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Published: 2009-01-05 21:42:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 4008; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 41
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Description Art trade with It's her character Ankaa

I'm still wondering how to shade a creature surrounded by flames... -.-' And because I didn't figure that out, I shaded it like most of my other pieces. Or infact I didn't, I had to test a bit different way of shading because of those color changes in Ankaa's plumage. And it seemed to work, it saved time and spared some of my nerves AND looks quite good, so I probably will use it later again.

And you probably noticed I was lazy with the background again. I just like starry skies and it somehow did look good with those flames, though the flames itself sucks.

I also had a bit of problems with the line art :/ Ankaa is supposed to have a look like a secretary bird, but does she now look anything like a secretary? Epic failure...
But I hope you still like it...

Line art by pencil, colors&stuff with PS CS 3 +tablet

Ankaa (c)
art (c) me
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Comments: 45

inugami-chan [2009-01-25 17:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you could add some red colour to the flames?

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to inugami-chan [2009-01-26 11:10:49 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, it maybe could work But I'm probably leaving this work like this because I'm too lazy to fix those flames

Thanks for the comment!

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TheAntimonyElement [2009-01-07 21:31:32 +0000 UTC]

I love the colors and the twist of the left wing--beautiful!

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to TheAntimonyElement [2009-01-08 15:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! The twisted wing just looks a bit funny for me, Skudde said something about it, but it's in Finnish and I'm too lazy to translate it now

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TheAntimonyElement In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-08 18:36:08 +0000 UTC]

Ha, wow! I truly admire you bilingual people!

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to TheAntimonyElement [2009-01-09 08:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha, tackså mycket, men jag kan tal lite svenska också

^Though I'm not so sure if I did wrote that right, but anyway, the translation would be "thank you very much, but I can talk little Swedish also" or something like that And I had a course of Latin but I've forgotten most of the words we learned there -.-

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TheAntimonyElement In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-13 01:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I'm very impressed! I took Spanish for four years in high school but my last teacher was so terrible that she didn't only not teach us anything, she *untaught* me. I mean, I seriously forgot everything that I previously learned. I really can't explain it. O_o. So all of my mad language skillz kinda died with that.

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to TheAntimonyElement [2009-01-13 13:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Ow, I hate teacher like that... Really I mean, they are TEACHERS, they should teach things, not make people forgot them...
I myself had a several years ago one darn English teacher who made me feel really uncomfortable and unwilling to learn anything in her classes. I'm glad I had her as my teacher only for either ½ or 1 year...

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TheAntimonyElement In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-15 00:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Definately! It's always a bummer when you get stuck with that kind of teacher...I had an English teacher who yelled at me for requesting after-school help one time...

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to TheAntimonyElement [2009-01-15 16:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Argh, some teachers really are just horrible...

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Alpha-Phoenicis [2009-01-07 15:51:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow... its... amazing! xD One of the best pictures of my fursona I've ever seen!
Flame is great
Background is good to, if you don't know how do it stars are one of the best ideas
Colors... In some places they could be more orange or red, especialy next purple colors, but your part of thare is better than mine xD
Fav of course

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Alpha-Phoenicis [2009-01-07 15:59:24 +0000 UTC]

Great that you like it! I'm so glad to hear that
Starry background is almost always a good choice, though it is quite simple... But something in them is so pretty
Yeah, I though also the reddish parts could have been more reddish possibly, and something else also looks funny in them in my opinion. I just don't know what it is And you can't say this would be better than your part, your part is so awesome too!

And yeah, thanks for the fave

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Alpha-Phoenicis In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-07 17:49:49 +0000 UTC]

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Gloomy-Fish [2009-01-06 17:58:10 +0000 UTC]

coooooooooooool colours!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Gloomy-Fish [2009-01-07 13:30:56 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thanks for your comment! And thanks for collecting this pic also!

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Gloomy-Fish In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-07 17:38:15 +0000 UTC]

your welcom times two!

