^_^
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The detail on this page is great. 
I also enjoy how you have Piccolo meditating in the first panel. That's always his trademark introduction. 
You're right, adding characters like these is important for plot and character establishment. 
ajkdahjksdh NEXT PAGE, NEXT PAGE!
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he looks even better if you download it to see the comic in its true size
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WOW. The sheer detail of the true size copy looks amazing! O_O
The folds in his cape, the rocky land behind him really stand out. :3
I can't wait to find out if Piccolo plans to destroy the moon again or if Goku and Vegeta stop him in some way.
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Looks great! So, it was wished back? I think that was a bad move >.>
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Yay Piccolo. <3 -plays with his ears- So far so good. ^^
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Ah, so Bulma wished it back ^_
I like your style of Piccolo! *counts fingers* Heeheehee...
I like the detail on Roshi's glasses in the "curve" of dark to light. good touch
Awe, you put stars in the firs tone, but not in this one... *pout* I guess looking at the full moon would erase all the local stars form a direct look at it.. ^_^ case closed.
i gotta say the best detail on this is the background behind Piccolo-sama ^_^
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I decided not to put stars in because it just looks like a buncha dots to other people... SOME people might this it's snow or something...
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:bwahaha: No stars is great too ^_^
Such a great page! PICCOLO RULES! WOOT!
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I realize that. It doesn't mean it HAS to be that way. He may be old but he's also a bit more spry than he puts off.
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he just uses his old age as an excuse to get away with certain things when it's convenient for him. heh, hence being a dirty old man with a penchant for getting in trouble with women...
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