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Published: 2017-10-08 03:35:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 320; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 0
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hOW TO PAINT FIRE I'M SO CONFUSED-- but I'm happy I tried at least-- it gave me some coolio experience :'DDHER BURNS MAKES ME TINGLY ALL OVER I ACTUALLY DREW SOMETHING I MYSELF AM DISGUSTED AT LOL WHAT AN ACCOMPLISHMENT
This is one of my most favourite OCs of all time, Takaki Junko!! <3
She's one of the many minor characters for my main story who has their own short story!!
So it's not a spoiler for me to write all of this down ehehe-- I'd do a comic of this if I ever finished the main ones :'D
She transferred from her old school to the MC's school.
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Comments: 38
HOW CAN YOU CREATE SUCH GUD ART LIKE EVERYDAY WHILE STILL MAINTAINING THE QUALITY AND AESTHETICS OF IT??!
WHAT'S THE FUEL YOU CONSUME THAT KEEPS YOU GOING WITHOUT BURNING OUT??
ARE YOU EVEN HUMAN OR SOME MAGICAL BEING THAT DOESN'T RUN OUT OF MAGIC OR PASSION XD
WHAT'S THE SECRET BEHIND THE FORMULA OF BEING CREATIVE???
↑ Caps lock broken (I literally had to mash the button for like 5 min, before I could start typing normally XD)
So...*ahem* I really like the eerie touch of giving your OC a little backstory which gives out a little feel that
your OC is someone being a someone, and not just something you had created.
I was reading it till the end and I was like, "Wow, it has been a while since I had read a good OC story!"
Really made my day and you did a great job of creating it!
Um... if you don't mind, I found some grammatical errors along the way
You don't really have to change it though, (also sorry for being the grammatically correct lecturer here Xd )
→ 4th paragraph
"She's break him daily" - Think you meant she breaks him daily
→ 6th (last) paragraph
"couldn't bare seeing Shigeru" - I think it's "bear"
"Junko's rude attitde" - "Attitude"
"she beats up anyone who dare lay" - "dares lay"
Grammar's not really important here though, but still watch out for errors XP lol
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I'M TRYING SO HARD, I'M ABUSING MY WRISTS XD
It's all experimental with stuff I never tried before so it means a lot to be that you think so!
Yea, having empty shell OCs aren't really my thing...I try my best to give them purpose...
but ooh! Thanks a bunch for the grammar correction point-outs!
I write things on the go so I can imagine the massive typos and left out letters I must've made while writing this xD
Fixed them!
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....WHOAAAAA~
YOUR STORIES ARE ALWAYS THE BEST YUU!!!
I LOVE SHIGERU AND JUNKO'S BACKSTORY!!!!
AHHHH THE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT THOUGH GIVES ME THE FEELS!!
HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT CHARACTER ANALYSIS??!! O.O
AWWWW WAIT SO INSTEAD OF A TWISTED ONE SIDED LOVE IS IT...MUTUAL?
OR IS IT JUST FRIENDSHIP NOW??
OOH~
THAT ASIDE JUNKO LOOKS SOO KEWLL!!!
HOW IS THE COLORS SO BRIGHT AND MELTING AT THE SAME TIME???!!!! X'D
I'M MELLLTTIIINNGGGG!!!!
AHA THAT NAME THOUGH PURE CHILD??
WAS THAT INTENTIONAL??!! O.O
EREMGOD IS THAT THE GUY THAT TOLD YOU TO FIX YOUR STORY??!!!
DUDE HE'S JUST JELLY AT YOUR...(TRYING TO MAKE IT RHYME HERE...)
SKILL-SEYS??
UNLEASH THE SALTY SQUIDD!!!!
