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Eridan x Reader - "Cast Away" Part 1So yeah, hehe...
my very first xReader Fanfiction - for the first time for me, in ENGLISH
Yush, english is not my first language. German is.
I still hope it's good ^^ I wanted to write a EridanxReader for a while jow, and finally there is!
The first part :3
I hope you enjoy!
- [h/c] = hair color
[e/c] O eye color
_____ _____ = your first and last name
Your head was hurting badly when you put yourself in a sitting position. As you opened your [e/c] eyes, a lightning of pain caused you to moan. But then you realized where you were.
The white sand under your body was warm and soft, the sea in front of you seemed to be warm too, but a memory in your mind told you that it was ice cold. Well, it was yesterday. ... Or was it today? Three days ago? You had no idea. All you know that it was stormy at this unlucky day, and now you can barely see any cloud on the blue sky.
The sun was burning your skin
The waves were making a permament loud noise.
The trees behind you seemed to whisper.
Slowly, you stood up and look around. You were on an island, and you guessed it wasn't that big. In some distance you were able to see the wreck of your little boat. Oh, how dumb you were... going out on a boat tour when the wind was so strong. First you were happy that your boat was going so fast, but when the waves started to kick it around like a ball, you wished to be home...
Just like you do now.
You shooked your head. There was no time for panicing now! So you stopped yourself even before you started to freak out. You know you were agrounded, but there was still hope. You took a deep breath, smelling the salty and fresh water. Then you turned around to explore the island or country you landed on.
After a while you cam back to the place you woke up. This island truly was small. Frustrated, you sat down. You didn't see any signs of civilization here. Just some abandoned ship wrecks and what seemed like old paths. You sighed and stared to the sea.
That's when you first saw him.
First you thought it would be a rock covered with dark moss. But when you took a closer look, you could see some violet dabs. After staring for a while you recognize it has to be a guy! Happy to finally see someone after searching you stood up and waved, wanting to scream "HEY!" - but before you could so, the head disappeared. Slowly, you lowered your arm and sighed. Maybe you were hallucinating and it was just some kind of sea gull.
After sitting there again, waiting for nothing, you decided to make the best out of it. Of course, being on a goddamn lonely unknown island in the middle of the ocean may be not a 5 star hotel with pool and drinks, but it was still a warm and nice weather here. The palms where pretty nice, and you saw a lot of tropical fruits in the little jungle behind you. You could do a little shelter with the bamboo around here, and with the wood and grass you could do a huge campfire that could be seen by ships or plains. You nodded to yourself, starting to fulfill your plans.
You worked hard for the first hour, but then you sank down on your knees. You didn't have anything, not even a knife, not even a water bottle. You were so thirsty and already exhausted! You rolled yourself to your back and stared up to the sky, which was getting darker and darker. Soon it would be night, and you were sure it was going to be cold. You sat up again and embed your hands at your [h/c] hair, not knowing what to do next.
As you looked up to the near ocean you saw it again. The black hair with purple strands at the front. The odd yellow things sticking out of this wet looking hair. You recognize it was a troll, this alien species that opened some kind of worm hole in the near of your planet. This was years ago, and now humans and trolls were able to travel between Earth and Alternia. This one must be a seadweller, you guessed. One that keeps staring at you. But this time you didn't stand up, even if the boy was closer this time. He was looking over the water, the nose was over the surface, the mouth still under water. The eyes that seemed to be a bright orange were sticking at you, and he didn't move at all. Not a wonder that you thought his head was a rock.
After some while you slowly stood up and sighed. No matter who this stupid boy is, it seemed like he won't attack you or help you. You get the bamboo that you have found and tried to put them in the form of a campfire. After you made a good looking one, you made yourself some tools. You saw some Survival Shows on tv... it can't be that hard... But after an hour - it was already deep dark - you gave up. Your right hand was bleeding, and the tools were nearly broken. You rested your chin on your knees and stared out to a marvelous and really cold night. The stars were shining. You were able to see the black haired guy, still in the water.At least he wasn't just staring at you anymore, but seemed to swam around a bit and scanning the island.
>What is he looking for?< you asked yourself. >After all, he can swim away and isn't stuck here...<. You're watching him for a while before you fell asleep, having slight nightmares of storms and cracking ships...
When you woke up again it was still night. But suddenly, it was warm, comfy and not so dark. As you looked next to you your eyes widened. The campfire was burning brightly, warming yourself up, and there was a delicious looking fish on a stick over it. Without thinking, you stood up and took the fish. But before you could take a bite out of it you heard a voice.
"thats mine.", it said. "yours is not finished yet!"
You looked up just to see the face of the creepy troll. You jumped and squeaked in surprise, and the cooked fish were flying to the ground, making it uneatable because of the sand.
"wwhale thank you", the now angry looking troll said. You took a deep breath and looked to him again.
"Umm... s-sorry...", you whispered.
His orange eyes were narrowed to slits what gives him a wild look, even by the fact he wore huge nerdy glasses. His hair was still wet, but the violet strands were bright, just as bright as his violet cape he wore. Around his neck was a scarf in blue colors, and as he stabbed another dead fish on a stick you saw many golden rings, that quietly jingled. "Y-you can eat mine...", you offered after he put the only leftfish on a stick.
