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Zeragii β WAR CRIMES: Character and Height Sheet (WIP)
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Published: 2018-12-27 22:27:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 10347; Favourites: 238; Downloads: 12
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Hi! So, I said that I've been working on War Crimes, and I meant it!
Not only the story, but various illustrations and such to go along with it. This sheet is nowhere finished (there are still a number of characters I wish to add to it), but I was too darned excited to keep it secret any longer. ^^ So, yup! Here it is. Story itself still in progress, but making a lot of headway.
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HHHHHHHHHHH HOLD UPMN CGAEARARA ISNT EVUIL
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hey Zeragii can i ask you about something with this picture are you mary nerton in that picture for it kinda look at you on your profil picture and it would also be fun if you have decide that you want to be a part on your new story for it would be fun to se but i am only thinking here if you want to answer on that and i like your new comic that you have made about the one that is name judge and jury i like so far and sans nightmare was great to se but i dont have anything else to say now so have an great day buddy okay
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Oml wheeze is Asgore wearing a Camp Camp shirt?
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...Zera, are you aware that you've made your entire (rather large) human cast 100% Caucasian? The darkest skin here is on Hornberne, and he's your villain... At least, I think he is? Dude is sketchy. But... Don't get me started on old Hollywood cliches.
Alphys looks really good, nice job on the lizard beak, she doesn't look like a duck.
I think I like your other art style better over all, Zera. Realistically proportioned human faces just feel weird next to all the monsters with cartoony faces. The effect is very... Space Jam? That old movie where Michael Jordan gets pulled into Looney Toons and has to teach them all how to play basketball? It was a novelty back in the day, but now it's kinda... Eh.
In the game, Alphys is taller than Sans. Since Chara hasn't aged, she should be shorter than Sans, like Frisk and Chara are in the game, eh?
Frisk looks weirdly smarmy. She's wearing this look on her face like she set a trap and she's waiting for someone to trigger the prank so she can laugh at them. Actually, Sans and Frisk both look very out of place with the rest of the "monster" cast. I'm not sure why. Maybe it's Frisk's "normal" human face, and the fact that Sans can get away with eyes that big in a normal human art style because skeleton? Actually he looks like he was shrunk. I mean, his lineart and everything is narrower and tinier than everyone else's.
I'm going to have a crack at writing something. No real plans except to try to put into use all the ideas I've gotten from other people's stories that their plot lines never wound up taking. I have no idea where the story is going to take me, but the premise is that the whole cast is adults from the get-go, and Chara's back. There's a good explanation for it, in fact, Chara is the central character. At least, for now. I'm sticking to third person like glue because it's looking like I'm going to have at least four perspective characters. I've had a lot of funny moments so far, and at the same time I'm having difficulty keeping myself from going full-scale exposition dump. I'm not posting anything until I'm sure where I'm going with at least the first few chapters, though. There might be shipping, there might not be, Chara might make the world implode. The characters will lead me where this story is going and that is that. 
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Caucasian is a meme at this point.
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...Do you even know what that word means? -_-
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Caucasian, it's a skin color.
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(to anyone who's reading this-) HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! I HOPE THE NEXT YEAR WILL BRING YOU LOTS OF LUCK AND HAPPINESS!! GREETINGS FROM THE CZECH REPUBLIC!
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Happy new year to you too!Β
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I like it that you drew Chara but.... she isn't quite as evil as she seems ^^'
I could explain if you want...
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*inhale* Okay. Now I'm wondering. When Sans lost control and attacked everyone at the Negotiations, (can't remember in which chapter), there was that Papyrus tried to stop Sans but found his brother unnaturally strong. Maybe it is just me, but looking at how Papyrus is tall and how Sans is small, it shouldn't be that hard. But I guess there is a lot more about it than that. (also sorry my bad English)
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SANS IS LIKE HALF EVERYONES HEIGHT!!!! WTF?!?!!?!
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Almost everyone here is saying how cute and adorable Sans is, but did you even notice Asgore? Oh god just look at him-
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OWOOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWWWWOOOO
I love their poses! Such natural stances-- SO LOVELY!!! (Such a nerdo lol)
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Oh god I don't think I can wait long enough without screaming!!! ^.^
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Oml sans so smol!!!! I always draw sans a little tall but I think I gotta change that cus that is just too cuuutttteeee. Cant wait to see MTT on here
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He's smol but not smoller than FriskΒ Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β XD
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Yeah I understand that, but I just make him a little too tall like.. up to papyrus' shoulder tall so yeah gotta make him slightly shorter, not extreme short but slight short.
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Just realized Undyne sorta has fins for hands.
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My gosh Sans is so tiny!! Also its great to see the other characters visualized! I look forward to seeing where it will go next! : D<
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Oh cool! It's really awesome to see what the characters look like; I love their designs and detail. I'll admit I'm saddened that Chara's apparently evil in this too, but you must have your reasons. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the story when it comes; I'm sure it'll be awesome and amazing, like you!
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Finally new fanfuel. I love ut but there haven't been any many great stories (except for glitchtale and deeper down) So I haven't had much to look forward too. Just keep up the great work. I fell in love with deeper down on the first couple strips. It has mad my weeks alot less depressing. Thanks so much
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This is random but undertale has warped my mind so much that I will never forget it. Every time I hear the word DETERMINATION I remember undertale...
I should probably stop reading (most) fanfictions...
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that professor is clearly a dick xD just look at that smug face and stance lol
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i think frisk looks more smug.
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... i had zoomed the picture and Chara at the end really scared me.
Β I wasnβt expecting that.
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the scare or chara?
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I saw a creepy Chara on a zoomed picture all of a sudden when I wasnβt expecting them/Chara nor the scare xD
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I'm incredibly curious about these two new doctor guys. They weren't in any of the chapters online. I MUST KNOW, ZERAGII!!!!
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Hmm... Either Papyrus is way too tall or Sans is way too short, but their height ratio is somehow off. Undyne is also a giant, I think you should make her and Papyrus a bit shorter though. Sans might be short, but definitely not below his brother's waistline, maybe mid-chest.
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agreed.This kinda makes some giants and some lilliputians.
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Β HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT DRAWING PEOPLE HHHHHHHHHHH Β Β
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hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyppppppppppppppppeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
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Asgore has a scronched head, but aside from that, looks good!
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