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whitestormclouds — Jupiter: an Athletic Juggernaut

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Published: 2017-08-07 02:21:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1650; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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      [This is an analysis of a character from my story Project: Gaia. Each Planetess is shown in their underwear, however they normally wear clothing of some kind. The following is a short story featuring a random sequence in this character's life.]

“Come on, Gaia; pick it up! This is too easy!”


    Jupiter held up her fists as she bounced on her heels, ready to take on Gaia’s punches. However, the tired Planetess was having trouble mustering up the stamina needed to keep up with her taller friend’s moxy. Large beads of sweat were rolling off of her cheeks and splashing onto her breasts as she inhaled heavily. Typically Gaia tried to avoid sweating too much due to the fact that it caused large rainstorms to appear on her surface, though she made an exception for Jupiter who desperately needed to train for her upcoming match.


    “I...need...a break…” Gaia whimpered as she leaned over, putting her hands on her knees.


    Jupiter sighed angrily and dropped her fighting pose, placing her hands on her hips. “It’s not like you’ve got the hard part. I’m the one who’s taking all of the damage.” She argued. Which was true...to a certain extent. Aware that Gaia was very opposed to fighting (due to the damage it could do to the little humans that lived on her) Jupiter made Gaia her sparring partner but gave her the role as the Offensive Fighter so that the more experienced Planetess could work on her blocking.


    This seemed like a good idea on paper, but the fact of the matter was that Gaia wasn’t that good at throwing punches herself, even when the target was standing still and not fighting back. Her hits were lackluster and so was her endurance: she admitted to being “a Lover and not a Fighter.” Despite knowing this ahead of time, Jupiter was growing repeatedly frustrated with her softer friend.


    “Come on, just one more match! And really try to go for my vital areas: pretend like you normally fight dirty. I gotta prepare for everything in this match.” Jupiter said as she got back into her fighting stance.


    Gaia nodded and shook the sweat out of her hair: watching it rain down to the celestial concrete at her bare feet. All around her were the sounds of other Planets either playing basketball or sparring with each other in their own training fights. Standing there in a loose fitting grey shirt and running shorts, she could not have looked more out of place. Despite this, she still wanted to help her friend out so after taking a running start, she attempted to uppercut Jupiter right in the jaw; placing all of her force into just that one punch.


    Unfortunately, all Jupiter had to do was step backwards, causing Gaia to miss. On top of that, the clumsy Planetess tripped on her own feet and fell forward causing her to run into Jupiter. Before she knew what was going on, her face was engulfed in Jupiter’s rather large breasts and her arms were wrapped around her muscular waist.


    With an angrily grunt, Jupiter pushed Gaia off of her (which kinda hurt her) and began walking towards the bench. “We’ll take a 10 minute break. Hopefully you’ll take this all seriously by then.” she muttered.


    As Jupiter stormed off, Gaia suddenly felt a pang of guilt: sure she wasn’t the most athletic herself, but she knew how much this matter to Jupiter. The titaness had been unstoppable this year with each MMA Match she fought in and was quickly on her way to winning the State Championship for her school: it would be a big honor.


    Gaia was able to say more, but suddenly felt the ground vibrate. Jupiter noticed as well, as she turned to look at the source. As she glanced off towards the end of the Court, and a flash of hatred danced across her face. Gaia followed her line of vision and saw a Star entering the court. But not just any: she must have been twice as tall as Sol and three times as muscular. Her black and white work-out clothes issued the logo of a school Gaia wasn’t familiar with.


    The Star, who wore of smirk of snarky confidence, walked in with a slightly shorter Star who took up a fighting stance before bracing herself for the sudden barrage of punches her more muscular friend started throwing. Jupiter stared at them in disgust, but didn’t say anything.


    “Do you...uh...know her?” Gaia asked.


    “Gamma Pavonis. Unbeaten MMA Champion for our District for the past 2 years. I’ve lost to her twice, but this time will be different. Next week, I’m gonna beat her.” She said through gritted teeth.


    “Next week!? Wait, you’re fighting her next week?! But she’s a freaking star! She’s huge!”  Gaia exclaimed.


    Jupiter turned and flashed Gaia a cocky grin. “Don’t you know already? Most MMA clubs at schools in this state send Stars as their best fighters in competitions. I’ve been in 4 this month, and I’ve found a Star 3 times. So if I can handle them, then Gamma is nothing to be scared of.” She said.


    A chill rocked Gaia’s spine when she heard that: 3 Stars in the past month? Gaia barely came up to Sol’s ankle (Jupiter barely past that) and she was the only Star that she knew personally. But to think that Jupiter could take down those giants filled her with a sense of awe.


    Despite her aggressive behavior and bossy nature, Gaia was glad to have Jupiter as a friend: someone she truly felt safe around.




Pose ref: kate-fox.deviantart.com/art/Po…

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Comments: 10

Iamborede [2017-08-20 15:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Love the socks lol

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whitestormclouds In reply to Iamborede [2017-08-25 02:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I figured Jupiter is the kind of girl that only really needs one pair of each kind of clothing anyway: the smell of sweat doesn't bother her that much. 

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Iamborede In reply to whitestormclouds [2017-08-25 02:18:47 +0000 UTC]

So her socks kinda smell then?

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whitestormclouds In reply to Iamborede [2017-08-25 02:24:55 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps. Though when planets "sweat" they're creating storms of their atmosphere across their surface. When Gaia sweats, rainstorms appear on her surface. 

Though I'm not sure what kind of atmosphere Jupiter has, or what it would smell like. You probably wouldn't survive long in it though. 

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Iamborede In reply to whitestormclouds [2017-08-25 02:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Well, I guess that's fair lol

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Jessthenotsohotmess [2017-08-08 02:49:21 +0000 UTC]

This is a pretty neat idea; and she's really cute ^^

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whitestormclouds In reply to Jessthenotsohotmess [2017-08-11 02:26:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a ton! I appreciate it.

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HeroofLightandDark [2017-08-07 02:24:01 +0000 UTC]

So basically Jupiter is a athletic nut who just wants to get stronger and better. And a leader. Besides Sol. Looks great! Now all we need are Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto.

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whitestormclouds In reply to HeroofLightandDark [2017-08-11 02:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Well, Uranus is out now, but the other two are the last on the list. 

And yeah, that's Jupiter all right. Bigger and better is always her goal. 

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HeroofLightandDark In reply to whitestormclouds [2017-08-11 19:58:04 +0000 UTC]

Well can't wait to meet all of tem.

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