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OMG THANK YOUU
IT STARTED OF AS SHIGERU STICKING WITH JUNKO CUZ HE KNOWS SHE'S TOO WEAK TO STAND ON HER OWN DESPITE ACTING TOUGH AND MEAN, WHICH HE FELT LIKE THAT WAS THE FEELING OF 'LOVE'
AND THEN SLOWLY, JUNKO SOFTEN UPS TO HIM AND DURING THE EXPLOSION INCIDENT, SHE DECIDED SHE WAS GOING TO PROTECT HIM AT ALL COSTS
I GUESS IT'S MUTUAL, BUT IT'S NOT THE MUSHY LOVEY DOVEY TYPE XD
THE CHILD WENT FOR PURIFICATION AHAHAAAA
PARTIALLY INTENTIONAL, PARTIALLY COINCIDENCE XD
NAH, THIS IS ANOTHER PERSON///
SALTY SQUID WILL SPRINKLE HER JAR OF SALT ALL OVER HAHAAA
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O.O
THAT'S SO KEWL!!!
AHHHHH I LOVE YOUR STORY FOR THE SIDE CHARACTERS!!!
PUTS THE REAL E IN EFFORT!!! X3
AHH I SEE!!!~
AWW YOU SHOULD JUST STRAIGHT UP TELL HIM INSTEAD OF BLOCKING HIM (DO THAT TOO) JUST SAY:
DUDE STOP COPYING MY ART POSES AND CONCEPTS, DON'T BE AN ART THEFT, THAT'S NOT KEWLIO!!
STRAIGHT TO THE POINT!!!
AND THEN GET SALTY AND START THROWING SALT WITH SALTY SQUID'S INFINITE JAR OF SALT!!! X'D
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YEA HE'S THE TYPE TO DENY SO I'LL JUST MAKE HIM NOT SEE THINGS INSTEAD XD
THANK YOU THOO!!
THE SALT I POSSESS IS THE ENTIRE SEA ITSELF! XD
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AHHHH I SEE~
AWW NO PROB!!
WOAAA I'D LIKE SOME OF THAT JAR NOW!! X'D
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THE ULTIMATE BURNING TSUNDERE >:^D
omfg I know the feel, I was super fuckin confused like wtf if I add red it looks like crap but isnt fire supposed to be red--
DANG UGH BURNS! THEY ALSO DISGUST ME xD GREAT JOB WITH THE FACE AND THE FIRE THO!!
AND BLUURRR OMG IT'S A SUPER NICE TOUCH ;0;
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THIS.GIRL.IS ON FIREEEE //shot
Ikr-- all i see is digital tutorials n they put darker colours first before the brighter ones which i follow
then i realise i'm painting traditional and i'm supposed to do it backwards hhgfnghd
IKR THE BURNS I WAS LIKE EW-- AMAZING XD
Thank youuu <333
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YESSSSS OMG I DID THAT WITH MINE, LIKE I FORGOT TO GO FROM LIGHT TO DARK BCUS I HAD DIGITAL STUFF AS REFERENCE SO NOW MY FIRE LOOKS MESSY CUZ I ADDED BLACK FIRST IN SOME PARTS XD
I honestly dont know why Im screaming--
hnghngh yes it disgustingly amazing babb ;0; it's all boiling and angry red ugghff
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I think the only reason it's gfdgdghfg for me is cuz of the spots-- them spotty holes are scary-- //shudders
wHY ARE DIGITAL TUTORIALS THE OTHER WAY AROUND-- IT MANIPULATES ME TOO MCUH
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Ripping your art off? :^) rip him off so that you can paint with his blood. That'll make for the greatest Goretober in history.
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Omg X'D
That'll be amazing tho-- imagine a character ripping ppl apart just to draw //shot
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Oh dang, someone has been taking your work?
Yeeeck... Hate that... Had that happen to me once... I feel you.
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Also, YAH! Fire is tough... Maybe just google image real fire and try to replicate it as best you can...? Or perhaps you could find your own, unique way to imply fire in your drawings.
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Omg you too? Was it resolved? That sucks man D:
A unique was of implying fire would be hella cool-- I'll try more fire stuff one day n see what it'll evolve into *pokemon mode activate*
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Yah, the dude's stolen art got taken down. ^_^ So, that's nice.
