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[Quote from Epik High's "Run"] [link]Personal reference used for the sky.
Time: 3+ hours
Tools: SAI, Photoshop 2
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Comments: 22
Waterwolf11 [2012-02-24 20:35:02 +0000 UTC]
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First I have to say is that I really love your style you use in your drawing. Quite nice really. Now the whole 'sky and boy/girl running' tends to be a over done concept, but I actually really like the idea of adding in a shooting star (is that what it is?) But that really seems to give it a nice touch. The blending in the sky and the sky's highlights from the fading suns rays are really good~ Plus the bright stars off to the top left corner make it even more pleasing to the eyes. Also, you picked out a nice font for the words at the bottom. The only suggestion is the fact that the blue 'light spot' next to the runner takes away from the drawing.... I don't mind the placement, I just believe that the color does not really match all that well with the drawing in its self.
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vitellan In reply to Waterwolf11 [2012-02-25 05:14:39 +0000 UTC]
Ah, blue light spot was actually part of the filter for lighting/scattering camera effects (there should be the faintest shadow of a pinkish circle near the runner as well). But good point-- it does look a little random within the whole picture. Thanks for the critique! ^^
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Waterwolf11 In reply to vitellan [2012-02-25 16:53:26 +0000 UTC]
not a problem. That's for accepting my first critique I've ever posted!
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Phenoca [2012-06-09 22:58:14 +0000 UTC]
Was at a 6-hour race today.
... It has nothing to do with the pretty picture though
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vitellan In reply to Phenoca [2012-06-11 01:29:04 +0000 UTC]
Haha, congratulations! Running is great.
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Phenoca In reply to vitellan [2012-06-11 04:21:51 +0000 UTC]
I was just there providing water. Did not run
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Thisper [2011-04-03 23:46:37 +0000 UTC]
WOW. So beautiful, such perfect colors. And I like how you included some text
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vitellan In reply to Thisper [2011-04-07 20:18:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! The lyrics for that song make me want to keep painting using it as inspiration.
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vitellan In reply to KyuubiMyLove [2010-03-31 16:32:47 +0000 UTC]
It was very fun to paint.
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vitellan In reply to Mystic0Anya [2010-03-24 00:12:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I took great pictures on my cellphone on the highway. ^^
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Hiliasin [2010-03-15 23:25:57 +0000 UTC]
From the thumbnail I thought this was a photograph.
To me it has a handheld camera feel, somewhat bouncy, a bit blurry, but with some adrenaline and I love the energy it gives this.
My eyes keep drifting from the runner towards that amazing sky again and again, and that too adds to the movement.
I really love this.
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vitellan In reply to Hiliasin [2010-03-16 04:17:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Having a reference for the sky was an immense help (and is also probably why it might have seemed like a photograph in the tiny thumbnail).
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graphicspirit [2010-03-15 20:40:38 +0000 UTC]
nice idea, colours and lighting
but those street lights have a really strange form and perspective
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vitellan In reply to graphicspirit [2010-03-15 22:08:34 +0000 UTC]
I got rid of them. Someday they may reappear when I figure out the perspective (and actually stop being so lazy and find a ref image for those). Thanks!
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