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Gloomy-Fish [2009-01-08 15:41:29 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Skudde [2009-01-06 14:12:30 +0000 UTC]

Uih, upea. :3 Liekit on mahtavat, muttei liian liekehtivät mikä on ihan hyväkin asia. Päässä on jotain... epäWPmäistä. Se ei oo enää sellanen pallukka, vaan ihan virtaviivanen ja fiksun näkönen pää. Paksuhko keho... mutta kivat jalat jos höyhenien peittämää aluetta ei lasketa. Pyrstöraukka on kovin pieni. :/
Siivet on upeat. Etenkin (sen) oikea. Ei edes näytä liian suoralta. Tuo toinen taas... tiedätkös, kun teit noi sulat näkymään yhtä aikaa siiven päällä ja alla, näyttää niin kun niitä oli kaksi kerrosta. Tajusitko? ^^' Siis vasemman siiven, olikos ne kyynärsulat, näkyy yhtä aikaa siiven alla ja päällä. o_O Pimeetä...
Kamalan ohuet taas sen luut siivissä, mutta enpä nyt keksikään mitään muuta kritisoitavaa. Hienon näköinen se silti on.

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Skudde [2009-01-06 15:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Liekit on kököt jos multa kysytään Pää on epäWPmäinen juurikin sen takia, kun yritin sihteerilinnusta mallia siihen ottaa enkä käyttänyt sitä perinteistä feeniks-tyyliäni siinä. Keho on kauhistuttavan paksu kyllä, ja jalatkin meni vähän miksi sattuu, ja nyt kun sanoit niin tuo pyrstökin näyttää aika turkasen pieneltä O_o Sitä vaan ei aina tuppaa huomaamaan kun piirtää nenä kiinni paperissa...
Siivet on HIRVEÄT. No joo, tuon oikean siiven asento näyttää ihan hyvältä, mutta siinä mulla kävi pienoinen kämmi sitä piirtäessä ja sen siiven anatomia on muuten pyllystä. Annan sulle tehtäväksi etsiä se yks virhe mikä mua häiritsee helkkarin paljon. Sinä kun nuista sulista tiedätkin jotain Ja juu, vasen siipi on jotain alienia...

Mutta kiitoksia taas kommentista! Seuraavaksi onkin vuorossa sun Luigisi, line arttia oon jo peräti jonkin verran tehnytkin

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Skudde In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-06 17:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Oii! Odotan innolla sitä valmista.

Etsiä sua häiristevä virhe oikeen siiven sulista? Hmm... *tuijotus* Joo, löysin jo ennen kun fullsize-kuva ehti latautua kokonaan. Nää sulat menee jotenkin... suppuun tossa ruumista lähestyttäessä. Jos se on se vika mitä meinasit niin tajusit varmaan. Niin, ja nyt kun tuli puheeksi toi siipi, niin eipä siinä kyllä kyynärpäätäkään ole että jos siitä lähdetään. x3

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Skudde [2009-01-07 14:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Ai niin, ja älä sit säikähdä vaikka Luigi tulee näyttämään lievästi WP-istetyltä... Tosin en vielä oo täysin valmiiks koko line arttia saanut

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Skudde In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-08 12:40:23 +0000 UTC]

Nääh, hyvä juttu vaan että on omaa näkemystä ja tyyliä mukana. Sehän se art-traden idea oikeestaan onkin.

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Skudde [2009-01-08 15:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Jeh, sen pitäis siinä ideana myös mun mielestä olla

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Skudde [2009-01-07 13:44:18 +0000 UTC]



Ei se itse asiassa tuo sulkien suppuun meneminenkään ole. Tai häiritsevältä se näyttää ja se kyllä johtuu siitä mun mokasta
Ja juu, kyynärpää näyttää tosissaan häviävän olevasti tuossa siivessä... Mut siellä se kyl on, tosin turkasen lähellä rannetta O_o Ja olkavarsi on näköjään vähän venähtänyt tässä tekeleessä...

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Vooron [2009-01-06 11:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Vai ei neiti osaa piirtäåä liekkejä xD tuo kuva on aivan mielettömän upea O_o pidän tavasta jolla piirtelet linnuille siivet ^^

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Vooron [2009-01-06 15:50:25 +0000 UTC]

En osaa piirtää liekkejä. Tai ehkä erittäin sarjakuvamaisia tuhnuja niin kuin tuossa. Mutta kiva jos tykkäät tuosta väsäyksestä Ja tässä työssä noiden siipien anatomia nyt heittää härän pyllyä vaikka ne kovasti muuten yrittää oikeaoppiset ollakin...

Mutta kiitoksia paljon kommentista ja favista! ^^

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Katruu [2009-01-06 09:09:15 +0000 UTC]

Voi herttinen ko on upea! o3o Todella tarkkaa työtä olet kyllä tehnyt ja värit ovat mielettömän kauniit~! :3 Nui liekitkin tuossa ympärillä ovat aivan mahtavat! c:

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Katruu [2009-01-06 15:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Kiituksia paljon! ^^ Tuosta tarkasta työstä voidaan olla montaa mieltä, sillä siivissä on "pientä" häikkää mikä siipien anatomiaa tuntevia voi häiritä erittäin paljon -.-' Valitettavasti huomasin itsekin ne häikät vasta kun olin varjostamassa kuvaa...

