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Description Another one of my Christmas presents! This is for *CasablancaStudios , for her horse Belle'Ami [link] and her rider Kaleigh Summers.

STORY TIME! It's told from Aubrie's point of view. (yes, all lesson pics will either have a story, or you can RP with me for the story.)
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All was quiet in the winter chill of the stable. I sat on a stack of hay bales in between two stall doors, listening carefully to the mares munching their hay and the rustling sound of the cats scuffling in the feed room. I loved winter at the stable, especially in the morning, before I had to ride anyone. I usually got there early to feed on weekends, and I cherished those Saturday mornings with the scent of hay in my hair and the hot breath of the horses on my neck.

I brushed a strand of curly red hair out of my face, sighing. There was close to no one at the barn yet, except for Josh and Dani. They liked to get there early as well, so they could work the horses they needed to work and then relax in the lounge. Dani especially, since she usually had a couple lessons scattered throughout the day. Today, it was a little girl down the road coming for her first ride on Candy, a teenager who hated horses but whose mom made him ride, and Kaleigh Summers, a good friend of Dani's from Castle Cove Stables. She had been offered a free lesson slot for the Christmas season, and she was bringing one of the mares later on for a dressage lesson. She wasn't expected for another twenty minutes, however, so I had some time before I had to do anything.

As I reclined back against Rita's stall, relaxing, I heard the barn door crash open. Josh was probably done working Rayne, and from the sound of it, he was not happy. I giggled to myself quietly, and stood up to take Rayne and cross-tie her. Josh didn't need any more frustration, it appeared, and I needed something to do.

"I take it she was a brat, huh?" I asked, laughing. Josh rolled his eyes.

"She can't break from the gate at all, she refuses to switch her leads, she feels like she's falling over in front, AND she bucked me off! TWICE!" he thundered, disappearing into the tack room to hang up his helmet and goggles.

I laughed again. "Josh, relax, she's only just starting training. I've seen her run. She's fast, just reluctant. Why don't you let Lu take her next time? You're going to give yourself an aneurism over this horse!" I looked at Rayne, grinning, and slid her bridle off. The look on her face was hilarious, as if she had some trick up her sleeve. I haltered her and clipped the cross ties to the halter. "Maybe you two just aren't a good match."

Josh chuckled, sarcastically. He peeked his head out of the tack room doorway, a very unamused look on his face. Before he could say anything else, the sound of snow crunching under car tires rang across the parking lot. I decided to leave Josh to untack the mare, and dashed out to the parking lot to meet Kaleigh and help her with her horse. Within minutes, we had Kaleigh's mare, Ami, out of the trailer and in the barn, ready to be tacked up.

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Half an hour later, I stood in the Showplex, leaning on the whitewashed boards bordering the arena and watching Kaleigh's lesson. I figured I might be able to pick up a thing or two about her riding. Ami was a beautiful mover, even though she was a little feisty. Kaleigh handled her well, and had an amazing sense of what the animal beneath her was doing. As she cantered past me, I tuned in to what Dani was telling her. "She looks good and collected, but she's a bit stiff around your corners. Let's bring her down into a trot and ask her to do a nice big circle at E." Kaleigh did what she said, and immediately the mare cocked her ear back and yielded her shoulder. She may be a fresh mare, but she was very smart, and talented as well. Pebble Creek had found out that they were to be a receiving a half-sibling of Ami in the spring foaling season, and now that I had seen her in action I was even more excited than before.

At the end of the lesson, I walked back to take a seat on the bleachers. It was warmer in the heated arena, and I didn't want to go to the lounge and have to deal with Josh, so I sat back against the cold metal and started to braid my nearly waist-length red hair. Kaleigh dismounted Ami across the arena, and after Dani left the arena to greet her next student, she led Ami over to me. I looked up from my phone, smiling at her. I had always liked Kaleigh. She attended most of the hunter shows we did, and she would come to our trailer to chat with Dani and Melinda, so she knew who I was and we had talked a few times.

"I saw you watching my lesson. What do you think?" she asked, smiling. She ran her fingers through her long, straight brown hair to loosen the knots that had formed during her ride. I thought that a little weird, Kaleigh didn't really straighten her hair a lot as far as I knew.

"She's gorgeous! It's so fitting that Athan Ambar is her grandsire, she reminds me of him." I returned. She smiled at me again. I liked Kaleigh for that; she always had a smile on her face.

"So do I, you can definitely tell who she's related to. You excited for her little sister or brother?"

"Of course! Why wouldn't I be? I can hardly wait another day!" I giggled. She reached over and squeezed my shoulder.

"Well, it was good seeing you, Aubrie. Tell Melinda I said hi."

I smiled back at her. 'Thanks, I will. Take care!"
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Comments: 34

walktrotcanter7 [2011-12-10 22:36:06 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Oh Zeph! WOW! Okay, okay. I'm gonna save my gushing for the comments, but I'm gonna be quite professional here. ^^

Vision: Very, very good. Just from looking at this picture you can tell that it is a lesson and that Dani is instructing. When I look at this, I can almost hear Dani saying, "Open your hips up and sit deep." The colors work well together although I feel that a lighter color for the footing would have been better to bring out the horse's color and illuminate the shading. Great detail and accuracy in the tack and gear. Horse and human anatomy is fabulous!

