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Published: 2012-04-09 21:35:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 967; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 36
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Description Continuing art study, some people now. Well...the general anatomy of them anyway xD Next I'll move onto facial expressions and stuff lol or skip to foxes

Please critique ;D (lol I know I probably got a lot wrong on this one)
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ireniccircle [2012-04-10 01:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Duuuuuuude, Matrix *-* *has to watch it again now*

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wanton-fox In reply to ireniccircle [2012-04-10 19:57:16 +0000 UTC]

haha, yeah I was watching it when I drew that xD

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ireniccircle In reply to wanton-fox [2012-04-11 01:06:53 +0000 UTC]

It's pretty much my favorite movie CX I want Neo's boots *-* Also I really like Tank

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wanton-fox In reply to ireniccircle [2012-04-12 01:38:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Tank's a tank xD

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ireniccircle In reply to wanton-fox [2012-04-12 01:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Chuss. He's just. Badass.

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P-8 [2012-04-09 23:56:42 +0000 UTC]

I think your proportions are a bit off, judging by that dude with the peace sign. I guess that's fine for cartoony, but if you were aiming for a more realistic body, I reckon you'd need to stretch those legs and shrink those feet. I'm no expert at man torsos, I'll give you that, but maybe those pecs could be a little more rounded at the outer edges. And nipples aren't at the dead center of them either, they're farther from the center than you made them.

I like your poses a lot, my favorite is chillax man

For what it's worth, maybe you could try female body anatomy before you move onto faces.

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wanton-fox In reply to P-8 [2012-04-10 20:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Ah yeah xD I wasn't really going for like, realism this art study is more developing a style than practicing realistic drawings.

and I don't know about guys in general, I just kinda based this of myself, I don't really have well-rounded pecs lol and the nipples aren't in the center

And thanks!
Well I did do a couple of female drawings but I don't think they're appropriate for my general audience xD...

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P-8 In reply to wanton-fox [2012-04-10 20:44:40 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I wasn't too sure what you were going for
But yeah, still, I think the dude needs to either have his arms shortened or his legs extended--right now his arms and legs look to be about the same size. Unless that's like a character trait of his, unusually long arms, idk XD In that case I'd suggest you exaggerate the disproportion more, so it's clear you're going for more of a caricature.

Sorry if I'm saying too much -_-

Well you'd have to mature tag them if bewbs and nekkidness and such, so I think your general audience would be safe--unless they turned off the mature filter, but then if what they see offends their tender sensitivities, they brought it upon themselves and it's their fault. B( Just sayin'.

If you don't want to upload regardless but want some critique on them, you could send them to me via notes. I'm a girl so I'll have an easier time giving you feedback on those, too XD

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wanton-fox In reply to P-8 [2012-04-10 20:52:24 +0000 UTC]

Nah it's fine ;D thanks for the critiques
eh, they're crappy anyway, all these are haha xD I'm a pretty shitty artist that doesn't have a lot of free time. Thanks for asking, but I don't think it's necessary, I'll draw some PG ladies later hurr hurr
Maybe I'll send you some, if you want, but eh, they're stupid

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P-8 In reply to wanton-fox [2012-04-10 21:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Do you remember who you're talking to?
The dumb one.
I'm like the Queen and King of stupid simultaneously. I'm all about stupid. B)

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wanton-fox In reply to P-8 [2012-04-10 22:27:13 +0000 UTC]

well 'ere ya go [link]

Rough sketch, I've already spotted things wrong, but you can give it a whirl

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P-8 In reply to wanton-fox [2012-04-10 23:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I think this is really good
I had to check a lot of refs to make sure my suggestions weren't hokum XD
[link]
But here.
Also, it's good to keep in mind women generally have a larger legs:body ratio than men, so even when stylizing, exaggerating this disparity could be a good way to further differentiate the two sexes.
Thinning the legs and making them more shapely could make her a bit more feminine as well, but the way they are now works with your style.

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wanton-fox In reply to P-8 [2012-04-11 00:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'll keep in mind this exaggeration, good idea, and thanks for the marks on the picture! I'll try and make a better sketch when I have more time perhaps. thanks again! ^^

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