Mutta kiitokset myös favista

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Katruu In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-06 17:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Eipä mitiä! :3
Minusta siivet näyttävät kyllä todella kauniilta~! 8D En kyllä tosin tiedäkkään mitään siipien anatomiasta.. X3

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Katruu [2009-01-07 13:33:35 +0000 UTC]

No noissa siivissä on sellasta häikkää mitä minäkään en ois ennen edes huomannut, mut nyt kun yritän tehdä realistisia siipiä pienimmistäkin peitinsulkien asennosta lähtien oikein niin häiriinnyin mokastani Ja kiitos edelleen ^^

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laludia [2009-01-05 23:04:14 +0000 UTC]

I like the flames and colors. Great job. I adore secretary birds too because they have cool looking heads and pretty eyes.

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to laludia [2009-01-06 15:43:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your comment! Yeah, secretary birds are really cool looking birds and beautiful also.

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laludia In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-06 17:04:00 +0000 UTC]

Yes They use to be my favorite birds.

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to laludia [2009-01-07 13:47:49 +0000 UTC]

Heh, that's nice I can't say what are my favourite birds, because I like so much of parrot birds, falcons & eagles, hoazins (I'm not sure if it's typed like that) and ... maybe something else I can't remember now

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laludia In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-07 20:51:04 +0000 UTC]

I also like the eclectus parrot, they're are so cute and have different colors depending on their gender. I wanted one but they cost a whole lot of money.

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to laludia [2009-01-08 15:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, eclectuses are quite expensive... I'd like to get one too, and even if I would have money to buy one of them, I wonder how much a cage big enough for one would cost >.< That's one reason why I decided to take a Pyrrhura Conure, a parrot in a little body but with really big ego

Maybe you can get an eclectus someday... But there's also a whole bunch of pretty parrots which are less expensive

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laludia In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-08 20:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Yup, I also may want a sun conure, but I'm stuck with two canaries right now. They still are awesome though. Somehow I taught both to play dead and fight with my fingers.^^

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to laludia [2009-01-09 18:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Heh, Sunnyes are pretty ones also ^^ Oh, you have Canaries? Can I ask what age are they and what coloration/"breed"? I still wish I would someday get a couple of specific Canaries, I just don't remember what their "breed" was called in English ><
Hmm, they play dead? That sounds interesting

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laludia In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-09 21:28:09 +0000 UTC]

My canary is about 4 years old and one is the fife canary the other one is the lizard canary. I don't have those expensive red factor ones. I wish I could. Just to inform you I'll be of the web till the early february because of midterm.>.<

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to laludia [2009-01-09 21:40:25 +0000 UTC]

I don't remember anything of those fife canaries, I'll check if there's something about them in one of the cage bird books I have. At least I know Lizard canaries And yeah, those red factors would be so pretty...

I did read your journal I just didn't leave a comment there... But, we probably will be hearing about you after January. Take care of yourself!

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Senraikin [2009-01-05 21:51:38 +0000 UTC]

When you say secretary, I imagine women neatly dressed in dress suits. So I'm not sure if a secretary phoenix should look like a real secretary or not. x_X' I have a suggestion for the shading problem. I think it's best to shade the fire around the phoenix as well. It may sound weird but a light shade of blue is a decent color to shade fire with. But not big splotches of blue. I mean like thin barely noticeable lines.

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Senraikin [2009-01-05 22:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I mean a secretary bird like this Those cute fellows...

Hmm, I'd better try that shading-flames-style when I do something, eh, flamy, again Thanks for the tip! And for the fave also

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Senraikin In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-05 22:05:46 +0000 UTC]



I'm glad you like it. I haven't used that technique since I was a freshman and I was designing a homemade picture. My teacher suggested I used blue to outline the fire and I thought it looked real cool. And yer welcome. ^o^

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WhitePhoenix7 In reply to Senraikin [2009-01-05 22:08:15 +0000 UTC]

And it really sounds interesting to be tested

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Senraikin In reply to WhitePhoenix7 [2009-01-05 22:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you. ^o^ But it doesn't have to be with blue all the time. It can be other bright colors such as white. And if the flame isn't orange or the typical colors, you can always use a darker or lighter shade of that color.

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