Originality: Well, how often do you see lesson pictures in the HAprg? lol This is quite original, but also the way you set everyone up is just fabulous. I love how well they are placed, and the perspective is wonderful!

Technique: Absolutely wonderful and seamless. I love the shading method, very soft and smooth. The why you did the tail of the horse is just breathtaking. I absolutely love it! The shading on the humans' breeches is just enough, but not too much. Wonderfully, unique lighting!

Impact: Overall, I really love this piece. The anatomy is great. The perspective is unique. The shading is wonderful. And the lighting is awesome. The massage is portrayed very clearly and very realistically. Wonderful job! This is fabulous!

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Zephyrra In reply to walktrotcanter7 [2011-12-10 22:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you SOO much! This absolutely made my day!

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walktrotcanter7 In reply to Zephyrra [2011-12-11 00:01:04 +0000 UTC]

^^ You're welcome!

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jockeyy [2011-12-11 21:39:06 +0000 UTC]

OH MAH GGGGOOOSSSSHHH


AAAMMMAAZZING

LOVELOVELOVLELOVELVPEIROGPSADIKGFDOPSGJKDFSL:G

LOVE.

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Zephyrra In reply to jockeyy [2011-12-11 21:39:38 +0000 UTC]

SHANK YOU CHILD

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jockeyy In reply to Zephyrra [2011-12-11 21:42:13 +0000 UTC]

YOUR VELCOME!!

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naomithewolf [2011-12-11 17:28:02 +0000 UTC]

wowowowowow!!! this is like completely amazing!!

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Zephyrra In reply to naomithewolf [2011-12-11 19:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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naomithewolf In reply to Zephyrra [2011-12-11 21:08:19 +0000 UTC]

np!

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StartItWithASmile [2011-12-11 12:56:06 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! I love the story too, it's really good! The picture is brilliant, it looks so realistic c:

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Zephyrra In reply to StartItWithASmile [2011-12-11 15:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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StartItWithASmile In reply to Zephyrra [2011-12-11 15:50:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Mockingbirdblues [2011-12-11 03:53:42 +0000 UTC]

This is so spiffy!! I didn't know the lessons came with story options! I would love to rp for mine if you like :3

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Zephyrra In reply to Mockingbirdblues [2011-12-11 03:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! You got it! Let me know when you're ready, I can do it whenever.

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Mockingbirdblues In reply to Zephyrra [2011-12-11 17:13:36 +0000 UTC]

I'llll note you

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Zephyrra In reply to Mockingbirdblues [2011-12-11 19:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Alrighty!

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Breeze-Rain [2011-12-11 03:39:30 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!!

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Zephyrra In reply to Breeze-Rain [2011-12-11 03:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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NativeHorseStables [2011-12-11 02:29:33 +0000 UTC]

This is SO pretty!!!! And i LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the story! You're an amazing writer! I was sad when it was over

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Zephyrra In reply to NativeHorseStables [2011-12-11 02:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you think so, that story took me, like... a full hour. They NEVER take me that long!

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NativeHorseStables In reply to Zephyrra [2011-12-11 02:46:57 +0000 UTC]

it was sure as heck worth it!

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Zephyrra In reply to NativeHorseStables [2011-12-11 02:51:36 +0000 UTC]

YAYYY! I'm glad you think so!

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horselilly [2011-12-11 00:56:43 +0000 UTC]

this is epic!

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Zephyrra In reply to horselilly [2011-12-11 00:58:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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horselilly In reply to Zephyrra [2011-12-11 01:52:27 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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walktrotcanter7 [2011-12-10 22:38:46 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE DANI! I LOVE DANI! I LOVE DANI! I can hear my old trainer standing just like that and saying, "Open your hips up and sit deep." It just looks AMAZING!!!!

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Zephyrra In reply to walktrotcanter7 [2011-12-10 22:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Awhh! Thanks! She's my fave out of the three trainers too, hahaa!

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crazykate1 [2011-12-10 22:22:47 +0000 UTC]

this is BEAUTIFUL!

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Zephyrra In reply to crazykate1 [2011-12-10 22:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Animal-Angels [2011-12-10 22:21:46 +0000 UTC]

This is SO pretty! I'm loving your new shading style!
Can't wait for my training pic!
And I finished your gift. But I'm not posting until christmas eve *evil laugh*

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Zephyrra In reply to Animal-Angels [2011-12-10 22:23:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm really starting to love it too.

YOU EVIL MONSTER

LOL. Just kidding.

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Animal-Angels In reply to Zephyrra [2011-12-10 22:26:16 +0000 UTC]

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gabcocoa [2011-12-10 22:18:37 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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Zephyrra In reply to gabcocoa [2011-12-10 22:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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