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...I told you I'd have it done today.
ANYWAY. THAT'S OFF TOPIC. Enjoy this page, hopefully I can get the next one ready in the next week.
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SuperAlphaWolf [2012-01-17 08:26:00 +0000 UTC]
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WOW. This page is very good!!! Your dialog is very nicely done, the speech bubbles look fantastic, your shading is pretty awesome too. The colours are quite straining for a viewer because of all the dark shades used, but they set the scene nicely. The expressions I particularly like, they match the speaking well. The things I don't really like are the sound effects, you should try making them coloured rather than just plain white, it would do well. The backgrounds are good, but not very detailed, although the have a very good effect tying in with the main pictures, so that's good. Your character designs ROCK.
All in all, you have done a very good job with this page, but you do need to work on the sound effects.
~Akyti
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Wolved In reply to SuperAlphaWolf [2012-01-17 23:55:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I figured they needed color.. but what color, you know? XD
And my bgs... I can't think of much detail to add. But I guess in some ways that's good, because if it's to detailed, it takes attention away from the characters.
Thanks for the crit!
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Seranalu [2012-01-18 01:52:23 +0000 UTC]
I like the way you draw the wolves, Their expressions are nicely done. But perhaps different angles would be nice. They all seem to be bust and head shots.
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Wolved In reply to Seranalu [2012-01-18 02:11:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I know... unfortunatly right now there aren't to many full body shots, but there will be lots in the next few pages. High action stuff will be going on, so it's required. But usually when characters are talking I tend to do bust/head shots.
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Destynee33 [2012-01-17 15:41:32 +0000 UTC]
Love this page! The colors are really nice, even through the rain. I love Red's expressions!
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Dyxo [2012-01-17 03:48:29 +0000 UTC]
Oh my, now I know that wolves and hyenas don't get along. Let's see what happens here.
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Wolved In reply to Dyxo [2012-01-17 03:50:51 +0000 UTC]
XD.. Fantasy much in this comic. o-o
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