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WhiteWitchsDaughter — LOMM:KON - Issue 1, page 2
Published: 2010-11-23 20:55:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1797; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 32
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FINALLY! PAGE 2 IS DONE!!!This page was such a b*tch to do!
Anyway, I hope you enjoy it and please please PLEASE leave some feedback.
*WhiteWitchsDaughter owns the characters and the artwork.
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Comments: 58
Thankies Jane, I aim to please with my work X3
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No probies! X3
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Balto's cute great job on him love the comic so far
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your welcome
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the first lines he said were hilarios...i almost fell out of my chair xDDDD
i also like the way she react to it
with a calm yet slight giggle appearance,
in most cases girls tend to blush and overreact
with is why this shows alot of charerteristic points
yet it also makes it clear that she has a liking for him already,
that or shes very open and friendly....
i also like how he jumps from collum to collum
thats a very neat way of showing his movments kudos :3
magnificent job fluffs ^^
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Thanks Mike
I suppose it's a bit of both with Jassela - you'll find out what I mean at some point in the comic..
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your welcome ^^ *hugs back*
yea probaly will xD
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Balto seems to like Jasella 
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Hell yeah! XD Thanks
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a comic! 
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Well I don't have a lot of time to leave a complete critique so I'll just comment XD
It's looking good so far 
But it's looking good so far
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Thanks ^^
Yeah, I kinda messed up on the heights
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You're welcome
I do that sometimes too, especially in my earlier pieces. I figured out that if you put height marks on the side of the page it helps keep everything in it's perspective heights. If the character was sitting or lying down (like Balto), I'd figure out in a separate sketch what his height is when he's in that position, then I can plot on the actual comic page where the top of his head would be. XD
If that makes any sense at all.
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Makes sence to me, thank you!
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Yeah no problem
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Thankies Lilly
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This is.... Astounding!!! I use to plan on doing that.. and now, I think I should be back in business! Thanks alot for the inspiration Rena!
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X3 Thanks pal
No prob
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In fact, I'm already getting ideas for my cover.
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XD Thankies Star ^^
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Thank chu X3
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You're very welcome
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XD Thanks X3
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your welcome
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Think i'm going to subscribe to this 'comic', and it's not very often i read fan made comics to be honest. Due to my short attention span for them and the fact they mostly take place in future and not fantasy worlds which is my interest. Though there's something likable about yours
I can understand how long it takes to draw and colour each page, aswell as adding in the panels, speech etc.
Would there be comic translations of stories currently in the group in future?
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Thanks ^^
I guess so, don't see why not ^^
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The title of the comic made me believe that it was fantasy based, which is what drove me to it.
Is this comic set on the Mobius that we created for the group or is the setting unimportant to the story?
Either one of the two we have on the group currently i believe, not sure which one is more fitting for a comic translation.
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This one's set in Rena's past, so it's the 'Sonic' Mobius. ^^
I'm not sure either, but I'm sure we can work something out ^^
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I love how Balto jumps up across the panels there, that's awesome :'D
Great work, can't wait to see more!
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Thank chu Husky
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