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Description Apparently I can't stop adding more characters to this. It's starting to get downright ridiculous.

Progress stuff: [link]

Contains oodles of errors, as Zurg's pretty much the only character thoroughly checked. Some crits would be really nice before I continue; I may have imperially messed up for instance someone's legs.

Characters, in case some are unrecognizable:

Mira Nova, Woody Pride, Buzz Lightyear, Jessie, XR (in an android form and very interested in what's behind him), Booster (only a couple of crude lines right now), Evil Emperor Zurg.


BLoSC/Toy Story (c) Disney
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Comments: 86

ChristmasRose16 [2010-09-28 21:56:05 +0000 UTC]

I love Xr's new look. ^^ cyborgs FTW.
Wonderful work, your super-talented!

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zorm In reply to ChristmasRose16 [2010-10-02 19:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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PrayerGirl1 In reply to ??? [2010-09-28 09:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Umm okay wow.

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Lulu-Lomaki In reply to ??? [2010-09-28 08:44:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm shocked, actually!!!! Woody really looks like Woody, Buzz really looks like Buzz, and Jesse..too How in the world did you manage to do it???
Amazing beyond words

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zorm In reply to Lulu-Lomaki [2010-10-03 08:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

It's mostly about paying attention to certain facial features (e.g. Woody: long, thin face, strong nose, often looks calculatingly serious...). Glad to hear it worked.

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Lulu-Lomaki In reply to zorm [2010-10-03 14:07:20 +0000 UTC]

Not only did it work, but it actually worked perfectly )))) I can see all the proportions and features of the cartoon characters in the ones you drew, but they are more alive, as you intended )) may be you should do other cartoon people in that style? ))))

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BobsCookie [2010-09-28 07:53:57 +0000 UTC]

*.* (utterly amazed)

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zorm In reply to BobsCookie [2010-10-02 19:21:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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BobsCookie In reply to zorm [2010-10-03 06:01:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!

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Epantiras [2010-09-27 18:40:01 +0000 UTC]

It's interesting to see those characters drawn in your style my only critique is that Woody seems to have looong lengs, but he *is* the tallest character in the movies, so I guess it's ok.

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zorm In reply to Epantiras [2010-10-01 17:40:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

Woody's legs are purposefully quite long, because I wanted to preserve that certain 'Toy Story look'.

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goddesstears [2010-09-27 05:15:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow this is just so amazing! You always blow my mind! XD I've really got to challenge myself like this and maybe one day I'll be as good as you. lmao

It's all looking great to me. I can't really see a problem with it. And though I do hope to see Warp in it, after reading you're reply to Rocket I'll understand if I don't see him in the finished pic. :3

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zorm In reply to goddesstears [2010-10-01 17:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

I probably should "challenge" myself more often, as my style hasn't really changed much in the past half a decade or so. On the other hand, I don't have such quantities of free time as during the university years any more.

I'm really, really debating with myself about adding Warp. He's one of my favorite characters after all, although I probably will use the messy-haired version I created a while back. XD But hey, if he had an afro during the cadet years, why couldn't he do something of the sort again? XD XD

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goddesstears In reply to zorm [2010-10-01 19:05:49 +0000 UTC]

My art style hasn't changed much either. XD Or gotten any better for that matter, but I keep pushing on when I find the time to draw. lol

Indeed. I could see that happening. XD

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HanameHime In reply to ??? [2010-09-26 19:56:15 +0000 UTC]

I love how you always make these characters so much hotter than they were originally.

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zorm In reply to HanameHime [2010-10-03 08:27:41 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks.

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Garvals In reply to ??? [2010-09-26 13:35:34 +0000 UTC]

What a cool thing coming up!
May i color it when it will be finished?
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May be one think that i can say - is Buzz L.Y.'s bottom. I mean that part with legs and other stuff ( it need a biiiit more correction about pose ) .
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I so love how you draw long hair and clothes. They have something like "mooving effect".

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zorm In reply to Garvals [2010-09-26 17:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

Ooh, I would LOVE to see you color it!

