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zephuko — I'm not a Disappointment
Published: 2016-10-16 23:13:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1140; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 8
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this was the picture I definitely struggled most with XD the colours wouldn't work and the back-mid-foreground composition was a mess lmaoo I'm so glad I got it done FINALLY
Story:
Moryan felt the most prepared he ever could have for this competition. Bam Oida seemed equally eager to just bolt off and fly over all the obstacles on the way. It got harder and harder to control him after a while, but at least he could make sure he was warmed up enough. Until. He slowly felt the pressure he had been keeping away all morning so well coming back at him. Damnit.
Then it finally was their turn and one wouldn't have to tell Bam Oida twice when to start and he just went for it, wanting to prove his dear two-leeged what he had learnt and how much stronger he had gotten. Thanks to all the training Moryan managed to hold him back whenever necessary quite well, finding the right pacing before each jump more easily. He couldn't believe how well they could actually work -together-! It was such a difference to when he tried to control him in the Dune Race, or in earlier training sessions at home. He had to admit. Maaaybe Riley had been right, telling them they weren't ready. The more it encouraged him now that he sent him on this competition with Bam Oida. He wanted to show him how right he was. He wanted him to not regret his decision of giving them another chance. He wanted him to -admit- they were a great team. Because in this moment, Moryan simply knew they were.
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Event: M.O.S. 2016 hosted by Mendokusee & abosz007
Stables: WindChimeStud
Country: Austria
Class: Cross Country
Starting Number: 218
Rider: Moryan Tenderfoot
Horse: Bam Oida
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Comments: 25
thaanks 
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aw thaanks x3 I missed drawing autumn scenes! xD
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Beautiful and so soft! I really like the contrast between the fresh blue of the sky and the rusty red tree.
I wouldn't dare criticize... But I miss some depth in here :c I can see why you had trouble with the background, though, I'm not blaming you ^^
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aww thank you! x3
no, please, I need (constructive) critisism! xD aw reallyy, I was hoping to add some depth with the perspective but yeah it all ended up a little bit too closed off I fear, on the original sketch there was also the continue of the path visible on the side, but it got pretty hidden T.T thank you anyway though, I'm glad you mentioned that!
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No problem ^^
Glad to hear :') Depth is pretty hard to do in this point of view, indeed! I'm sure you'll do better next time!
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yeah I guess, should have sticked more to the original sketch xD I'm hoping to x3 thanks again!
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AU ist das nice °U° so eine tolle Bewegung X_X und soooo nice Texturen und alles!!!
ich seh, was du mit den Farben meinst - da fiel mir grade ein, so als kleinen Tipp, wenn das okay ist .. Vermutlich sind es die Farbkontraste, die so, wie sie angeordnet sind, den Eindruck ergeben, dass die Farben nicht stimmig sind. So einen Farbkontrast kann man super anlegen, wenn man klar vorgibt, wo sich welche Farbe hauptsächlich zu befinden hat - also, das Bild hochkant aufbauen (funktioniert auch durch die Pose) und dann praktisch Himmel und Weg mittig senkrecht zu einer blauen Achse verbinden und rechts und links klar das Rot zu setzen. Die orangenen Übergänge und so hast du ja mega gut hingekriegt, die würden da auch dann alles verbinden. Und ich hab oben "hauptsächlich" gesagt, weil du das ja mit details der jeweils anderen Farbe aufbrechen kannst, das rötliche Pferd im bläulichen Teil des hHintergrunds zum Beispiel.
Das war jetzt nur so ein Gedankengang, vielleicht ist es ja für die Zukunft mal hilfreich c: Ich liebe es, wie du mit Farben spielst, und da ist eine ausgeklügelte Komposition manchmal mega hilfreich ♥
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STIMMT. DAS WARS. hochkant wär viel besser gewesen ahh daran hab ich gar nicht gedacht XDD und ja, das mit den farben war leider generell so ne blöde geschichte, weil es ja erst herbstanfang war und ich dann noch iwie dinge grün machen musste aber irgendwie hat das alles zerstört? xD ursprünglich hätte es so von oben nach unten nen blau-rot verlauf machen sollen, aber das ging dann iwie in die hose weil ich mich um ne correct season bemühen wollte NAJA nächstes mal, aber vielen dank für die ganzen tipps! werd definitiv in zukunft dran denken <3 *bows to master Sky* XD danke
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Aeee stimmt klingt klompiziert 
mmmm immer diese correctness xD aber aye freut mich dass es dir hilft!
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heh ja leider XD aber total
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*goes and cries in a dark corner*
MEIN GOTT
teach me master ;__; <3
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aaww XD nicht weeeinnen nuuhh <3
HMmmm vllt kann ich ja bald wieder was streamen
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oh fuck!
this is the warmest, non-fiery drawing I've ever seen! It looks so amazing!!! I loooove the colors! And I loooove Fall <33
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aww reallyyy? thank you, this means a lot
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naawww, that's so cute
I'm glad my words mean so much
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I WILL NEVER LEARN HOW TO PROPERLY CREATE A GOOD BACKGROUND!!! 
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nooo you wiiiill, don't think so negatively! XD your backgrounds are good too!!
thank you so much tho
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Hahaha thank you ... patience is something that makes us crazy
You are very welcome!
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