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Published: 2012-11-04 03:09:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 2600; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 45
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My first attempt at an OC, or even vectoring in general. Many, many thanks to Derpwave at the MLP-Vector Club for making such an excellent and accessible base for me to work with [link] . As you could guess, the name's Alpenglow, but I'll leave his background to your imagination 'til I think of a good one. Anyway, if anyone has any ideas on how I can get the armor and everything to match the show's style better, any and all constructive criticism is appreciated, thanks!Name: Alpenglow
Race: Pure-Blood Pegasus
Gender: Stallion
Age: 1129 years
Height: 5’5”
Weight: 274 pounds
Hair Color: Dark yellow/blonde
Hair Type: Natural, but groomed
Eye Color: Burgundy
Skin Color: Dark blue-grey
Blood Type: Ca+
Cutie Mark: Mountain range with glowing sky/horizon
Features: Slightly thinner and shorter frame for a stallion
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Soul Info----------------------------------------------------------------
Soul Type: Solid
Soul Color Major: Gold
Soul Color Minor: Orange-Red
Soul Color Edge: Burgundy
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Personality--------------------------------------------------------------
Harmony: Loyalty
Virtue 1: Compassion
Virtue 2: Temperance
Flaw 1: Apathy
Flaw 2: Wrath
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Personality Description-----------------------------------------------
Alpenglow is a thoughtful, but collected soldier. His intense emphasis on professionalism and duty to Harmony make him respected among his peers, but makes it difficult for him to relate to or interact with others outside of the knights. Alpenglow is a dependable member of whatever team he is on, and believes strongly in self-improvement and constant vigilance. Such beliefs can prove to be a double-edged sword however, as they can cause him to be insensitive to the plights of others and overly combative regarding the defense of Equestria. Still, Alpenglow is regarded for his compassion and level-headedness, eager to aid anypony in need.
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Astrological Sign: Virgo
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Favorite Food: Hay
Least Favorite Food: Gruel
Favorite Drink: Cider
Least Favorite Drink: Lemonade
Favorite Music: Orchestral
Favorite Colors: Silver
Least Favorite Colors: Bright green
Favorite Place: The Crystal Empire/ Ponyville
Least Favorite Place: Ancient castle of the royal pony sisters
Favorite Animal: Dogs
Least Favorite Animal: Timberwolves
Other Likes: Late-night gallops, going to concerts and plays, practicing flying and fighting, swapping parts of his armor, talking to the Princesses and his friends.
Other Dislikes: Evil, those who act without regard for others, selfishness, laziness, injustice.
Hobbies: Learning to sing, travelling around Equestria, and learning about different ponies and their communities.
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Status, Skills and Abilities--------------------------------------------
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Status----------------------------------------------------------------------
Strength: 80
Endurance: 50 (-10)
Perception: 120 (+20)
Agility: 130 (+20)
Intelligence: 40 (-10)
Wisdom: 70
Charisma: 30
Beauty: 40
Luck: 20
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Skills------------------------------------------------------------
1100 (+580 Age Bonus)
Combat Skills
Swords 124 (+10 CM Bonus)
Unarmed 75 (+10 CM Bonus)
Marksman 75 (+10 CM Bonus)
Offensive tactics 110 (+10 CM Bonus)
Defensive tactics 100 (+20 CM Bonus)
Stealth Skills
Hide 110
Move Silently 110
Tumble 110
Social Skills
Diplomacy 75 (+10 CM Bonus)
Intimidate 100 (+10 CM Bonus)
Leadership 90 (+20 CM Bonus)
Persuasion 36 (+10 CM Bonus)
Athletic Skills
Balance 50
Running 100
Jumping 75
Flying 110
Climbing 25
Knowledge
Geography 25 (+10 CM Bonus)
Nature 20 (+20 CM Bonus)
History 60 (+10 CM Bonus)
Medical Skills
Medicine 25
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Family and Home------------------------------------------------------
Father: Aethon
Mother: Morning Glory
Birth Place: Clousdale
Home: Ponyville
Job: Knight, Scout and infiltration specialist, medium cavalry
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Friends-------------------------------------------------------------------
Name - How they know each other
Princess Celestia- Serves as her guard and before as a student, learning the magical connection between all ponies and the world around them.
Princess Luna- Serves her just as he does Celestia, was instructed by her in the dangers of the night and how to resist the power of fear and hatred.
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Equipment-------------------------------------------------------------------
Armor: Medium-grade mix of plate and mail with caparison, highly resistant to both light and dark magic.
Equipment: Wooden heater shield emblazoned with elements of Harmony; short, single-edged sword; occasionally a longbow with crystal tipped arrows.
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Comments: 13
"least favorite place : Ancient castle of the royal pony sisters", "Age: 1129 years" ...
Hmm... methinks he has been granted with immortality or very, very long life.
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First thought: I AM PENILE WHITESTRIKE!!!! AND I AM ANGRY, ANGRY ABOUT ELVES!!!!!!
I should stop with the Skyrims.
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You are a... penile whitestrike?
X-D
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Looks great, most of it is perfect.
There are a couple of problems though.
Age,
The age limit of a Pure-Blood Pegasus is 2000+Endurance,
his age limit would be 2,060 and his current age is 2,039.
Since he was around when Luna became Nightmare Moon,
You should lower his age to between, 1100 and 1600.
Unless he died before the first episode,
then you should put the age he died and the age he would be if he was still alive.
Status,
Your character currently has a total of 680 of 580 status points spent.
You need to reduce them by 100 points.
Also,
you culturally have 10 in your beauty.
Beauty effects how hansom you look, and your character looks hansome.
A 10 beauty would make you a hideous monster that's probably deformed in places.
Here is an example of something with a 10 beauty [link]
Skills,
You have 1606 skill points spent.
All characters start with 1100 skill points plus there bonuses.
You character at the age is 2,039 years would have 1300 points to spend.
This will be less with a younger character.
A lot of the is probably from your other bonuses,
but I can't tell what is from what.
To show which skill has however many bonuse point it has,
put a (+#) next to the skill's points.
So if you had 100 in a skill and you put 10 bonus skill points into it,
then it would be 100 (+10)
Then if it has a bonus from your cutie mark it would be,
100 (+10)(+# from cutie mark)
I hope you can understand this all.
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Ok, I'll get right on making those changes that you suggested. Sorry for the mistakes, like I said I wasn't quite too sure when I was filling it out.
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That shield...
Tell me about yourself soldier.
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Just an old relic from the past, but we're never quite where you think you left us.
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lolwat did you just answer as the shield?
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Both the equipment and the pony are relics in a way it seems 
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The same can be said for my OC Lanceor [link]
Lanceor was the youngest child in the Royal Canterlot family when Discord conquered Equestria.
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