"no. your fuckin loud stomach wwas been heard through the wwhole sea!", he grumbled, staring into the fire.
If you wouldn't be so shocked about the whole situation, you would have been amused by his rheumy accent. "noww wwould you sit dowwn? you are makin me nervvous wwith your fishget!" You tilted your head. Fishget? ... Oh, fidget! You sat down immediately. "finally someone that followws my commands.", he commented your action.
"Umm... sorry, but...", you began, ignoring his last sentence, because you had no idea what that meant. "But... who are you?"
"wwho are YOU?", he answered your question with a question. Normally this drives you crazy, but you were still to confused.
"My name is ______ ______ ... guess I am agrounded here...", you said quietly and looked into the fire. "I was out on the sea with my sailboat... it wasn't a good idea..."
"there wwas a storm 3 days ago.", the troll said. "a glubbin strong one. i havvent seen such a storm in swweeps, not evven on alternia. and storms are fuckin stronger there than here."
"I see... so Umm... who are you?"
"... names Eridan. Eridan Ampora."
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Comments: 35
GollyItsSpace [2017-05-31 01:13:32 +0000 UTC]
This is so cute! If you need someone to proofread let me know
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RavenluvsSesshomaru [2015-01-03 02:31:34 +0000 UTC]
Well written for your first try. I'd be better to explain the typos and grammar mistakes when I'm not commenting from a mobile device.
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xXAcantheaXx In reply to RavenluvsSesshomaru [2015-01-03 13:36:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
I would be glad if you would do that
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RavenluvsSesshomaru In reply to xXAcantheaXx [2015-01-05 03:57:52 +0000 UTC]
First by your second and third part it started to get a little more sloppy. I don't know if that was because you were really into typing it or got lazy. :3 We all go there though.
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xXAcantheaXx In reply to RavenluvsSesshomaru [2015-01-05 21:38:14 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you! I must say, writing is not my best skill
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RavenluvsSesshomaru In reply to xXAcantheaXx [2015-01-06 09:46:48 +0000 UTC]
It takes practice. My stuff from 2009 is my woest on here :33
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RavenluvsSesshomaru In reply to xXAcantheaXx [2015-01-06 21:56:17 +0000 UTC]
Yeah and I typo too I messed up the word worst xD
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xXAcantheaXx In reply to RavenluvsSesshomaru [2015-01-06 22:45:36 +0000 UTC]
Hey that's no problem I know what you mean!
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xXAcantheaXx In reply to homestuckinhaven [2014-02-04 05:52:23 +0000 UTC]
YAAAY! Long long captured deep inside of you, now BREAKING OUT like a bomb!
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Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir [2013-05-18 20:13:36 +0000 UTC]
The stranded thing doesn't bother me, the thing that does is that I am on a BEACH. I need to figure out how to get used to these...
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xXAcantheaXx In reply to Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir [2013-05-18 20:17:38 +0000 UTC]
So beach is wrong?
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Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir In reply to xXAcantheaXx [2013-05-19 17:45:31 +0000 UTC]
No, you got it right. Waves and everything. SAND EVERYWHERE
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xXAcantheaXx In reply to Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir [2013-05-19 18:33:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, exactly that's what I wanted? I guess? I mean, an island and stuff... has beaches... ?
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Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir In reply to xXAcantheaXx [2013-05-21 00:37:52 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Beaches have lots of sand... IT GETS EVERYWHERE
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Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir In reply to xXAcantheaXx [2013-05-22 00:14:48 +0000 UTC]
You wash it off, BUT THERE'S STILL SAAAAND
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xXAcantheaXx In reply to Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir [2013-05-22 09:43:26 +0000 UTC]
EVERYWHERE
IN YOUR SHOES
IN YOUR PANTS
IN YOUR FUCKING HAIR xD
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Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir In reply to xXAcantheaXx [2013-05-22 21:06:58 +0000 UTC]
IN YOUR MOUTH
IN YOUR CAR
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Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir In reply to xXAcantheaXx [2013-05-24 21:29:18 +0000 UTC]
IN YO' GARBAGE
IN YOUR BACKPACK
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xXAcantheaXx In reply to Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir [2013-05-24 21:30:10 +0000 UTC]
IN YOUR CAT'S FUR
IN YOUR DOG'S FUR
BETWEEN YOUR TOES GAAAAAAAAAH
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Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir In reply to xXAcantheaXx [2013-05-25 14:53:19 +0000 UTC]
IN YO' SHOWER
IN YOUR POOL
IN YOUR THREAD
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xXAcantheaXx In reply to Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir [2013-05-26 10:19:47 +0000 UTC]
EVERYWHEEEEEEEEEEEERE
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xXAcantheaXx In reply to Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir [2013-05-26 18:06:44 +0000 UTC]
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Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir In reply to xXAcantheaXx [2013-05-30 23:27:44 +0000 UTC]
AND IN YOUR CABINETS
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