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Description Just a very rushed sketch of Bellatrix Lestrange & Red Cap as they appear in my HP fic, Twin Vice. I have a lot of fun writing/drawing these two! Eeeeeviiiil

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Two figures stood alone at the end of a cul-de-sac, staring at the featureless building before them. The first was a ghost, her long grey hair, which had once been as pitch as night, hung loose and limp around her sharp face, her mouth thin and unsmiling. The second figure was a goblin. His face was old, wicked and leathery as a bat’s, and atop his head of greasy, matted hair he wore a crooked cap, stained in blood. His back and shoulders were permanently hunched over – he had become so used to sneaking into people’s rooms in the dead of night to slit their throats that his spine had contorted to fit his needs, just as his long, twisting fingers were made for snatching (more often than not small children who wandered too far from their mothers).
Red Cap had a terrible taste for children.

The council house was a grey-faced, semi-detached sad looking building surrounded by overturned bins and a few frost-bitten shrubs that had long since been given up on. A Muggle man staggered up the drive way, pulling keys out of his back pocket as he fumbled for the door. It took eleven attempts before he found the key slot and a further five minutes for him to locate the handle. He had not given the ghost or the goblin the slightest bit of notice, the reek of sweat, liquor and urine trailing after him as he stumbled over the threshold.

The crooked goblin wrinkled his long nose and spat on the ground in disgust, the spittle melting four inches of snow where it landed.

“This is beneath a Goblin.”

“You are three feet tall. Nothing is beneath you.” Bellatrix sneered hatefully at the house. “Why do they shut themselves up inside little grey boxes? What a waste of life and space. And to think what greater use they could have been put to, but no. Gutless Muggles still live as they die: blind, mindless fools, content with their fragile existence.” A thin smile snaked across her face. “If I had my wand, I would put them out of their misery.”

“Very gracious of you, ah’m sure, Bella,” Red Cap grunted, fumbling around in his leather satchel until his fingers brushed upon a smooth, heavy object wrapped in dead leaves. “Here, but be careful! If you break that, it’s your soul on the line – what you ‘ave left of it, anyhow.”

-- Twin Vice Paranormal Detectives, Chapter 18
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Comments: 35

Schlimazel [2008-09-19 00:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Eek, this is very Brian Froud! Wonderful characterisation. :]

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to Schlimazel [2008-09-19 01:21:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness, really? That's the greatest comment I've ever received on anything, especially coming from you (I love your work!). Thank you so much! "Faeries" is like my bible. I always keep that book close at hand when I'm writing Twin Vice. Flicking through it is the best cure for writer's block.

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Kagira [2008-09-10 01:39:20 +0000 UTC]

This looks like an illustration pulled out of a book - really professional looking, in my opinion!~
Their personalities come across wonderfully, I really wouldn't want to mess with either of them. XD

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to Kagira [2008-09-15 18:14:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, that's a lovely comment to have! It was just a very quick sketch - I like to get the characters I write down on paper for other's to see how I imagine them, especially when it comes to OCs like Red Cap. ^^

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Kagira In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-19 23:43:36 +0000 UTC]

It was the first thing that came to mind when I saw it!
A very quick sketch? That makes it even better!~ I do the same - I write about them first, then do some quick sketches to get the image down. :] (...The final result is usually completely different than the initial sketch though...*cough* xD)
You're very welcome!~

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Xilmin [2008-09-08 15:10:26 +0000 UTC]

Goblin!

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to Xilmin [2008-09-08 16:27:34 +0000 UTC]

Oi vey...
I'm NOT drawing you those cotten head things. NO. Just NO!

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Xilmin In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-08 18:31:22 +0000 UTC]

What about a tufthead?

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to Xilmin [2008-09-08 22:46:59 +0000 UTC]

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Leaviel [2008-09-06 19:00:54 +0000 UTC]

uwwaaaah! creepy cool!!!

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to Leaviel [2008-09-08 23:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm writing more RedCap/Bella at the moment. They're so lé twisted..

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Leaviel In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-10 03:11:01 +0000 UTC]

lé twisted, indeed!

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inkai [2008-09-06 16:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, I love it. Not only do you draw well, you write fantastically!!

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to inkai [2008-09-08 23:08:33 +0000 UTC]

Whooo, double comment of epicness! THANK YOU! Really, that means a lot - I've got bugger all confidence in my writing ability, but I just love to tell stories ^^

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XlameXchickX [2008-09-05 01:13:44 +0000 UTC]

I Really liked that part, glad u decided to draw them!
Ha, i was like, "Wow! are there really more than 18 chapters in her story"?
I usually get bored with long fanfics.
lol
I didn't even realize that i was reading one!
(enjoyed the last update by the way!)

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to XlameXchickX [2008-09-15 18:16:59 +0000 UTC]

So do I! In fact I've never written a story that's gone past ten chapters before Twin Vice. I blame JK entirely, leaving me to sort out that messy error in DH (Fred dead? Pfff, honestly ). Anyways, thank you so much mate!

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Portal-girl [2008-09-05 01:09:23 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! I love the text on the art, too. Where's it from?

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to Portal-girl [2008-09-06 03:26:53 +0000 UTC]

It's by Neil Gaiman from 'Smoke and Mirrors' ^_^ I used it as the header for that chapter, too

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Portal-girl In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-06 03:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. ^^

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hatorikunlver [2008-09-04 23:25:32 +0000 UTC]

this is MAGNIFICENT!!!!
GREAT WORK!

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to hatorikunlver [2008-09-06 03:27:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Especially glad to hear you like it, being that this is my first time drawing either Bella or Red Cap ^^

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hatorikunlver In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-06 14:04:57 +0000 UTC]

yeah
don't draw them too often I always feel like Bella will stab me and that Red cap will drain my body of blood and then eat me.

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to hatorikunlver [2008-09-06 18:03:04 +0000 UTC]

LOL! It's possible

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hatorikunlver In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-07 17:24:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks . ..

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wolfofkohona [2008-09-04 22:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow.... Creepy.. Bella's nose looks kinda long. Is that meant to be that way?
Great job!

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to wolfofkohona [2008-09-04 22:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^ Yeah, that's the style I'm going for (although it's a little too identical to Makani's Bellatrix style here XDD).

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wolfofkohona In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-04 23:38:30 +0000 UTC]

Yer welcome, dude! D
Ahh, sweet. It really does look awesome.

Me: Hey! Ugly ghost lady! ( I feel the need to taunt Death Eaters XD )

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ElectrikPinkPirate [2008-09-04 22:16:08 +0000 UTC]

No joke, Redcap scares the hell out of me both in the story and here

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to ElectrikPinkPirate [2008-09-04 22:24:56 +0000 UTC]

WAHAHA! Le boo! Mind you, I still don't feel like he's creepy enough just yet... I will strive to creep-ify him further!

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hatorikunlver In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-04 23:26:44 +0000 UTC]

not creepy enough?! I THINK THE GUY WANTS TO EAT ME!!!
wait a minute . . . he probably does

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ElectrikPinkPirate In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-04 22:36:17 +0000 UTC]

oh crap.

i'll learn to cope. I'll just grab one of the twins for strength

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MangaRaven [2008-09-04 22:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Interesting....I like! ^^

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to MangaRaven [2008-09-04 22:23:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks mate! I should draw Bella more often - my gallery's lacking villains XD

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MangaRaven In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-04 23:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Ye welcome mate! Mine is lacking majorly on that AND heros....^^

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Weasley-Detectives In reply to Weasley-Detectives [2008-09-04 22:23:53 +0000 UTC]

(the Ginyus don't count as villains XDDD)

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