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And lol, the whole, "evolve" joke is a bit of an accurate description for how some artists get better. X3
Ever had that moment when you're drawing something, and something just clicks and you suddenly get a little better? It comes with practice, but one day you'll just ascend, like, "Man... Time to try to draw hands again... I'm really not good at them- Oh wait, I can draw hands now."
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Yea! One day, the sudden change in your drawing will be noticed and you'd just sit there like, oh...wOA WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN XD
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)8CCcC Okay, that's quite unfourtunate that he is stealing and claiming it as his own, I mean, at least give credit to the original idea.
On a more positive note, THAT FLIPPN HAIR IS BOOTIFUL HOLY I love hairstyles like that <333333
The blurr on certain bits is also very great, it gives a more dynamic feel.
Gosh I want to read this now~
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My baseball character got ripped off hhgfdngdh i am anger--
but i blocked him from the sites he knows me on so I think the problem should be settled by now ahahaa
OMG THANK YOUUU
It's pretty halfassed the way she ties her hair...she just braids it and then clips it upwards on one side of her head xD
fahfshsf i will love u forever for reading...I got overboard n wrote everything down except one important piece I'm keeping from spoils xD
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hrrrrg sucks to hear that --- I hope it gets settled soon.
When I had long hair I just kinda tied it into a loop halfheartedly as well, braiding to me is for fancy occasions (￣▽￣). It's actually super convenient and sometimes stylish with the right clothes (・ω・).
It would be a honour HaHA
Im intrigued nowhfjdgjgfjgc I am looking forward to it if you ever publish the story ♪───Ｏ（≧∇≦）Ｏ────♪ !!
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Same!! Mines about below shoulder-length and it's tied into a messy loop-- idk how to do those perfect buns so I just leave it like that xD
aaa thank you-- I just need to get myself to draw the comic next year xDD
I dont feel like starting it this year cuz i wanna clean stuff up n think carefully, or short comics will turn out longer than planned xD
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I'm actually pretty good with styling hair---- Other people's hair that is. Girls would always ask me to do their hair at school when I was like in 3rd grade. I could never do perfect buns on my own hair because I can never see how it looks like XD
My manga was supposed to be a short 40 paged series, but then I kept expanding on it hnnng
Now that I look back at it now, how did my series go from a spited young girl sold by her father to the black market and escaped with a friend she met to a super edgy story thqt I wont spil here ???? It's actually a happy ending in that one because I had to keep it G LOL
In the current version it's alot darker and edgy. Still a romcom tho.
Oh wow the past paragraph was all ME ME ME XDDD
I've actually got some loopholes to plan through carefully too, like I've just recently figured out a reason why the father would want Allen to watch over her XD
Oh god this reply is long xD
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It's ok I like reading replies xD
Idk how to style hair, mostly cuz I dont like touching other people xD
I'm not much of a physical contact type of person... I actually cry a lot when someone gets too touchy and holds my shoulder or smth LOL... I'm also somewhat like Shintaro, but instead of him who's scared of going out and feeling all angry and snappy, I'd be crying silently hoping to go somewhere like, inside a small building or smth with walls and a roof-- idk I cant take the open wide world-- I might as well be a hikikomori
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I haven't done it in a long time since I cut my hair tho... Don't regret it at all xD
Im probably a worse case scenario hikikomori as well, I hardly go out if its not school and I rarely excersise so my stamina is always low ;; Hnng the sad consequences of being a shut in XD
I feel you m8
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More of copying than ripping off the original piece... my baseball player oc got copied along with this girl's pose from a friend who saw pictures of wips i posted while drawing this one
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That sucks. I would distance yourself from any so called "friends" that would try to copy your work. Too many things try to rip off artists now a days, your buddies shouldn't be one of them.
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I plan on confronting him if the issue continues... but until then, I'll just prevent him from seeing my art so he can look somewhere else for 'inspiration'. Yea, of all people, friends shouldn't be doing this...
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Does he not know about your DA account?
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He knows but he doesnt have one, and I doubt he can navigate through this site without my help since he doesn't understand english...and doesnt like to read in general
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ah ok. Make sense. You can't really "search" deviantart very well anyway lol
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