Yeah, Buzz's legs do bother me. However, I'm not really sure how I ought to fix them--any specific tips? There's a bit of perspective involved, so the other leg should look shorter and stand further behind. I redrew them like three times and still can't figure out what's wrong. x(

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Garvals In reply to zorm [2010-09-29 08:34:42 +0000 UTC]

I think both legs should be moved a bit to the left ( they are too "straight" ) .
You se - his weight can make him fall ( to the left ) now.

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zorm In reply to Garvals [2010-10-01 17:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'll see what I can do about it. Thanks!

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Garvals In reply to Garvals [2010-09-29 08:35:03 +0000 UTC]

I don't know how explain it correctly in english...

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jihef03 [2010-09-26 11:41:10 +0000 UTC]

Awesome pic . Are you going to color it ?
...But what the hell Woody has got a stache ?

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zorm In reply to jihef03 [2010-09-26 19:55:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

Woody's 'stache: got added upon a whim, started liking that look so much I'm not removing them. XD

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jihef03 In reply to zorm [2010-10-08 18:39:52 +0000 UTC]

Well, please youself ...But are you sure that a little beard woul looks like better ?

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AzureMosquito In reply to ??? [2010-09-25 22:06:39 +0000 UTC]

This is seriously cool. I always like to help out with critiques when I can but I can't really see anything wrong with this =/ It looks incredibly awesome.

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zorm In reply to AzureMosquito [2010-09-26 10:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks . Well, if there are no bigger errors, maybe I can continue without the necessity to redraw something for the umpteenth time (esp. legs, they're my weak spot).

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larissaXarnhem In reply to ??? [2010-09-25 21:40:08 +0000 UTC]

This is so awesome I can't put it to words.
Excellent job!

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zorm In reply to larissaXarnhem [2010-09-26 10:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Rocket-Jumping-Feind [2010-09-25 20:38:54 +0000 UTC]

So far you anatomy is a-o-kay. And the high difference between Woody, Jessie, Booster and Buzz is just perfect. Due to in BLoSC cartoon, the only other people I could see who could tower Buzz was Booster, XR at times, some Tangeans, Zurg, Warp, and other minor villains who were bipedal.

But I have one question.

Is Warp Darkmatter going to be included in this image?

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zorm In reply to Rocket-Jumping-Feind [2010-09-26 10:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

The height differences are very much purposeful. I wanted to preserve Woody and Jessie's Toy Story proportions in comparison to Buzz.

Warp...I'm not sure. He's a big hunk of an alien and I might have trouble fitting him into the image without breaking up the composition. The only place I could think would be next to Zurg. Warp's one of my favorites, but I probably have to exclude him this time.

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ks-claw In reply to ??? [2010-09-25 20:34:04 +0000 UTC]

I REALLY like how Zurg came out so far. XR.. looks a bit creepy, but then he was never my favourite of the characters.

Other than that , I think this will turn out great when you get more work done on it ^^

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zorm In reply to ks-claw [2010-09-26 10:40:08 +0000 UTC]

Well...I don't think a bit of creepiness will hurt, when it comes to XR. XDD He's one of my favorites in the show, though; I love his sarcastic humor. The normal tin can look didn't fit the style of this image, so I came up with this...grinning thingy.


Thanks ^^

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AjnosFTW In reply to ??? [2010-09-25 20:18:51 +0000 UTC]

It's not getting too many characters, it's getting more enthusiatic, which I. Like.

And I'm sorry, but I'm afraid I can't find any anatomy errors for crit's sake, since I'm not all -that- good at it (especially male muscles)...

However, maybe one tip. I'm sure the characters are going to pop more once it's coloured and so on, but I noticed that it's a bit hard to distinguish, for example, Woody's lineart and Zurg's, maybe the outer lines could be a bit thicker/blacker to make it more clear just how far back Zurg is, and the same about every character in front of another.
Just a thought. Maybe that won't be needed in colour, since only you know how you're gonna do it.

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zorm In reply to AjnosFTW [2010-09-26 10:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm planning to add some kind of fadeout effect into the final lineart piece (I don't know when I have time to color this, probably not during the ongoing year) for the sake of clarity.

Thanks

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AjnosFTW In reply to zorm [2010-09-26 12:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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