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Published: 2016-07-13 23:51:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 7788; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 27
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Chapter III is finally here, you've waited for it! The appearance of the mighty douchebag Fernand Monsparkle, and the beautiful Shycedes!

There is some things that I wanted to point out in this page and chapter:
First of all, I needed to rename the name of the chapter from "The Catalans" to "A Storm Rising" because in this particular universe the name "Catalans" wouldn't make that much sense in case of human race and places of Equestria. This chapter is called "The Catalans" in general just because Fernand and Mercedes are Catalans by their blood, but as ponies that's not making that much of a sense since in Equestria ponies are separated to three/four races. And here I'm talking about ponies in particular, since both Twilight and Flutters are ponies.
Second, the reason why this chapter took so long is because I needed to re-read this particular chapter for several times in order to think how to change it as some points, I hope it won't take me that much time next time.
Anyway, enjoy the beginning of a new chapter!


Inspired by Assasin-or-Shadow  | InkPotts  | TorusTheScribe .

The novel 'The count of Monte Cristo' written by: Alexandre Dumas.

The original 'My Little Pony - Friendship is Magic' series belong to Hasbro. 



Special thanks for helping me with the backgrounds:

EndiDjPrime

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Also, thanks for the correcting and other kinds of help:
MLP-FIM-22

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smaug64 [2025-03-16 11:29:24 +0000 UTC]

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fotland42 [2017-12-31 02:19:42 +0000 UTC]

"Please, you can just call me Snow White."

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smaug64 In reply to fotland42 [2025-03-16 11:28:41 +0000 UTC]

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natitoonfan21 [2016-11-18 22:18:12 +0000 UTC]

flutters is mercedes

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zsocreed [2016-10-21 01:55:48 +0000 UTC]

This is great! When are you going to do the next one?

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whatevstu In reply to zsocreed [2016-10-21 02:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Pretty soon I guess. I had a little gap for two months from drawing the next pages because there are some parts I needed to overthink. 

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zsocreed In reply to whatevstu [2016-10-21 02:33:44 +0000 UTC]

Well whenever. Can't rush it I suppose. Your really good!

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whatevstu In reply to zsocreed [2016-10-21 03:24:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I really appreciate your opinion, and I'm very grateful for the compliment!^^
All troubling things are more or less settled, so you won't have to wait for too long.

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Pony-from-Everfree [2016-07-16 17:22:00 +0000 UTC]

Hm, I'm interested in how you rework the story. Also, the background reminds me of one old (probably world-wide unknown) videogame...

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Mlp-CandyFilly [2016-07-16 04:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Yes! New page!!  

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whatevstu In reply to Mlp-CandyFilly [2016-07-16 09:20:24 +0000 UTC]

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Rommok [2016-07-15 10:02:34 +0000 UTC]

one thing bothers me. In the book I got the impression that Fernand wore something less chic and more fisherman. The suit  kinda  feels... out of place currently. I mean he isn't rich or fancy but I think you could have toned it down.
just my thoughts tho.
Also I know the animatics but just sayin'
you know what just don't even look at this comment

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whatevstu In reply to Rommok [2016-07-15 10:51:59 +0000 UTC]

I'll just say that comparing to some other costumes; blue jacket and black bowtie is not that fancy costume, and rather simple.
Also, it makes no sense that Fernand in here is a fisher, since what's the point for ponies to have fishers if they don't eat fish?

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Rommok In reply to whatevstu [2016-07-15 21:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I you didn't need to reply so thank you.

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whatevstu In reply to Rommok [2016-07-15 21:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Sorry

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EdmundDashie1815 [2016-07-14 15:06:45 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaay, теперь будем много шикарного Фернана!

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CandyLikesArt [2016-07-14 12:26:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh yasssss

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NoxyMLP [2016-07-14 12:03:45 +0000 UTC]

Already i can´t wait see next its cute

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whatevstu In reply to NoxyMLP [2016-07-15 10:52:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you^^

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NoxyMLP In reply to whatevstu [2016-07-15 18:13:36 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome ^^ keep up the great work ! ^^

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FluffleLord [2016-07-14 09:59:54 +0000 UTC]

Love how you added the Fluttershy touch with those animals

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whatevstu In reply to FluffleLord [2016-07-14 10:38:12 +0000 UTC]

That was my friend's idea, thanks^^

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IrmaHide [2016-07-14 09:56:40 +0000 UTC]

Why is Fernand in count's clothes? In chapter 3 he was just a fisher.

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whatevstu In reply to IrmaHide [2016-07-14 10:35:48 +0000 UTC]

In the very first Ink Potts animatc; "A Story Told" , where Fernand is yet not a Count, he wears those clothes, and it was promised that as a Count, in the upcoming animatic "I know those eyes/ This man is dead" he'll have different clothing.
Also I was in need of changing Fernand from a fisher to a simple mage in this comic, due to no sense for ponies to be fishers, since ponies do not eat fish.

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VanillaShineArt [2016-07-14 01:50:51 +0000 UTC]

Holy cow you did an AMAZING job with these backgrounds!!

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whatevstu In reply to VanillaShineArt [2016-07-14 10:22:59 +0000 UTC]

If you would've read the description you would know, that the backgrounds were drawn by , and not me.

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VanillaShineArt In reply to whatevstu [2016-07-14 15:38:58 +0000 UTC]

Shoot- uM SORRY
You both did an amazing job, though!!
This is art goals!!

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purplefox1 [2016-07-14 00:05:14 +0000 UTC]

All of the animals started running when Fernand started talking. Lol. Poor guy.

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whatevstu In reply to purplefox1 [2016-07-14 10:42:38 +0000 UTC]

They know what kind of  douchebag Fernand is

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purplefox1 In reply to whatevstu [2016-07-14 14:07:04 +0000 UTC]

Smart animals.

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Count-Monsparkle [2016-07-13 23:53:29 +0000 UTC]

And the story continues, now we're getting to the really cool chapters. And now Monsparkle has his time to shine, hooray
Great page, I think the idea with the animals worked really well here

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whatevstu In reply to Count-Monsparkle [2016-07-14 10:43:05 +0000 UTC]

You waited for too long for this moment, aren't ya?

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