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Published: 2005-03-23 16:02:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Each day I don’t know what I will see,Whisperings in my ear, don’t know how to be.
Falling for eternity, drowning in air,
Shutting everyone out, no one will care.
On the inside I’m crying in rage,
Wishing I could get out of this body, my cage.
Not caring but fearing what is coming next,
The tables keep turning, don’t know what to expect.
Losing in a game that was biased to start,
Crying a pastime, hurting, an art.
Wanting and wondering, not knowing if I breathe,
Wishing and hoping that this feeling will leave.
Staring in the mirror, at what lays behind,
The people all laughing, so clear in my mind.
Hating the person that’s staring right back,
Reach out and touch her before everything goes black.
Comments: 12
xLonExWolFx [2005-07-12 17:35:09 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is awesome!!
shouldn't it be "at what lies behind"...? just wondering. but I'm not english anyway!
keep it up!
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xpythonx In reply to xLonExWolFx [2005-07-12 18:09:01 +0000 UTC]
hmm I shall check that, thanks!
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MakePovertyHistory [2005-03-24 06:59:42 +0000 UTC]
thats so amazing, so much feeling, u have a great talant, try not to loose it, because it will progress even more
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CloveSmokeCatharis [2005-03-23 21:46:34 +0000 UTC]
I like the 'staring at the mirror... ' part, well done
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xpythonx In reply to A-N-O-N [2005-03-23 21:10:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, and I hope your arms ok
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